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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_

God ... I love RiKara in such a way ... They way they met was so unusual and strange 😳 ... And now Gauri is his employee ... Wah kya ladki hai ... Bilkul patakha 😆 ... She is so cute ... You have kept her character sketch so relatable for any college pass out ... The way she gets so casual with Om is a treat to read 😆 ... She does not even realize ke woh boss hai uska 🤣 then ... Mujhe sir ke pass nahi Jana 😆 and ultimate ... Main aapse baat nahi karungi 😆 ... She is so naive and innocent ... I know for a fact that Ri and Kara ki life aur character mein zameen aasmaan ka fark hone wala hai ... He being the sadu nakchada khadoos boss 😆 and she thinking that he made her Bali ka bakra 😆 these two are going to have such a good time and I think half of the time ... This girl is not going to samjhofy his advances ... Bholi bhaali hai 😳 ... Coming to Om ... He has admiration for her ... Waah waah kya baat hai ... Both of them and beginning of something like an office romance ... Sone pe suhaga

I wonder what has happened to ishana ???
And for Om there are a lot of surprises ... Knowing that usse hasi aayi ... 😆
This is one aspect very different for the intense RiKara ... I loved this composition and especially Gauri's character ... She is such a girl of today ... With all the old school charm ... The way she befriends Omkara and distracts him from negativity ... These kind of people are very special ... And she does not know ... How important she is for Om ... I love the flow of the story ... I love both of them but Gauri just a little bit more ... Because she has relatable traces 😳
This is something very different ... Thank you for composing this ... Looking forward to Gauri's first day in office 😉

yeah yeah...very lovely plot
very interesting story
i read both update in one go
i am very happy during and after reading this
imagine boss and employee 's love track
mujhe hassi aa gyi😉
yar itn bhi khadoos nahi hai omkara
but han she is patakha i agrree with you
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22
very interesting plot dear
very nice ss
love each and everything in your story
love their first meeting without knowing each other they spend lovely moments
and poor om name hi nahi poocha😉
and they met again as a boos and employe
wow lovely track
haha main aapse baat nahi karne wali loved this dailogue😆
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_

I want to tell you that your update has made my morning good ... Thinking about your kind of RiKara I have been smiling so much that now my skin of cheek bones is paining 😆 ... I know I am like bit crazy but aisa office angle kisine socha hi nahi ... Continue soon ... Till then I am in RiKara land 😉

Aww that means a lot ...like a lot ..and your comment has made my morning nice ...I so hope you like the other updates ..and guess what I am more crazier than you
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome Loved it yar...

so now after one year rikara meet again...
but om changed so much...
I really loved this gauri... she is too smart...

I know right thank you so much
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelSRJ

Awww.. It was so cute.. I m loving this rikara.. They r so sweet!!! Plz plz update soon.

thank you and I will update soon ish
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: pt311288

ishana ka kya hua
nice update update next part soon

Ishana ka Kuch nahi huya she will come time to time when needed
I'll update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: rikara94

very interesting plot dear

very nice ss
love each and everything in your story
love their first meeting without knowing each other they spend lovely moments
and poor om name hi nahi poocha😉
and they met again as a boos and employe
wow lovely track
haha main aapse baat nahi karne wali loved this dailogue😆
waiting for the next part

thank you so much for the comment
Glad you liked it
I hope you will like the updates too
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 3

Ajj Mera office mein pehla din Tha..accha office Hai ...sare us Nadi se bohot darte Hai matlab
Ajeeb chirote Hai yaar ...yeh toh kabhi Bolta Hai mein boss Hun kabhi dost kabhi daat ta Hai kabhi sorry Bolta Hai ...mein to nahi baat karungi usse ...boss apne Ghar par...aise mere sath kabhi Kisi ne baat nahi Kiya aur phir Kiya toh Kiya phir sorry bolkar modest ban Raha Hai...

