RiKara FF : Just Married : Part 14 : Page 02 : 11.11.17 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely update. Gauri and her assumptions were highlights. Omkara's guiltiness made me sad. Poor guy couldn't do anything but trying his best to make her happy and keep her safe.

At least naughtykara comes to her. Probably just to talk but u never know what will happen 😉

P.s update soon already waiting for next update and also please post next part of Adhoore hum and beauty and beast both. waiting for it too 😃
Edited by sumaiya10 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Shraddhadikshit

Hey lazy, for part 1

Really loving the plot yaar... dunno from where u r getting theses ideas..
thank you so much dear... this story, i got the idea from a malayalam movie😳
Waiting for ur next update.. will post it soon😛
Please pm if u can
will do hun😊
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Originally posted by: KashishJ

Superb one , Lazy. thank you so much hun😛

It was really funny to read Gauri's interpretations based on K-serials. Her fear and doubts were written beautifully with a tinge of humour in it. The part where she thought Omkara to be gay was really funny.hehehehe... after u watch too many serials in your life.. u start to get suspicious of things😉🤣
Wud have loved to have Rudy boy also present supporting RiKara. no yaar... Rudy Boy will not be a part of the story... unless i make him their servant🤣




Originally posted by: sreekailas

This FF is just love... awww thank you so much dear😛Melepparambil aanveedu is one of my favourite films! i still laugh out loud watching that movie.. specially Jagathy's bit😆😆😆Though this story lacks the comedy element of all the men in the house running after Sobhana, its very cute! ohmigod! those guys were hilarious! You portrayed their awkwardness and attraction really well. thank you so much dear😛Since most of the parts of this ff is already written, can u please update them fast?! Pleeeaaaseee!!! will try to post the updates fast😛😛😛



Originally posted by: dazzles

Oh god I am eager to read more...
It was interesting
thank you so much dear.. will update it soon



Originally posted by: pt311288

omm Gauri and her k-soap I am loving it 👏 K-soaps are going to make unexpected entries in this story😉😆

update was super awesome😆thank you so very much dear😛😛



Originally posted by: Naina280599

Your ff is going too good. I am loving it.thank ypu so much dear... so glad u r liking the story😛 Can't wait to read further. Post soon.will update it soon😛

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Posted: 8 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: GoldenEyes

Great start! thank you so much😛

The old generation is so cold and greedy 🤢 they are going to get worse😛
can't wait for future update will update it soon😛



Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_

Hey Writer 🤗 Hello Princess🤗😃


This story has made me so happy that I will not be able to explain ... 😃 awww thank you

Keeping aside the whole dramatic NKK loggerheads ... I just want to concentrate on RiKara right now ...😛

Woah ... The truth of their marriage is something I am genuinely proud of, Om took a stand and even took up responsibility ... Now that's like the hero Om is a darling in this... His wife and Prinku are his top priority

He is surely going to experience a very different kind of marriage with Gauri ... Something that he has not known 😳 he is going to get a life, he never thought possible

Priyanka is such a darling ... Doll. I just love the bubbliness and innocence of her character ... She is the best sister in every way ... 😛 yeah.. she is a darling in this😊

I love Gauri and Priyanka's conversation about the loner and that he finally got married... glad u liked their conversation and initial bonding

I love the way Om is trying to take care of his newly wedded wife ... Someone he hardly knew till a few moments ago but now that she is his wife ... He is putting in every effort that she feels good ... yup... he is going to go the extra mile for her.

