RiKara SS - Everything I Do - Pt22, 23 pg67 (18/7/17)

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Shraddha Dikshit

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

You had told me to ignore if not interested, seriously saku ,how can I ignore your update.

It was a firing episode yaar, loved RIKARA dialogues. You are such an expert in handling romance and fieriness

Update soon

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Shraddhadikshit
You had told me to ignore if not interested, seriously saku ,how can I ignore your update.
It was a firing episode yaar, loved RIKARA dialogues. You are such an expert in handling romance and fieriness

Update soon

I was wondering if I was spamming your inbox, I should be apologetic about that right?😉 But since I wasn't, no worries!

Thank you! I'm glad it was that, for me it felt kind of confusing chapter. You made me feel a lot better about it!😃

I will update soon!

Lots of love,

Sakura

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Shivanya Arora

@saske

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Sakura I've told you once and I'm repeating it again you are a TERRIFIC writer...the way you express each and every emotion...its unique in its own way and seriously gives an all new dimension to the whole story. 🥺 You made my day...Seriously

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: saske
Sakura I've told you once and I'm repeating it again you are a TERRIFIC writer...the way you express each and every emotion...its unique in its own way and seriously gives an all new dimension to the whole story. 🥺 You made my day...Seriously

Why is your heart breaking?😒

Thank you for being so sweet dear!😳😃 I'm glad you enjoy this!😊

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Disappointment?!?!?

What's happening to all the amazing writers on our forum nowadays?

This stuff is gold Sakura!

I loved absolutely everything about this... From the carefree but concerned Gauri, the stuck himself but wanting to free her Omkara, the supportive but unable to help Shivaay to the entirely evil Tej.

The interaction between Gauri and Omkara and the conversation between Shivaay and Om were absolutely beautiful... bang on with your characterization!

Love it so much... please update soon!

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Aayushi15

@Aayushi15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Hiii Sakura,
So you are here to create another masterpiece. I am so happy. I just love the concept.
You have brought all the essential elements of the show into this like tej being the selfish business minded man, jahnavi self destroying herself and omkara's soul turning dark due to all these but you have efficiently paired him with a sort of lady we all wanted for omkara. This is so much better than the concept of the show. You are a fabulous story teller.
I really liked YAIC but I am glad gauri isn't having a very dark and painful past in this story. I appreciate your approach of a simple romance this time. Because sometimes simplicity is the real magic.
Please update soon because I can't wait for rikara story to unfold.
Thank you

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Naina

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

I'm loving this story. You've written it so amazingly well, as always. I really like Gauri's character here. Om and her dialogues were really good. Can't wait to read the next chapter. I would've commented a bit longer but I better get back to study; exams going on *sigh*

Post the next chapter soon btw. Much love.

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Shivanya Arora

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Why is your heart breaking?😒
Thank you for being so sweet dear!😳😃I'm glad you enjoy this!😊

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Shivanya Arora

@saske

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Why is your heart breaking?😒
Thank you for being so sweet dear!😳😃I'm glad you enjoy this!😊

sorry galat emoticonJaldi jaldi me 😆

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IlaTanwar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#50

Well what a update I can guess Omkara's plight seeing Jhanvi like that no child can see their parent die and that too like that...

Omkara sitting and Gauri being in her own world and saying things without sympathy firstly i was really offended by it but when she showed her symphatic nature in her own way by treating Omkara's wound and telling that she knows what have caused this? I was ok may be if she was not in love with someone else she would have chosen him. She told her plan to him he let her go...

Then Shivaay's coming I really like the way Shivaay told that shivaay is incomplete without him and it is he who had kept his sanity intact...

loved there converstaion waiting for next...