Give my heart a break - a RiKara OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: FayeMia

Thank you! I'm glad you can identify with her.

Let's all just hope she shows the same guts and walk out after the whole BM fiasco.

Originally posted by: The_Inner_Voice

Dear FayeMia,

"The true alchemists do not change lead into gold; they change the world into words.

William H. Gass

Thanks for being that very alchemist dear one.

Just to let you know- I live and breathe words.

To encompass the raw emotions of the characters you come to love, with the only weapon a writer possesses- the WORDS, is something that warms my heart in a way I will always fail to explain.

I could feel you bleed through these very words that left a lump in my throat and a knot in my heart, and yet ironically all I could say at the end was "Beautiful". How can something so tragic be beautiful? Maybe because it had this very thin layered icing of something we all love to dwell on- Hope and new beginnings.

As I read your words and breathed them, I lived Omkara... I lived Gauri and by the end of it they had worked their magic...and I realise I will be forever enchanted.

All I wish for you dear is that may you always remain an alchemist-- Changing the world into words.. Thank You

Here' a hug coming your way... to fill in for what my words may have failed to portray

Originally posted by: ArshiKryan

I loved this OS. Will you please try to write some OS about pregnancy track, where OM and gauri comes closer. It's would b great too because u r an amazing writer

Originally posted by: par0ma

Faye, thank you for writing so movingly at a time when Gauri is being subject to such degradation. It's a refuge from the slash and burn of Omkara's callous words. Accusing Gauri not just of cheating on him but also passing off some other man's child as his was for me beyond the pale. To add insult to injury he threatens to cut her out of the child's life. Can there be understanding, friendship much less love after this? I'm wondering how the writers will salvage a real love story for RiKara now and grateful that in this OS you don't try. In a society where patriarchy and misogyny are at its core, it's troubling to me to have this sort of degrading portrayal of the adarsh bahu. Props to you for letting Gauri cut the Oberois out of her life. I for one would love to read more of your angsty work - at least until this terrible indignity to Gauri stops.

Originally posted by: priya_86

Wow this is awesome...👏

I really want this to happen at one point of time...

It has a lovely ending... rather a new beginning for Gauri

I love these plots...excellent 😃

Originally posted by: coolove

This is beautiful
Please we need more
Anything to get us through what we seeing on the show
Gosh some of the writers on the forum do a better job than the "professionals" that write dbo

Originally posted by: FayeMia

Thank you Priya. It's nice that you saw it as a new beginning rather than an ending. Atleast for Gauri.

It's great to hear from you.

Originally posted by: angelSRJ

Omg, it stopped my heart beat.. Its superb.. I want more of this.

Originally posted by: priya_86

You see i am always optimistic

End of Love...doesnt mean end of life... there is much more to life

Gauri can start afresh... always

Originally posted by: FayeMia

Agree Priya.

Let's hope we get something heartwrenchingly beautiful in the show too!