||O Jaana...|| OS Series - #5-OS - page 18 *23-july - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res Anni. 😳
Yippiiieee!!! I'm the 1st to res!
Unresed. 😃
Annii!!! Great job siso! 👏 I guess u wrote this part on the basis of the new spoiler of Ani trying to make Shivay jealous by taking Rohit's name in front of Shivay, then again wearing a short dress, n then Shivay doing tod-phod in gussa n Ani applying medicine in his wounded hand, but Shivay being Shivay, showed his tadi n went from there n Ani starts crying, that spoiler na?? 😉
Now coming back to the OS, it was fabulous! 👏 Lol! Om was on the other side of the phone, pretending as Rohit! 😆 Then Rudy's super plan, n boy it worked! Shivay got so angry n jealous (according to AniRu's plan). 😉 But again that anger n pain broke both Shivay n Anika!! 😭 My babies. 😭 💔 Brilliantly written their pain n angst. 👏 Loved reading it. ❤️ Will wait for the next OS in this series. 😉 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.
Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62
U jzt made me cry anni... It was jzt like it's happening before my eyes
I was crying bitterly...thank God I'm alone at home today otherwise everyone would be asking me about the reason behind my crying
It was phenomenal nd commendable... Heart wrenching.. U beautifully penned down their emotions
Tq fr pm 😭
This is for u 👏 👏
Edited by farinaks - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Res Anni. 😳
Yippiiieee!!! I'm the 1st to res!
Unresed. 😃
Annii!!! Great job siso! 👏 I guess u wrote this part on the basis of the new spoiler of Ani trying to make Shivay jealous by taking Rohit's name in front of Shivay, then again wearing a short dress, n then Shivay doing tod-phod in gussa n Ani applying medicine in his wounded hand, but Shivay being Shivay, showed his tadi n went from there n Ani starts crying, that spoiler na?? 😉
Now coming back to the OS, it was fabulous! 👏 Lol! Om was on the other side of the phone, pretending as Rohit! 😆 Then Rudy's super plan, n boy it worked! Shivay got so angry n jealous (according to AniRu's plan). 😉 But again that anger n pain broke both Shivay n Anika!! 😭 My babies. 😭 💔 Brilliantly written their pain n angst. 👏 Loved reading it. ❤️ Will wait for the next OS in this series. 😉 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.


that came out only today afternoon...i started this yesterday after the gussa dialogue..!😛
I had read about rohit coming back but I really dont read the entire spoiler..!😆
i read headings..!

Thanks so much Aheli, gald u loved it..!
😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: farinaks

U jzt made me cry anni... It was jzt like it's happening before my eyes
I was crying bitterly...thank God I'm alone at home today otherwise everyone would be asking me about the reason behind my crying
It was phenomenal nd commendable... Heart wrenching.. U beautifully penned down their emotions
Tq fr pm 😭
This is for u 👏 👏


I m sorry farhu..!
Mujhe khud nahi pata ye kaise twist hui story..!

I had decided on not writing angst and dark but...

🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: annikaa



I m sorry farhu..!
Mujhe khud nahi pata ye kaise twist hui story..!

I had decided on not writing angst and dark but...

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Dats really ok no need to be sorry
I jzt cried ciz it was really emotional nd heart touching
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66
That was painfully amazing shot.
Emotions were spot on. You have portrayed the angst so beautifully that had almost tears in my eyes as though I was living through it.
These two people are hurting each other and themselves.
Thank you for this dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: annikaa



that came out only today afternoon...i started this yesterday after the gussa dialogue..!😛
I had read about rohit coming back but I really dont read the entire spoiler..!😆
i read headings..!

Thanks so much Aheli, gald u loved it..!
😊


Annii its okk darling. Be it based on the spoiler or not, it was a khidkitod OS n I loved it. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68
oh god so real it was
their pain
oh god
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69
It was a full proved plan but ended with so much pain...
Even I could feel the Dard...
Spoiler ka ek jhalak dekhne KO mila...
She can't see his pain...he is not only hurting himself; He is hurting her too...
Love it a lot...will wait for next one... Update soon...
Tnq sooo much for the pm ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70
i so want this scene in the serial
its emotionaliciously dreamy
thanks for this its lovely

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