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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow, it was seriously a Happy reading. A constant smile was there on my face while reading it. Its too sweet and lovely, light hearted and made my mood better. Great job. Pls wrote more like this.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I just love long os s it's always a treat to read them.. It was amazing.. Do u have any idea of continuing this or just going to leave it as an os. Would love to read more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dear Lazy, needless to say I have become an ardent fan of yours.
I am stalking your FF index and reading them till midnight.
This OS was simply cool one. All scenes were good but my favourite was Rikara watching horror movie together and Om's antics to scare Gauri
Waiting for more

Kash
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey lazy
Loving ur stories u r cuming with different one !
This one was simple with hotness.
Now jaldi update krna .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It was just fantastic. I was literally smiling laughing through out this fic. It was sooo damn romantic and cute. I just wished that it would never end and i would just keep reading lost...

P.s please don't stop. Write more on Rikara please its a request coz I'm ur fan now 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome Loved it yar...
poor jhanvi did she know wats happening behind her back...she missed seeing everything and she takes her blush as something else...There was a flow in your story...a simple yet beautiful story
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I don't think Jhanvi has ever made me laugh so much 🤣

She thinks they barely talk... When in reality 😳

Can you please write an epilogue for this... Their wedding or Jhanvi finally finding out that they actually get along much better than she thinks they do 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: KrazyKripzy

This is sooo good!!! thank you so much dear😛😛I love ur version of RiKara om makes me go all☺️ hehehe so glad u like them😳poor Jhanvi, doesn't know wat is happening behind her back🤣 hehehehe poor Jhanvi😆loved it, update soon plz no hun... there is no continuation.. it was just a One Shot... if I write more, then it would be their consummation and for this couple, it is going to be violent🤣



Originally posted by: Rumadiv

Dear kuku, Hey Divya

Cant explain how happiee am reading your ss. I think you have lots of ideas running in your mind. hehehehe... attimes, it just goes crazy😳😆Hope you write more. Just now read this and the prologue of "Just Married ". Waiting for next updates of all your ss. thank you so much dear... hope u will enjoy that too😛

With love,
Divya :-) love ya too😛



Originally posted by: vrindagupta

I just love Jhanvi

With Caps LOVE HAHAHHAA
She is trying so hard to get them together
Leaving them alone
Planning dinner dates
Sending the together for book shopping only if she knew that they should be kept apart😆

But she always misses to see them together
Be it on couch
Or during movie
Or the time she came home
Gauri blushing she took in different sense hehehehe imagine her condition if she realize what was really happening?😆

She should just get them married
This way Omkara's wish will also be fulfilled
And jhanvi's too
I also want Jhanvi to know
That all her efforts Didn't go to waste that too before announcing their marriage hehehehe she will have a heart attack😃

Jhanvi n Tej are so caring
They love Gauri like their own daughter
Tej was consoling Gauri
But ended up facing his son's anger Omkara is too protective of her😆

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon sorry hun... that story ended😳

Plz one more
Where jhanvi realise their love
And Rikara marriage their first night would be violent and I can't write all that hun☺️



Originally posted by: pt311288

I m 😳 hehehehe

Rikara are trying to pretend damn innocent😆 hahahaha in a way they are and in a way they are not😉😆😆
poor tejvi in malayalam we call them shashi.. i have no idea how to explain it to u😆😆😆
loved it alot👏 so glad u loved it dear... thank you😛



Originally posted by: A-Musing-Me

Man I love jahnvi .. how cute is she 🤣 hehehehe she is too adorable, innocent and gullible how smooth is this story of yours .. flowy n easy.. someone go tell cvs that shows can be run like this n don't need irritating twists n never ending loops.. anyway why fret over spilt milk..awww that is so sweet hun... thank you so much dear😛 I loved this take ..so glad u loved it😛 Han alternate universe hai else I can't see Tejkara or tejvi like this ever yeah... .. but I love it alright.. n then the way RiKara progress is smooth as silk.. delicious.. n funny too.. god bless those romances .. they helped a lothehehehe... so glad, u liked this kind of silent romance😛 .. hehe.. varna Omkara ko toh pata hi Nahi chalta .. hehehehehe can't wait to see what happens next.. no hun... the story is over... i can't write more😆


