Last Chance. A Rikara ss (updated part 8)

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

It was an amzing Part Omkara got to tatse the anika's wrath it was needed update soon

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Vrinda

@vrindagupta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Awesome update

Glad Omkara was able to fulfill his promise

But this is not enough

I am happy with family supporting Gauri

Anika doesn't leave a single chance

To show Omkara what he has done

Even shivaay he is not blindly supporting Om

He needs to learn his lesson

And I guess he has learned it

But what about Gauri

She slipped into comma permanently

Wish she comes back

Everyone is waiting for her

Her family and her Omkara

Wonder will she ever forgive Omkara

Waiting eagerly to read more

Update soon

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Shraddha Dikshit

@Shraddhadikshit

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Will gouri come back yaar???

Can't bear this pain... seriously...

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Neha

@A-Musing-Me

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Loving all the curves of the story.. well paced .. n the way Omkara raged over on swetlana was satisfying.. hehe.. n the softer bits of him missing her.. aweee.. can't wait to read further.. great story you've got for us.. thanks so mich

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maivelli

@maivelli

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

I came across this story today only read two parts which are awsm

I almost hated om when I read first part

Gauri in comma and someone given lethal drug to her it must be sweatlana anyways will read third now

U nailed it, keep writing more u are too good in rage section 😆

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

awesome Loved it

Annika's anger is justified...he is behind all her miseries...I am happy that even shivaay is taking a stand for the right one...om did wrong and he had to make it correct

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maivelli

@maivelli

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Wow this ss is lovely last chance really last chance to woo his lady back u made me hate om to the core may be in coming update because of his repentance I will mellow down😆

This is just awsm I wonder how I missed this one👏

Update next part soon

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Genie

@writergenie17

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Oh your last two updates were such a satisfying read!

Anika is on the warpath... and Shivaay's unshakable confidence in his brother is crumbling. Omkara deserves everything he has coming at him... You've dealt us some nice curveballs throughout.

Eagerly waiting for what happens next!

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

this was amazing..
Anika's outburst..bang on..
hope to get some RiKara moments..
jaldi jaldi update karna.

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Neha

@A-Musing-Me

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#30

I missed the fourth part.. duffer Hun main.. but now that I've read it.. it's amazing.. anikas rant was just sucked.. Omkara is wrong n he deserved it.. n now I hope he does everything possible to get Gauri back.. I know he will.. won't write off anything I know .. but anyone sorry does deserve a second chance.. can't wait for the getting well track of Gauri..

Thanks for this track.. hope we do get something like this on the show :)

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