Rikara SS -Weakness Chapter 8 Page 13 (1/7)

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One weakness is enough and love is the deadliest.

Isn't just strange how love makes the weakest person strongest and the strongest person weak.?

"Om you know what yeah Jo feeling Hai it changes everything...tu dekh Raha Hai how anika's love has changed me completely..here I Shivay Singh Oberoi is giving you lectures about love."

"Ishq sirf ek sauda Hai..."

"But is saude mein bhi apna hi ek Maza Hai." Said Shivay

"You mean perfect shadi , perfect pyar Jo Sirf kahaniyo mein milta Hai ?!
Tune dekha nahi ajj phirse Me.Oberoi ne phirse Meri maa ke sath..."

"You know what om you need to spend some alone time ...go outside ..."

"Maybe Yes..."

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Shanti Spot

Whenever I am down I come here and sit but today even the nature was playing games with me.Suddenly it started getting darker.But I seemed to be caring the least.It's been an hour but still I was not getting the Shanti .

Someone just came and sat beside me ..must be ishana only she knows about this place.

'So atlast you have completed your dance practice...you have completely forgotten about me right' I bursted without even seeing at her.
As I turned my face towards her I realized that it wasn't Ishana.

'No I haven't even started my dance practice and I have not forgotten you too.' She said with a cute smile.

'Sorry ...I actually thought it to be someone else.'I replied

'Yeah..I can understand ,if I'm not wrong your girlfriend right ? She smirked

'No best friend !'

"Oh Sorry ..my bad..'she smirked again .

'Can I tell you something only if you don't mind?she asked

'Yeah sure ...but I am really not in the mood to Talk" I replied ( did I sound rude ..oh no )
You sure ?' SHe confirmed

'Yeah ..'. I said with a fake smile

'When I saw you I thought you must be a very cool person but I was wrong I guess ' she said

'Why' I asked out of curiosity

" Because the coolest person never spoils their mood because of other people, they never sit like this "alone" when all his friends are having fun .that to without him' she said with cute smile
(SHe's so cute )
'That's the point ...I don't want to disturb them .'

"No offense but why the hell would you change yourself because of someone.Caring for others is fine ...but not too much that it starts affecting you in return.' she retorted

'See would really love you to smile because it will be one of the best things right now' sHe added

'Excuse me'I said

'See fortunately or unfortunately your my partner.So lets join hands because I am here to dance and enjoy.' SHe made a puppy face.

"Partner?!"

"Hey shankarji ..see why would I sit here with you like this when I don't even know you... my friends are having fun but I was just getting bored there ..so now you are my friend partner."

'I can understand but I m really not in the mood to dance that to when its about to rain so...sorry.'I replied

'That's absolutely right but I still have a request.'he said

'What'I interrogated

'Just trust me for once and come with me' she gave me her hand.

'Shall we?' She asked me
I smiled as I held her hand .
Everything seemed perfect it was raining and we kept on dancing...It felt great..after talking to her and dancing with her I realized that she was right ..I should just cheer up and think less maybe that's how life works .. getting happiness works ..

So friends...partner ?' SHe asked
'Off course partner' I replied

Frankly speaking it really feels good when someone understands you,cares for you..not only when you're happy but also when you're sad.And here this girl doesn't even know me nor do I know her but still there is something which are making things look perfect..

We kept on dancing and I didn't realize that I stepped on mud ..I was about to fall when she held my hand.
'Don't leave my hand'I requested
'Never' was her reply

She pulled me up ..ours eyes locked until we realized about our position..the rain had already stopped.

'I think I should leave ..it was really nice meeting you' I said
'Same here..bye "she replied
'Bye'

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I came back home and I couldn't believe how much better I was feeling ..thanks to ...
Shit ..meine to usse uska naam hi nahi pucha

"Kya hua O bare khush lag rahe ho..

...aur tu bheeg kaise Gaya " Shivru interrogated

"Kuch nahi ru tu ja so ja ...and Shivay it's nothing mein apne kamre mein ja Raha Hun ..mujhe ek sculpture complete karna Hai .."I said
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"Iss Kya hua subah to bohot Gusse mein Tha jab nikla ab smile Dekho iski "
"Zaroor ishu di need Kuch Kiya hoga"

I could hear them conversing...


...Kash I could talk to her once again ...just one one more time .. maybe I could thank her and know her name ..

Like she was one of a kind..

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Posted: 8 years ago
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thank you !
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Beautifully written dear :) Loved it
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Nice concept
First meet was unique
Omkara was so lost in the moment
Now he regrets not asking her name

Wonder how will they meet again
Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
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Wow it was really cute.. BTW its ss na, waiting for next part. Pls write more.
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Ooh... such an interesting start!
I already love your Gauri... she's such fun! Chatting up strangers and dancing in the rain

Can't wait to read more!
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Originally posted by: Ultimatevikku7

Beautifully written dear :) Loved it

thank you so much
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glad you did
Thanks
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Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Nice concept

First meet was unique
Omkara was so lost in the moment
Now he regrets not asking her name

Wonder how will they meet again
Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon

thank you so much
Yes omkara just list in the moment
Well they will meet soon or not that soon maybe for that you have to read on .
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Originally posted by: angelSRJ

Wow it was really cute.. BTW its ss na, waiting for next part. Pls write more.

yes it is a ss ..and therefore is definitely more coming up soon

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