||O Jaana...|| OS Series - #5-OS - page 18 *23-july - Page 14

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome piece of writing ❤️

The lil cupid holding their fingers was so cute.

P.S. The gif belongs to you dearie (which is so beautifully made)..i jst added the text.
Banner credits shd be in your own name. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
This was really amazing and sweet Anni ❤️
You really made me fall in love with them again !
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Posted: 8 years ago
Anni, that was perfect!!!!!!!! 👏 ⭐️ 👏

I swear, there was pain, love, passion, some humor even 😳

Just perfect, they way it all blended together in one story really was very captivating ⭐️

I must say though, that opening portion is something I think all fans would love to see
It was like picture perfect for a perfect family 😳

Loads of Love,
- Sims 🤗

P.S Thanks for the PM! 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
Shot 1:
Beautiful dii...I always wanted such a Shivaay and your idea is brilliant..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Anni..This was super cute!❤️The first part was so so adorable!! Perfect family of Shivika which we are craving to see in show!😳 Loved Shivika convo..Their pain..😭 You have depicted their emotions so well with this line! You are doing a commendable job in this series..👏 Thanks for making series..⭐️
Loved it..Thanks for the pm..😊

With love,
Rusha
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Posted: 8 years ago
#2:
Awesome dii...Annika's pain was so beautifully explained...truly loving this Shivaay...😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

Awesome update Anniii 🤗🤗

awww you brought the baby track here 👏👏
it is so cute to see both of them sleeping with a baby between them 😊😊. it's a picture perfect scene yar... The realization of Shivaay that wat changed between them... you know wat these are the situation where shivaay can Atleast analyse it but the CV's are not going to that direction 😭😭... they are divorced couples so that type of thoughts obviously will come up... anyway I just loved it yar...this is too perfect


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Thank You Aparna!

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Posted: 7 years ago
#3- Dii...this was so beautiful and sooo apt for the lyrics, loved it, a complete package of Comedy and Pain...I loved it, specially the dialogue, "Ajj Meow Tak Nahi Kar Raha!"😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful to another level dii...Annika loves him so much and so does Shivaay...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: .Piyali..

#3- Dii...this was so beautiful and sooo apt for the lyrics, loved it, a complete package of Comedy and Pain...I loved it, specially the dialogue, "Ajj Meow Tak Nahi Kar Raha!"😆


Thank you Piyali!
I think I should re-reading my old stuff..😆 to get inspired and write dialogues like that again😆

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