N you are on a roll n m delighted .. thanks so much.. loving all your RiKaras .. what range n what varied takes.. thanks again thank you so much for reading them and commenting hun... i hope you would continue to like my stories😛



Originally posted by: loveangel94

I love love this ❤️thank you so much dear😛

Please keep writing more In Shaa Allah, will try to write more😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetcherry95

I m quiet impressed with your writing skills thank you so much dear😛😛

it's beautiful i like this version of story so glad u liked this version😛😛
poor jhanvi she have no idea what is going on ! none at all🤣



Originally posted by: andy1245

Plz cont soon its amazing i waiting to read more thank you dear... but this story i over😳



Originally posted by: angelSRJ

Wow, it was seriously a Happy reading. A constant smile was there on my face while reading it. Its too sweet and lovely, light hearted and made my mood better. Great job. awww thank you so much dear😛 so glad u enjoyed reading this story😃Pls wrote more like this. will try to do... please do check out my index and if u want me to post any of my old stories, then i will post it here.



Originally posted by: magss24

I just love long os s it's always a treat to read them.. and mine tends to get pretty long all the time☺️ It was amazing.. thank you so much dear😃Do u have any idea of continuing this or just going to leave it as an os. Would love to read more no hun, the story ended... i don't know how to write more as their consummation would be violent😆😆😆



Originally posted by: KashishJ

Dear Lazy, needless to say I have become an ardent fan of yours. awww (not the rich girl seeing puppy wala awww... Shivaay wala awww😆)

I am stalking your FF index and reading them till midnight. oh my☺️... please do leave ur comments dear😳
This OS was simply cool one. All scenes were good but my favourite was Rikara watching horror movie together and Om's antics to scare Gauri hehehehe it was fun writing that scene... as it brought back childhood memories of watching horror movies😆😆
Waiting for more will try to post more stories hun

Kash



Originally posted by: Rati0992

Hey lazy Hello Rati😛
Loving ur stories u r cuming with different one ! thank you dear...
This one was simple with hotness. hehehehehe thanx☺️
Now jaldi update krna no hun.. the story ended😳 .



Originally posted by: sumaiya10

It was just fantastic. I was literally smiling laughing through out this fic. It was sooo damn romantic and cute. I just wished that it would never end and i would just keep reading lost...awww thank you so much dear... so glad u enjoyed this story😳😳😳

P.s please don't stop. Write more on Rikara please its a request coz I'm ur fan now 😳 that is so sweet hun... will try to write more... pls do check out my index... if u want me to post any particular stories here, then i'll do it😛



Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome Loved it yar... thank you so much dear😛... so glad u loved it😛

poor jhanvi did she know wats happening behind her back...she missed seeing everything and she takes her blush as something else yeah😆😆😆 poor blind Jhanvi😆😆...There was a flow in your story...a simple yet beautiful story aww thank you😛



Originally posted by: falala333

I don't think Jhanvi has ever made me laugh so much 🤣 hehehhe so glad u enjoyed her parts😃

She thinks they barely talk... When in reality 😳 HAHAHAHAAHA she will faint if she knew their reality😆😆😆

Can you please write an epilogue for this... Their wedding or Jhanvi finally finding out that they actually get along much better than she thinks they do 😆 hahahahaha their first night would be a little violent, don't you think? specially when G is making O wait😆... i don't know, if i have the caliber to write such scenes😆😆😆

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Woman, you got me reading it in a go, in between my work. It was so innocent and yet so hot. Well, well... Thank you for jotting down this piece. ❤️

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