SS: If YoU KNeW Me Now || Updated CH 9 23/07/2017 - Page 17

Originally posted by: Illuminati07

@bold: This is what the entire SS is all about

Originally posted by: pritzz

I think The kind of Girl Annika is and the pain she went through all her life DESERVES to be treated with more than perfection and more than Dream 😳... I always wished such dreams coming true scenes for Annika in Show as well 🥱 and here u give me ❤️

How can I kiss your hands ❤️

Holy crap.. I got a minor heart attack. I have no idea how to react after this. But was outstanding

And now after reading this and knowing truth I want Anika to be with maahi. I know it's wishful thinking. It's shivika ff and there will be happieely ever after anyway but still I want this please. Make this mahika not shivika

Originally posted by: GoodGoneWrong

holy Crap... I stopped as soon as I saw A heart M and I knew what was coming... Shit shit shit ...why?

I just have to go finish reading the chapter... But m too shocked for now.

*res*

*unres*

First of let me tell you I love your writing...you are an amazing weaver of words and ideas and always pull me into your world. I generally do not respond, not because I don't wish to, but because I do not really have much to add to the flow of your story.

Now coming to this update, I have so much to say, so much to ask and hence I was compelled to write. Finally!!!

When the story started, I was looking forward to it because I really need to see Shivaays repentance and then his redemption. But now I am very very confused. Shocked I would not say, there were hints you left, for example the coffee vs tea thing, but I did not really see this coming until this chapter. I just chalked up the changes in Shivaay to his repentance and wish to change himself and his ways for her because he suddenly realised her importance.

Now where do I start???🤔

Let's start with Anika since she in the centre of this mess. She is so happy and so blissfully unaware of the storm coming her way. How did she not realise that this man is not HER man? Wasn't she always aware of him? Or was she just so wrapped up in her new feelings and the her surroundings that she did not notice that something is amiss?

I am sure you will end up explaining this in the story, but what is bothering me the most is how she will react once she finds out Mahi's or maybe it is both Mahi and Shivaay's deception. I understand having exes, but spending so much quality time in such close proximity with a man who looks exactly like your husband, thinking he is your husband and then realising that he really is someone else. How that is going to break her!!! Had it been another man, another face, had she moved on and then come back to Shivaay later, the physical proximities would maybe okay with her I guess. But I am just not sure any type of explanation will help her with the guilt she will face on learning that it was Mahi and not Shivaay. Unless (hopefully I am not revealing your plot here) it was always Shivaay except for a few instances when he had to be elsewhere and he put in the duplicate to keep the ruse going.

Coming to Mahi- you said he is positive. What kind of a positive man would spend so much time with another mans wife? And being so close to her, almost a man and wife except for doing the deed that is. And it does not seem like he is just pretending, not with the carving of A and M and the way he asked her to since the "Mahi" bits of the song. 😕

Shivaay - what should I say? We haven't seen or heard from him yet. or maybe we did. How is he being redeemed when all the wooing is being done by another. Or will he be bringing Anika out of her miseries when this drama is over? But can he really do it, when his face, voice, everything will be a constant reminder of Mahi and his deception?

I am just too confused right now and thus rambling. I do trust you as a writer and so will keep it going till the end of this story. I was expecting you to throw a curve ball somewhere and am excitedly waiting for the same. Please continue soon and end my miseries.

Will try to respond later when more happens...until then ciao!! Lots of love. May God keep your creative juices flowing and you keep churning out gems.

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first time replying to ur threads... But love all your work..

Rivs

Originally posted by: -simmi-

Okkay my first reaction after reading this was W*F!!
And am kind of in a panic mode now!!
I was not suspicious but surprised when Shivaay played the mouth organ i was like 'oh wow both shivaay and mahi play MO'
Then the tea thing that's where the doubts start
And then A ❤️ M and my reaction was "oh shit no f**king way!!"
And at last when anika sang i covered my face and was like "OH GOD!! NO!!"
If mahi was Shivaay throughout then i don't think it can be possible for anika to forget him and their moments which reminds me of Prem Ratan Dhan Payo in which Prem took place Vijay's role in his absense and Sonam kapoor falls in love with him and after the truth she choose Prem not Vijay!!
And here anika accepts that Shivaay himself killed the love she had for him and i think for anika ... love matters not the person!!
i do agree when you said that they always shows various Gfs of hero but no past lovers of heroine but in this case does not matter.. Because Shivaay was not that touchy or romantic with tia and they not showed his relationship with mallika when they were together..i wouldn't have any michmichis if mahi plays past/current boyfriend of anika and they did all of it including sex or anika was cheating on shivaay with mahi.. But it give me all sort of michmichis now because anika doesn't know that the man for whom she is developing feelings is not her husband and they are doing hugs and kisses which give me the creeps >_<
It was well written as always but m so not liking the mahika!! and i have no idea how you are going to make anika fall in love with shivaay 😕 but pls pls give us shivika!!! 😳

Originally posted by: preity_d

The last paragraph was so intense when he asked her to sing the Mahi part, I got goosebumps. This love is extreme (Beyhad). His deewangi is so intense. 🤪 Right now, I am in love with the song ! It's playing on loop in my PC. I am so damn excited and so gone with your update ! I am already in love with your Mahi !

P.S. Don't judge me people, I am insane !