Par ajj jo usne kiya ...i swear mein to fan ho Gyi uski ..Matlab Banda intense to tha hi dil ka bhi accha Hai yaar

Okay par uski thori zyada hi tariff nahi ho Gyi ? Jatadhari Hippie kahika
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Early that Morning
Nisha Subha se paanch baar bol chooka Hun send gauri to my cabin

"Unhe bhi bol do agar unhe baat karni Hai to khud aye I m not in the mood to talk " she said bluntly

"Gauri don't forget I am your boss"

"I am sorry...Par mein nahi a Sakti mujhe bohot Kam Hai ..." she screamed over the call

I couldn't take this anymore.This girl was getting upon my head.
What the hell is happening with me?This girl is not getting out of my head.It's not that I haven't seen girls in my life.I have always been among girls.So to be more specific I never felt something like this before.I have seen beautiful girls...oh yes.But this girl was different.She was an Charismatic Beauty.She had some sort of magic in her eyes.Her face was so innocent.Indeed she was different.She was special.But This Can't be omkara .. Am I mentally admiring her ...nahiii

*After 5 mins*

I was really getting impatient and therefore I decided I will only go and and... whatever..I am the boss

What I see next blows my mind Gauri madam was happily conversing with Neha ..but she can't come to my cabin.
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Suddenly I felt something or to be more specific somebody's hand around my waist.I turned and saw it to be Om.He took me to his cabin without my permission.This really pissed me off.

*In his cabin *

'How could u do this?Are you mad? How can you just come and hold me like that.As far as I remember you never even noticed me properly and now you come so close that its getting difficult to resist.Aur mujhe apne cabin mein lane ke liye tum itna gir jaoge ?' I bursted out.

'What ?'he asked confusingly

'Anyways y I'm telling all this to you..how the hell do you care how a girl feels when something like this happens. ?'I replied

He pushed me towards the wall resting his arms on the wall around me

'Shut up...how do you speak so much ?
First of all your dress was torn and some jerks were looking onto you thats the reason I did all this and secondly you say I don't care about you after all this.' Saying this he left teary eyed.

His words hurt me like swords.I realized that yeah he cared about me..wow!
So at last I had a real friend in this new city.
I ran behind him...
He was sitting in a bench alone .I took the seat beside him.

'Angry?'I asked
'Please leave' he replied
'Okh!I m really sorry ' I said with a pout
'Gauri I request please leave I'm really pissed off'
Om I'm really very sorry..I can even do sit ups for you ..1...2..'
'Hey...stop..don't do all this .I m not angry on you'
'You Sure?'
'Hmm'
Absolutely sure ?
Yeah...
Should I lock ur statement as your final answer Mr Oberoi ?
She stares at me and then we both start laughing.
'But I need a favor from you she asked
'Yeah tell me...'
'Be my...'
'Gauri not again...I m leaving'

Arey Puri baat to sun lo ...Be my partner again not this kharoos Singh Oberoi

'Even if you would not have asked I would have become your partner'
Really?she asked
Realllyyy!
'Then lets go miss Sharma 'he said me while giving me his hand .

We went hand in hand.

"Waise yaad rakhna I am your boss here and you are my employee ..and aise tumhe Jo bolna Hai you can do but office mein nahi .. because if start behaving like this then everyone will and that's not gonna be right ...one more thing I am not very easy to impress type in the office so u have to work hard and I may scold you if you do something wrong so don't get me wrong at that point of time ..."

"Arey bas ho gaya ki aur bhi Hai...I know you are a nandi in your office .. "

"Nandi ?!" He raised his eyebrows ...

"Are woh mein apko Baad mein samjha dungi ...your clients must be waiting ...and thora strict hoke andar Jana tum...rote hue Bahar aye the "

"Mein rota nahi Hun miss Sharma "

"Haa Kuch bhi mein to andhi Hun..."

"Ms Sharma"
"It's Gauri for you ...now leave "

"Accha accha aise mat Dekho Abhi Gusse seeha joege I meant that clients are waiting you should leave "
"Sorry mein to bhul hi gaya Tha boss Kon Hai ..."
"It's okay "
"What okay ..Jao andar Jao ..Kam Karo ..."

"Okay boss ...Nandi ".

"Arey wait .."

"Ab Kya hua a boss .."

"Go buy a dress for yourself ...yeh lo paise"

"Nahi om I'll manage "
"This my order gauri and tension mat lo tumhari salary se Kat lunga ..now go aur suno car se Jao auto mein aise mat Jana ..driver tumhe lekar Jayega " "

"Thank you so much Jatadhari Hippie "

"Tum ruko ..mein dekhta hu tumhe .."

"Dekh Lena ...bye "
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Kya pagal larki Hai yeah ...Iske saath reh reh Kar mein pagal ho jaunga ...Par Jo bhi Hai Bohot Sahi Hai ...


Edited by Tellywoodaddict - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
Guys new chapter updated read on
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update
I am liking their bond
Omkara can't stand her being afar
Gauri is doubtful of her feelings

Omkara is trying so hard
Not to let her affect him
But she does

Can't wait to read more
Update soon

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