He finds her beautiful and here I am having butterflies in my stomach ... How is Omkara so perfect as a man ... he is too perfect... except for his temper issues😉😆

Even I was feeling bad that she has to stay alone on her first night ... But in time he comes ... He wants to stay with her ...❤️ hehehehe

I am so much in love with the character sketch of Omkara ... i am so glad u r liking this Omkara😛

Its clear that he wants to accept Gauri but is not able to because of all the potential tantrums of his family, just for the sake of his sister but I have this gut feeling that 7 months is a long time for his family full of ego to not create a scene or two ...😵 they will be creating a couple of scenes😉

He does not wish to stay with his family ... Its just for Prinku !yup

What if his dadaji pressurizes him to get married before Prinku does or anyway he has potential proposals ...😲 yup... marriage proposals are all gonna come up😉

I so wanted a track like this in the show where she comes to her sasural but has to hide her identity ... Thanks for writing this lazy ... I am in love with the story and more than that the hero i am so glad u r liking the story and Om in this😳😳

And how I forget Gauri and her K serial obsession ... The poor girl needs something more important to think about ... 😆 Maybe Om can help her with the remedy after their first night ...😉 HAHAHAHAHA... nothing much is going to happen during their first night... except for some ice breaking😉😆😆

Jaadu kar raha, jaadu kar raha hai asar chupke chupke
Do dil mile rahe hain, magar chupke chupke
Yay!!! This is so exciting ... The secret kind of falling in love ..yeah.. isn't that romantic?☺️. Update soonwill update it soon dear😛



Originally posted by: eishe10

Excellent update😊
thank you so much😛



Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_

Hey, I want to ask you something ... Because I have loved this concept. Can I do a drabble on similar lines in this thread? Only if you say yes. 😊your own story, right? go ahead😛... just credit this story, for the inspiration/similarity😛



Originally posted by: X.shmm

Great story
thank you😛😛



Originally posted by: whity.007

Wow😉 thank you dear😛



Originally posted by: sumaiya10

Lovely update. thank you so much dear😛😛Gauri and her assumptions were highlights. she is going to draw couple more conclusions from her K-soaps😆😆 Omkara's guiltiness made me sad. Poor guy couldn't do anything but trying his best to make her happy and keep her safe. this is going to be one of his arc in this story...

At least naughtykara comes to her. Probably just to talk but u never know what will happen 😉 HAHAHAHA nothing is going to happen... just breaking ice😆😆

P.s update soon already waiting for next update will update it soon dear😛and also please post next part of Adhoore hum will update it by tomrrowand beauty and beast both. waiting for it too 😃 have updated Part 3 two-three days back



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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
The 2nd part was so cozy & comfortable...
I felt happy seeing such a beautiful interaction of rikara...
Just like the couple who had an arranged marriage...
So beautiful yaar...
Waiting for the next...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
Awesome updates
So Omkara didn't marry her in Bareilly
The background is changed
But the main thing is they are married

At first I thought will all that hiding
Omkara didn't accept this marriage
But why would he have gotten her home
He is completely different than his family
Even Priyanka

Gauri is awesome
She thought omkara might be gay🤣
She has watched too many k-soaps
She should give them some rest

She even thought her MIL
Would come in night to throw her out
She is just so funny
No wonder she n Priyanka hit it off in first meet only

Omkara is also fun loving
Even teases Gauri
That deep dark secret question🤣
But one thing is sure
He won't leave her

I wish they keep living happily like this
They even have Priyanka's support in family
Hope no villain in future

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
Just married
Ohh god this one is so beautiful story of yours read it in rishbala version now in rikara version
Thank you di

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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
These guys are too cute man!!
I'm loving this teasing side of Om😆
Waiting for the next update😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
Loving ur story. Gauri is so naive...shes curious abt Om hugging other women. And wot happnd to Om???
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
Wow😆
I am just loved your ff
Finally they are getting comfortable
Zone... I hope so no one is seeing om
That he is going out house to sleep😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
Early morning conversation was sooo refreshing it made me blush 😳
Omkara's teasing was sooo cute 😳

Opps dandi got to know about them 😆

Why did om became furious i expected him to be glad seeing her care ignoring her feeling but he became furious. Mysterious guy.

Last part wasn't expected which made me curious and eager to read next part. Continue soon.

I love how Rikara's relation is progressing. Om being introvert still opening up to Gauri is really nice to read 😊
Edited by sumaiya10 - 8 years ago

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