||O Jaana...|| OS Series - #5-OS - page 18 *23-july

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#121

love this part ending hehe baby bringing them together

loved it

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1070625

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Posted: 8 years ago

#122

Amazing update Anni

Loved it totally!!

Banner is beautiful!!

Just loved that!!

eddy currents😳

and loved last scene with baby

Baby cupid⭐️⭐️

and you described the line so well and perfectly

Loved this piece sweetheart!!

Edited by NarbhiForever.. - 8 years ago

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Aparna

@Apu_915

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Posted: 8 years ago

#123

Awesome OS...

Loved it ❤️

You expressed d emotions so well!!!

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#124

Awesome update Anniii 🤗🤗

awww you brought the baby track here 👏👏

it is so cute to see both of them sleeping with a baby between them 😊😊. it's a picture perfect scene yar... The realization of Shivaay that wat changed between them... you know wat these are the situation where shivaay can Atleast analyse it but the CV's are not going to that direction 😭😭... they are divorced couples so that type of thoughts obviously will come up... anyway I just loved it yar...this is too perfect

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farinaks

@farinaks

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Posted: 8 years ago

#125

Awww cute nd adorable
Yhe baby's antics are worth of a standing ovation

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Shaina744

@Shaina744

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#126

Awsm amazing mind blowing part...
Totally loved this...
Shivika moments are khidkitod...want this scene in IB...Pari ne Shivika KO mila hi diya... Really she is an angel...
Tnq so much for the pm...waiting for the next dear...

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peeehu

@MRS.SSO

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Posted: 8 years ago

#127

Sooo beitifulll

Loved ittt

Shivaaay is so romantic

Awesum update

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1012277

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Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Beautiful OS, annikaa.
Is your name really annikaa? 😳
I absolutely love this OS Series. This is a great concept. OS's on the lyrics of O Jaana. <3
My favourite is the angst wala. I just love it. ❤️