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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Gauri is so innocent ... Omkara is genuine love 😳

She is really attached to Om ... Calling him her friend ... He admires her so much ... Not realizing Mann mein prem rass ki madhur mridang bajne lagi hai 😉 ... The way she is all dabang about ... Agar unko mujhse baat karni hai ... Toh yaha aake kare is about imaginary salute to her ... She is such a sweetheart

Then we have an impulsive Om ... Aaye Haaye ... Trish ... Namak, Laal Mirchi aur Kaajal lekar nazar utaar lo inki ... They are subjective to all Boori nazar waale 😆 ... The way he has saved her ... I am proud of Om 😎 ... And then the emotional scene where she realizes her mistake ... Felt so good. This is a type of characterization of old English classics 😃 which tend to be my personal favorite ... Om has started rediscovering emotions ... Pehle hasa thha ... Aaj roya ... For the way they care for each other in the last scene ... It is a feeler that many a times you don't realize ... But a person holds importance for you ... More than your words its your actions for them ...

Now that he has tried to set boundaries about him being the boss ... I am looking forward to their equation because I love the fact that usse sachme koi fark nahi padta ... Ke om kaun hai ... Uske liye sirf nandi hai 😆 ... It takes a lot to be such a person ... She is a one of her own kind of girl ... Anokha Ajooba 😳

Yaha toh

Chirraiya ke dil mein hulchul Hui

Om ke dil mein shor hua

Gauri Ka dil chor hua

Nandi ka dil uski ore hua ...

Aisi chale jab hawa ishq hua re hua 😳

This feels so much like shat pratishat satyavachan apart from all the actual dhoom tanananana ...

So this pagli deewani has one friend in the city ... What is going to happen when they try and be proffesionals ... I am anticipating some jhamela ghotala at that point ...

Knowing that Ri has started to give consideration to Om as a person ... I am waiting for ishana now ...

Update soon 😃

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AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

awesome Loved it

He is so much affected by her and gauri is confused about her feelings...

gauri is too smart... she is an epitome of happiness

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Tellywoodaddict

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: vrindagupta
Awesome update
I am liking their bond
Omkara can't stand her being afar
Gauri is doubtful of her feelings

Omkara is trying so hard
Not to let her affect him
But she does

Can't wait to read more
Update soon

There is a lot more to keep ...

Keep reading

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Tellywoodaddict

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
awesome Loved it
He is so much affected by her and gauri is confused about her feelings...
gauri is too smart... she is an epitome of happiness

they both are affected oh yes ..

Thanks glad you liked it

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Tellywoodaddict

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_
Gauri is so innocent ... Omkara is genuine love 😳
She is really attached to Om ... Calling him her friend ... He admires her so much ... Not realizing Mann mein prem rass ki madhur mridang bajne lagi hai 😉 ... The way she is all dabang about ... Agar unko mujhse baat karni hai ... Toh yaha aake kare is about imaginary salute to her ... She is such a sweetheart
Then we have an impulsive Om ... Aaye Haaye ... Trish ... Namak, Laal Mirchi aur Kaajal lekar nazar utaar lo inki ... They are subjective to all Boori nazar waale 😆 ... The way he has saved her ... I am proud of Om 😎 ... And then the emotional scene where she realizes her mistake ... Felt so good. This is a type of characterization of old English classics 😃 which tend to be my personal favorite ... Om has started rediscovering emotions ... Pehle hasa thha ... Aaj roya ... For the way they care for each other in the last scene ... It is a feeler that many a times you don't realize ... But a person holds importance for you ... More than your words its your actions for them ...
Now that he has tried to set boundaries about him being the boss ... I am looking forward to their equation because I love the fact that usse sachme koi fark nahi padta ... Ke om kaun hai ... Uske liye sirf nandi hai 😆 ... It takes a lot to be such a person ... She is a one of her own kind of girl ... Anokha Ajooba 😳
Yaha toh
Chirraiya ke dil mein hulchul Hui
Om ke dil mein shor hua
Gauri Ka dil chor hua
Nandi ka dil uski ore hua ...
Aisi chale jab hawa ishq hua re hua 😳
This feels so much like shat pratishat satyavachan apart from all the actual dhoom tanananana ...
So this pagli deewani has one friend in the city ... What is going to happen when they try and be proffesionals ... I am anticipating some jhamela ghotala at that point ...
Knowing that Ri has started to give consideration to Om as a person ... I am waiting for ishana now ...
Update soon 😃

