Shivika FF: Resilience, Chapter 9 Part B, 19/08 UPDATE (pg 69) - Page 48

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ehmmbhluvr

Superb update..I lived the way anika's emotions thought process and insecurities are described..loved the sisters bonding.. please update soon..😊


thank you!!! I will try my best to update soon :)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lamz325


thank you! I actually have a sister and she's my best friend! so I pulled from experiences with her to write Mallika and Anika's relationship and this chapter! glad you liked it :)


Thts soo damn sweet... will u be my sis... since i soo need one after reading malika and annika here!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved your update
Annika has a new shade to her character
Well done
Can't wait to read about obros
Update soon
Much love!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: NarbhiForever..

Amazing update Lamia

Loved it
It was too emotional
Love Mallika and Anika relationship
and Anika's insecurities are still there of her childhood..
Waiting for next chapter
Update soon
and thanks a lot for PM dear!!!


thank you!! I'm glad that you liked the chapter!! you always leave the sweetest comments!

and of course, you're welcome!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lamz325


thank you!!! I reread your comment multiple times because it made me so giddy that someone understands what I'm trying to achieve with this story as well as I do! I started the story at a time where I thought the show was was going to go more in depth into Anika's childhood and background but the GulNeet ditched it and then the show got totally messed up with the Pinky drama. So, this was just me rewriting Ishqbaaz with my favorite character, however I wanted them to be! I thought it would be so interesting to see the dynamic between Anika and Shivaay if they both belonged to rich families, but if Anika still retained her background from the show! I've struggled to keep her character true to the show with her different background and unconditional love and support from her family. So, thank you for all your love and support. It's so encouraging for me.


I am really glad that I was able to convey what you have thought and written about the characters in your story. Mind you, I am not a writer like you and I might not be able to give words to thoughts like you guys do.
I really really loved the interesting premise that you have given to Annika and yet never went away from the traits of Annika from the show. That was the character that I fell in love with from the beginning of the show.
And even the journey of Shivaay & Annika in your story is similar. They never were able to stand each other in the beginning of the show and then there was an attraction that both of them felt for each other during their journey in the show.
You have done the same with your story. They were engaged to be married but never got along with each other and were only together for their families. They are so different from each other and yet same. Both would give anything for the happiness of their respective families. This was the crux established in the show and you have retained that beautifully in your premise as well. I think that what is is making this story so interesting.

And its true that makers have never really explored Annika's character. It would actually make the show even more interesting. It was such an interesting character created on tv with a baggage(about her past) that could have been explored. See how well they have explored Shivaay's character in the show. There were inconsistencies, sloppiness sometimes but still the base of the plot always surrounded around him and his journey. But that is something which is missing from Annika's side but I guess we don't have any say in what makers what to show. But I love IB for Shivika(NarBhi especially) and Obros and I will watch it for them.

I am hoping that your story deals with the flaws of both these and their journey towards love.

This story makes me fall in love with Shivaay & Annika all over again 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ithihaas


I am really glad that I was able to convey what you have thought and written about the characters in your story. Mind you, I am not a writer like you and I might not be able to give words to thoughts like you guys do.
I really really loved the interesting premise that you have given to Annika and yet never went away from the traits of Annika from the show. That was the character that I fell in love with from the beginning of the show.
And even the journey of Shivaay & Annika in your story is similar. They never were able to stand each other in the beginning of the show and then there was an attraction that both of them felt for each other during their journey in the show.
You have done the same with your story. They were engaged to be married but never got along with each other and were only together for their families. They are so different from each other and yet same. Both would give anything for the happiness of their respective families. This was the crux established in the show and you have retained that beautifully in your premise as well. I think that what is is making this story so interesting.

And its true that makers have never really explored Annika's character. It would actually make the show even more interesting. It was such an interesting character created on tv with a baggage(about her past) that could have been explored. See how well they have explored Shivaay's character in the show. There were inconsistencies, sloppiness sometimes but still the base of the plot always surrounded around him and his journey. But that is something which is missing from Annika's side but I guess we don't have any say in what makers what to show. But I love IB for Shivika(NarBhi especially) and Obros and I will watch it for them.

I am hoping that your story deals with the flaws of both these and their journey towards love.

This story makes me fall in love with Shivaay & Annika all over again 😊


Yes, Anika's character development and growth will be a central theme for this story! Of course, Shivaay has growth and learning to do with his NKK ideals, but his arc is not central.The illegitimate track doesn't apply to this story because I want to keep it focused on Anika!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: aichaab

This was a beautiful piece. The bond between the sisters is amazing and that convo with thier mother was so emotional. Shivay and Anika still have a long road ahead before the become an ideal couple but am sure the bond will be strong.


Yes, I know the beginning has had very little drama so far, but we're just getting into the story! They still have a long road ahead of them. So far, they've only admitted to themselves that they're attracted to each other!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RushaSen

Hello Lamz!!🤗

Read last chapters in a go!!😳 They are amazing!! Shivaay gifted her new champa..😉 And Shivaay forgot about their dinner date!! Loved tge progress of Shivika..How Shivaay wants to clarify everything with Annika..Though it was not proper date,but loved their street food party..⭐️

Last chapter was so emotional..😭 Loved Annika and Mallika's relationship!❤️ Annika's insecurities are still there! Last chapter made me so emotional..Annika's nightmare..😭 But you nailed it dear!!👏

Update soon..Thanks for the pm dear!😳

With love,
Rusha❤️


thank you so much Rusha!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Heya read recent four chps in one go apologies for late comment truthfully ur story is really getting me hooked up to it i love how their reltion is developing its just awwweee plzz give us more romance in next chp as i am already missing them romancing n yess thanks for d pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey hi Lamia... Just read ur FF from part 1 to 9A in one go... Very nice... Loved it... Waiting for next update... Yeah n if I hvnt clicked like it is because my IF isn't allowing me to like any posts...

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