RiKara FF : Just Married : Part 14 : Page 02 : 11.11.17 - Page 8

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

loved this story

hehe gauri and serial prem

loved it

thank you so much dear...
hehehe Gauri and her serial prem will drive Om mad one day😆😆😆

Originally posted by: lizzy110

Update soon pls

will update in a bit😛

Originally posted by: varshajoshi17

Superb update di

Loved it

thank you hun😛

Originally posted by: DeewaniMastaani

Damn! They are so adorable! I just... can't wait for their *milan*!

thank you so much dear... it will happen in 2-3 updates i think😆

Originally posted by: alisha789

Pls update

will update in a bit... pls do leave ur feedback too hun

Originally posted by: illa8

cant wait till his family knows waiting buddy =)

it is going to be explosive😉

They way u included DBO story in this chapter... 😆 Man.. That was hilarious..!! I love reading all ur works.. N let me tell you this one's my favourite among your FFs. And I can't differentiate b/w the OS's u have posted here because they simply take me to another world!! Please post more of ur works here.. Please!!!

Wow once again

Just read part 7. Really amazing chapter it was! Loved it. I laughed so much where you added the DBO present story part along with the bashing on IF and all. That was too good. 😆

I have 2 doubts...why is Om hesitating to take their relationship forward knowing that Gauri also wants that. And why did he let Swetty apply color on his face, not fair, he promised Gauri that they wud apply color first on each other. Friend u give marvelous updates👏

i guess Omkara already applied color on Gauri while she was sleeping but eagerly waiting for your next update

Arey yaar, yen kya naya raita pehal Gaya omki ki life mein...

It was a awesome update like always.

Om's description about his own role in serial was hilarious 😆 their relationship is really very beautifully described with slow pace.

I loved how he cared for her, his concern her trust and believe on him made me awww

Last part was shocking 😲
Why did that sweaty put colour on om first. Pata nai kaunse chikni baato mai phasa liya Omkie shomkie ko. Chantu mai kahi ki 😡

P.s sorry for late review. Update soonishh

Originally posted by: sreekailas

They way u included DBO story in this chapter... 😆 Man.. That was hilarious..!!hehehhe glad u enjoyed that.. I did contemplate on using Shivika story, as some were missing Shivaay in this story I love reading all ur works.. N let me tell you this one's my favourite among your FFs. thank you so much dear.. so glad u like this storyAnd I can't differentiate b/w the OS's u have posted here because they simply take me to another world!! Please post more of ur works here.. Please!!!awww thank you so much dear... so glad u like them... In Shaa Allah will try to post more

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid

Nice update 👍🏼

thank you so much dear😛

Originally posted by: whity.007

Oh lazy thank you so much

For dedicating this wonderful chapter to me

Wow once again

Awesome chapter👏

But at last you make me cry😭

Poor gouri watching om svety holy celebrations😭

thank you so very much dear... so glad u liked this part... hehehe holi celebrations will continue in the next part😉

Originally posted by: Naina280599

Just read part 7. Really amazing chapter it was! Loved it. I laughed so much where you added the DBO present story part along with the bashing on IF and all. That was too good. 😆 hahahahaha so glad u enjoyed tht... i did hesitate to add tht coz now their equation had changed...

The kind of bonding Rikara have now is too cute. Loved that. Gauri is so cute. Poor soul saw Om with Svetlana. I can't wait to read what happens next so post the next chapter as soon as possible pleaseee. This is actually a cliffhanger. I can't wait for Gauri's reaction. Post soonish!!! hahahaha will post it soon hun.. glad u r liking RiKara in this.

Originally posted by: mailanchi

I have 2 doubts...why is Om hesitating to take their relationship forward knowing that Gauri also wants that. it will be explained soon hun😉 maybe 2 parts And why did he let Swetty apply color on his face, not fair, he promised Gauri that they wud apply color first on each other. Ah! have faith hun😉😆Friend u give marvelous updates👏thank you so much dear😛

Originally posted by: eishe10

Awesome update😊

thank you so much dear😛

Originally posted by: pt311288

i guess Omkara already applied color on Gauri while she was sleeping but eagerly waiting for your next update

😉

Originally posted by: varshajoshi17

Superb update dear

Loved it

thank you so much dear😛

Originally posted by: illa8

loved it =)

thank you😛

Originally posted by: pt311288

If part was good

thank you😃