yeh to hona hi Tha

Ishaba bgi ayegi ..inhe pehle thora close to an do ...she will definitely come up in the later chaps .. glad you are liking it till now ..I hope you will like it later also

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Tellywoodaddict

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Chapter 4

Life won't give you everything easily.I tried finding her everywhere and fate she ended up in my own office.I used to regret not even asking her name that day.

But Now I know I want to know everything about her.

Mujhe to Sirf naam Janna Tha apne to Pura pata de Diya Gauri ke Shankar ji.

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I know this is wrong but I need to meet her now.Slowly and steadily I went up to her room without letting the warden.(what am I doing ?)

Kya darwaza khula Hai pagal Hai yeh larki ...I went inside .She had her back turning towards me.

Mujhe Jana CHAHIYE aise kaise I can enter someone's room .

I was just about to leave when

"Ahhh" Gauri screamed

What? did the lights just go off.

"Arey kitna chillaogi..." I shut her. Mouth with my hand

"Chill this is ok ...warden Bahar hi Hai ..unhe pata chal Jayega "

"Umm ummm" she struggled to talk.

"Oh I am so sorry ..I just forget"

"That's fine ...rum yaha Kya Kar rahe ho ?!"

*Knock knock*

"Gauri are you fine ...why were you screaming ...open the door"The warden screamed from the other side of the door .

Phasa mein ...wapas Jane Wala Tha ab upar jaunga

"Shut up aisi baat nahi karte ..There are many people who care about you.. anyways go hide behind the doors..mein warden ko sambhalti Hun .." she assured

"Gauri you fine ? Open the door "the warden kept on speaking until she opened the door.

"Yes ma'am I am fine... actually in my washroom and the lights went off ..so .."

"Fine ..you take this emergency lights...I will come back in sometime ...and don't screamed like this ...be careful ..and take care..."

"Sorry ma'am "

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I shut the door and this guy slammed me against the wall.

"So are you one of them " he asked

"What one of them?" I asked confusingly

"Who care about me "

"Yes ..no ...I mean I don't even know you .."I stammered

"Then why did you save me from the warden "he smirked

"Woh kyunki you are my friend aur tum it karib kyun a rahe ho ..I guess you have forgotten about your current situation.

"I am sorry I should leave "

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I was just about to go from the door when gauri cried

"Are stop ..warden Bahar hi Hai tum phas jaoge "

"To phir mein kaise jaun ?

"Khirki se ? " She replied smartly

"Are you mad ..agar mein gir Gaya to "

"Mr ..yeh first floor Hai ...chill I was just kidding ..I have a ladder wait "

"Hey that'she nice ..phir so mein Roz a sakta Hun you have everything ready "

"What no need ..yeh to subha electrician bhul gaya ..he will take it tomorrow"

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I just turned to bring the ladder when I heard a dhmammm.

As I turned on wasn't there ..

The window was open and I ran towards it ...

"Hey tum thik to ho...lagi toh nahi.."

"Nahi I am fine I am Omakara Singh Oberoi ..waise agar mujhe lagti to Kya tum mujhe medicine lagati ?"he said with a smirk

"Nahiii...pagal kahike " I was about to shut the window

"Arey wait ..."

"What ? Ab Kya hua "

" I like it when you call me pagal (he said with a cute smile )

Goodnight pagli ..

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Mujhe Kya ho Raha Hai yaar

...I was never like this Matlab this is not the OSO people think me to be ...this girl is changing me ..nahi I need to have control on myself ..

