RiKara FF : Just Married : Part 14 : Page 02 : 11.11.17 - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: manopriya24

Arey yaar, yen kya naya raita pehal Gaya omki ki life mein...

Mujhe gauri ko bohut fikhar horahi ye.. mein jaanti hun ki om jo kuch bhi karenge jaroor uski peeche koi wajah hogi..
yes hun.. Om is too loyal to Gauri
Agar gauri om ko galat samajthenge toh Kya hoga...
Mujhe itni fikkar issilye horahi he kyunki mein iss story ko bohut chaathi hun or rikara ko bhi... ye mera favourite ss Hain...
Please no misunderstandings, bcos I cant see them in pain...
aww thank you dear... yup, Gauri will misunderstand... but they do talk and sort it out quickly
Update Soon.. . Waiting for the next part... will update in a bit.



Originally posted by: sumaiya10

It was a awesome update like always. thank you so muxh hun

Om's description about his own role in serial was hilarious 😆 their relationship is really very beautifully described with slow pace. hahahaha.. i wrote tht part when i was pissed at Madhubala story line... so had o change it with RiKara😉😆

I loved how he cared for her, his concern her trust and believe on him made me awww
yeah.. they have pretty strong bond😛

Last part was shocking 😲 hehehe
Why did that sweaty put colour on om first. Pata nai kaunse chikni baato mai phasa liya Omkie shomkie ko. Chantu mai kahi ki 😡
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA... u r so funny hun😆

P.s sorry for late review. no worries hun... happy tht u gave ur feedback😛 Update soonishh updating in a bit

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Posted: 8 years ago
#82
Loving the innocent gauri and her love for serials .
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83
Superb update di
Gauri is too filmy
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84
Wow😆
So cute with bhang effect🤣
Thanks to holi😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
Aw I loved last part it was lovely
😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
Dear kuku,

First of all super update. Om and Ri having nice bonding and a strong understanding. Om getting the care always he wanted and Ri being happiee for getting such a nice and caring husband. The serial scene was nicely explained. I guess You had just vented out the frustration of how the dil bole oberoi serial went and fans got upset with how Om treated Ri. And just apologizing as if nothing happened. Ri regretting the decision of making him watch the serial was nicely expressed.

Then Ri misunderstanding Om for not keeping the promise. Then Ri knowing the truth and both confessing was beautiful. The last scene was very funny Ri assuming something which happens in real serial. The baang scene was funny and nice. Waiting for the next update. Pls update soon.

With love,
Divya

Edited by Rumadiv - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87
Okay so cheeks are hurt due to continues smile with shiny bright teeth (Colgate magic 😆 )

Starting made me tensed 😕 then when om took her to mirror I was like awww. He is sooo damn sweet, cute, adorable husband. I love him.

Their cute secret holi session started after their confession and I was like sahi time pe sahi jagah confess kiya *whistling* then their Bhaang session was sooo adorable their cute talks and gauri dance [:D/]

Om's reactions about ur my world and him confessing his feelings made me all aww 😳 .

Ending was like 'jiss Baat ka dar tha wahi hua' don't know what reaction has om on this. Gauri last pep talk was damn funny 😆

Update soonishh
Edited by sumaiya10 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
Wow so cute
And gouri felt complete
So sanskaari parts are on the way😆
Edited by whity.007 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
I love this story of yours. It's going too well. Loved the grihparvesh scene. Too excited for the next chapter, post soon.
P.S not well so can't type a longer comment, sorry!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90
Aww part nine
Gauri hilarious
Om sweet
Dandi n priyanka cute
Loved it
U are one of the best writer I ever come a cross in this forum 😆
In part 8 u wrote something related to om making video let's see what it has to do with Story

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