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farinaks

@farinaks

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Beautiful... Deep...painful..nd emotional
Tq fr pm

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Shanaya (shona)

@Shonasyl

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Beautiful and intense Story❤️. Thanks for sharing!

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Gopika

@itsgops3010

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Beautiful n intense shot... N the song is one of my favorite... It just describes their situation so we... Loved it😊

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Khidki

@Khidki

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: LoveToWrite
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Unres

Okay so I did read this yesterday itself but due to some emergency I had to go so couldn't reply here.
This was deep, Anni🤔 Way too deeper than how you prefer to write. [Humor I mean😆 And oh the romance not to miss😳]
I love the first para where you brought Moon comparison. His moon... Ahaha, that sounds romantic, doesn't that?
The realization is still not there but agony, surely is. Beautifully crafted one.

Why cant he just understand her sham?

OS was amazing.

Love
-Harshada

Well I try as much as possible to stay away from depths..😆

But kahin naa kahin thoda sa depth aa hi jaata hai😆

Oh Yes The Sun And Moon..! My Favorite Couple, they are😳

Thank You Rasna🤗

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Archie

@_SilverLining_

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

One of the most beautiful pieces I have read on the separation track, and it features a scene I want to see in the show too. I love how they seek each other out and find peace in each other despite not being together. Thank you so much Anni for writing this, it gives me peace to read it too!

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hiya

@coolhi1988

Achiever

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

This was so emotional...

Feeling Shivika ka pain...

Very well written

Thanks 4 pm

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Hey Annii, 😊
U r having fever? 😲 How r u now dear?? Plzz take rest n take care of urself! 🤗
This was such n emotional n heart touching OS! 😭 😳 Loved it so much! 😃 Special mention to that part where both were sitting just behind each other, with just a tree as a partition n could feel each other's presence n was feeling that their restless heart was calming down, but still not ready to accept it! Lovely! ❤️ Thanks for the pm dear. 😃
With love,
Aheli.