She is my friend...thats it

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Shankar ji yeah om to bara hi iresistable hota ja Raha Hai...I need to control my emotionad ...agar aise harkate karega to mein Sach mein pagal ho jaungi ...

He's my friend that's it ...

Edited by Tellywoodaddict - 8 years ago

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

I read it ... Comment ti hoon 😳

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Trish 🤗 I love you

Yeh Rikara toh kaise chulbule bulbule hai ... Bilkul Rabdi jalebi ki tarah sweet ...

Omie kitna bechain ho raha hai ... Gauri KO ek nazar bhar dekhne ke liye that he risks into her hostel ... Loveria se grasit hone ka ... Lakshan no. One 😆 ...

Ri aur Kara ek Kamre mein band ho ... Aur light chali jaaye ... I was feeling like Bhagwaan tumhe lambi umar de Trish ... To create such awkward and close moments

Phir jab warden aayi naa tab mujhe sachme laga aaj toh raja Om ka band Baja Om ho jaaega ... Par chirraiya ne bacha liya ...

Kaise bachhe bann Gaye dono argue karte karte ... Aise jaao ... Waise jaao yaha se nahi ... Waha se jaao ... Main itna hasi hoon naa by god ... Gujarati maa kahiye toh banneu jhapta aj nathi 😆

And then Omkara ji shuru ho Gaye ... Actually giving her ideas a thought so that he can come to meet her again ... Aap toh thode badmaash ho Om ji ...

And ultimately kya khatron ke khiladi wala kaam kiya hai .. Direct window se jump 😆 bada daringbaaz hai hero ...

You know his character sketch gives major #CrushGoals

"We Are Just Friends!" I say dono rehne hi do aur Om beta ... Dadi ki baat yaad rakho ... "SACH MEIN DHAL JAATE HAI KISSE ... DIL SE JUD JAANE KE BAAD ... ISHQ PE HOGA YAKEEN ... ISHQ HO JAANE KE BAAD" ...

Chngaari dono taraf bhadki hai lekin ek hai Jo dil mein jazbaat shaamil nahi kar raha aur doosra Jo nazro se ... Jazbaat zaahir nahi kar raha ... Ohh Zaalima

One free advice for Gauri is don't even try ... OSO ko resist Karna mushkil hi nahi naa mumkin hai 😉 hum apne anubhav se bata rahe hai ...

Awaiting more of paagal and pagli ki kahani Writer Trish ki zubaani ...

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rikara94

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

2 updates kr bhi di thi aapne😲

abhi abhi read ki maine

both updates were lovely and funny😉

pta hai kitni muskhil se hasi rok ke padh payi main

they both are very funny han

pagal chirota aur pagli chirraiya😉😉

lagta hi nahi yeh boss or employee hai..haha

amazing updates dear..kuch alag hi feeling ayi read krke

its also funny when he said i am oso and i am fine..

they both want to control their emotions..

but yeh ishaq aisi hi cheej hai rikara..aage aage dekho hota hai kya

and wardn e gauri ko aalisha kyu kha?

update jldi jldi i am waiting😉

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Tellywoodaddict

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: rikara94
2 updates kr bhi di thi aapne😲
abhi abhi read ki maine
both updates were lovely and funny😉
pta hai kitni muskhil se hasi rok ke padh payi main
they both are very funny han
pagal chirota aur pagli chirraiya😉😉
lagta hi nahi yeh boss or employee hai..haha
amazing updates dear..kuch alag hi feeling ayi read krke
its also funny when he said i am oso and i am fine..
they both want to control their emotions..
but yeh ishaq aisi hi cheej hai rikara..aage aage dekho hota hai kya
and wardn e gauri ko aalisha kyu kha?
update jldi jldi i am waiting😉

I was talking to my friend while writing this update ended up writing g her name ...yeah ..I updated ...but u read it right ...so happy could make you smile ...hope you like the other chapters too

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