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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice
I am a die hard rishbala fan... And have loved this story and your work... Just when I read your user name I was bound to read... I know your love for rishbala esp rk and so is mine... Good to have your work here too... Sheena aka tiara are also getting to me... Although Omar's is nothing like my devil run in nature but I find lots of similarity in Madhu ND gauri... Both are too devoted too there hubbies who don't even want them... And am sure Haiti will be just as crazy and simple as Madhu... I love rishbala and I now love rikara... Omakara a beautifully written character and this character of your story perfectly fits him... Waiting for your awesome work...

awww thank you s much dear
hehehehhe yeah.. RK used to rock... used to love him and his antics and one liners😆😆
yeah... Omkara is a very beautiful character... actually my fav among the three brothers... he is so different from the normal leads u see on the show.
thank you once again for reading my stories dear... hope u will like my RiKara stories too

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Shraddha Dikshit

@Shraddhadikshit

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Hey lazy, for part 1

Really loving the plot yaar... dunno from where u r getting theses ideas..

Waiting for ur next update..

Please pm if u can

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Kash

@KashishJ

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Superb one , Lazy.

It was really funny to read Gauri's interpretations based on K-serials. Her fear and doubts were written beautifully with a tinge of humour in it. The part where she thought Omkara to be gay was really funny.

Wud have loved to have Rudy boy also present supporting RiKara.

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sreekailas

@sreekailas

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#34

This FF is just love... Melepparambil aanveedu is one of my favourite films! Though this story lacks the comedy element of all the men in the house running after Sobhana, its very cute! You portrayed their awkwardness and attraction really well. Since most of the parts of this ff is already written, can u please update them fast?! Pleeeaaaseee!!!

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anumol

@dazzles

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Oh god I am eager to read more...
It was interesting

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maivelli

@maivelli

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#36

omm Gauri and her k-soap I am loving it 👏

update was super awesome😆

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Naina

@Naina280599

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Your ff is going too good. I am loving it. Can't wait to read further. Post soon.

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GoldenEyes

@GoldenEyes

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Great start!

The old generation is so cold and greedy 🤢

can't wait for future update

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Cinnamon_Kisses

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Hey Writer 🤗

This story has made me so happy that I will not be able to explain ... 😃

Keeping aside the whole dramatic NKK loggerheads ... I just want to concentrate on RiKara right now ...

Woah ... The truth of their marriage is something I am genuinely proud of, Om took a stand and even took up responsibility ... Now that's like the hero

He is surely going to experience a very different kind of marriage with Gauri ... Something that he has not known 😳

Priyanka is such a darling ... Doll. I just love the bubbliness and innocence of her character ... She is the best sister in every way ... 😛

I love Gauri and Priyanka's conversation about the loner and that he finally got married...

I love the way Om is trying to take care of his newly wedded wife ... Someone he hardly knew till a few moments ago but now that she is his wife ... He is putting in every effort that she feels good ...

He finds her beautiful and here I am having butterflies in my stomach ... How is Omkara so perfect as a man ...

Even I was feeling bad that she has to stay alone on her first night ... But in time he comes ... He wants to stay with her ...❤️

I am so much in love with the character sketch of Omkara ...

Its clear that he wants to accept Gauri but is not able to because of all the potential tantrums of his family, just for the sake of his sister but I have this gut feeling that 7 months is a long time for his family full of ego to not create a scene or two ...😵

He does not wish to stay with his family ... Its just for Prinku !

What if his dadaji pressurizes him to get married before Prinku does or anyway he has potential proposals ...😲

I so wanted a track like this in the show where she comes to her sasural but has to hide her identity ... Thanks for writing this lazy ... I am in love with the story and more than that the hero

And how I forget Gauri and her K serial obsession ... The poor girl needs something more important to think about ... 😆 Maybe Om can help her with the remedy after their first night ...😉

Jaadu kar raha, jaadu kar raha hai asar chupke chupke

Do dil mile rahe hain, magar chupke chupke
Yay!!! This is so exciting ... The secret kind of falling in love ... Update soon

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Cinnamon_Kisses

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Hey, I want to ask you something ... Because I have loved this concept. Can I do a drabble on similar lines in this thread? Only if you say yes. 😊

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