RiKara FF : Just Married : Part 14 : Page 02 : 11.11.17 - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome Loved it yar...
why om is behaving like that in the end...
he is confused guy
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52
Okay... I know I love your writing and I just found this gem today. Read all four parts of it and I am hooked!
Their relationship is progressing so naturally... its a treat to be able to watch them grow closer and make the effort to understand each other better with every day they spend together.

The little aberration in the end of part 4 just made me a lot more curious to find out what's going on in Omkara's mind...

Would love to read more soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53
Superb update
Poor gauri is crying
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
As usual an wonderful update dear...
Om was angry on himself... am I rite dear..
Being his wife, she doesn't hold any rights on him or in the house that's bothering him much I think so...
Pls update soon dear..
I almost started to long for this story so pls update soon if time permits...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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😆 finally he caught😆
But my poor gouri😭

I have one doubt
Will ask you later😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I had a huge smile on my face throughout. This story is so so amazing. Please keep writing <3
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dear Kuku,
U had us suprised us with your update of three ss today. Today am really happiee to read it. In this Now only the story of Ri and Om started as they are trying to understand each other. Waiting further how both will fall in love and confess their marriage truth to whole world. With the anger Om went out i think he will make some plan to make Ri stay in his home and will try to stop the hurt Ri is feeling. Waiting for the next update.
With love,
Divya
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
It was superb update loved it loving omkie
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: sumaiya10

Early morning conversation was sooo refreshing it made me blush 😳
Omkara's teasing was sooo cute 😳 hehehehhee

Opps dandi got to know about them 😆 he wud know everything😆

Why did om became furious i expected him to be glad seeing her care ignoring her feeling but he became furious. Mysterious guy. why he got angry wud be explained in the next part😛

Last part wasn't expected which made me curious and eager to read next part. Continue soon. hehehhe... will post it in a few minutes

I love how Rikara's relation is progressing. Om being introvert still opening up to Gauri is really nice to read 😊 so glad u r liking their relation😛😛



Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome Loved it yar... thank you hun😃

why om is behaving like that in the end...
he is confused guy his reasons will be explained in the new part😛



Originally posted by: eishe10

Interesting update!!!thank you so much dear😛



Originally posted by: writergenie17

Okay... I know I love your writing and I just found this gem today. Read all four parts of it and I am hooked! AWWW... thank you so much dear😛😛.. so glad u liked this story😛

Their relationship is progressing so naturally... its a treat to be able to watch them grow closer and make the effort to understand each other better with every day they spend together. yes, they are going grow closer and understand each other much better, as each update goes.

The little aberration in the end of part 4 just made me a lot more curious to find out what's going on in Omkara's mind... he'll explain it in the new part😃

Would love to read more soon! thanks hun.. will update in a bit



Originally posted by: varshajoshi17

Superb update thank you dear

Poor gauri is crying yeah, she is... but he'll take care of her😉

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: manopriya24

As usual an wonderful update dear... thank you so much dear😛

Om was angry on himself... am I rite dear.. 100% right😃
Being his wife, she doesn't hold any rights on him or in the house that's bothering him much I think so... it is bothering him too much😛
Pls update soon dear..
I almost started to long for this story so pls update soon if time permits... updating it in a bit hun... will try to update it every alternate days till it catches up with Rishabala Version😛



Originally posted by: whity.007

😆 finally he caught😆 just by dandi😆

But my poor gouri😭 don't worry, he'll take care of her😉

I have one doubt
Will ask you later😆 LMAO! i answered it😉



Originally posted by: pt311288

It was lovely thank you so very much dear😛



Originally posted by: lovesick23

I had a huge smile on my face throughout. This story is so so amazing. Please keep writing <3 thank you so very much dear.. so glad u r liking this story😛.. In SHaa Allah, will try to keep writing this story😛



Originally posted by: Rumadiv

Dear Kuku, Dear Divya😃... why no red color?😲😳
U had us suprised us with your update of three ss today. at times i am like that😎.. and at times, no updates for 3 months☺️🤣Today am really happiee to read it. In this Now only the story of Ri and Om started as they are trying to understand each other. Waiting further how both will fall in love and confess their marriage truth to whole world. their relation is going to get stronger with each update.. and they are almost in love... confession, 2-3 updates i think...With the anger Om went out i think he will make some plan to make Ri stay in his home and will try to stop the hurt Ri is feelingno such plans hun... and Om kinda knows that Gauri wud be peaceful in the outhouse than in his house unless everyone knows that she is his wife. Waiting for the next update. updating in a few minutes😃
With love, love ya😛
Divya



Originally posted by: pt311288

It was superb update loved it loving omkie thank you so much hun.. so glad u r liking this story and Om

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