Shivika Ts_Pal Bhar_ Sequel to MPBTC [Completed]

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Anya

@elysianights

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: tsafriends
anya yaar firstly i am sorry for commenting so late i love this story of yours and was jumping out of joy when i saw your Pm but i was busy with work and i finally sat down to read the newest update and WHAT I HAVE BEEN MISSING AND WHERE I HAVE BEEN i give you my word i will never do this again yaar this is EPIC i was crying reading it the way you portrayed his pain the condition in which he is not having annika beside him a wonderful continuation of the story and the shock factor You are gracefully invited to the auspricious occation Of Annika and Sameer's Engagement" reading this my jaw literally doped to he floor darn it i wont be able to sleep right now this was too goood please update it soonnn. Love youuu

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Sanya 🤗

Firstly dear I'm not at all upset for you commenting late!It's okay!We alll have pending works which make us late but don't feel sorry for it baby!

And secondly, thank you very much for this*Flying Kiss*

Yeah I know it come as a shock to all of you but still i'm saying it will be a happy ending!

Love you always,

-Anya ❤️

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Anya

@elysianights

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: SHARMILAPREM
It's really touching. Waiting for another amazing update. Plz update soon. All the best

Thank you dear❤️

yes will update itin a jiffy 😃

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

waiting for the next update eagerly...

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Anya

@elysianights

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Posted: 8 years ago

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moon99

@moon99

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

res ❤️
will get back soon 😳

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

awesome update yar

in this story wat ever happens I wnt hate this Annika because here fault is Shivaay's and he had to suffer..

He let her go...and i wnt forgive him for this easily...

She had supported him in every situation and was even ready to give her life to save him and wat did he do

He abandoned her because she doesn't have Nkk...

so let him suffer...but Ya at the end..I still wanted to see them together but before that he should pay for his mistakes

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1070625

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Res

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Unres

Loved the story dear. Awesome👏👏👏

Now I am 😭😭

and have to cry again in next updates😭

Well This was wonderful. Now at least Rudra is with him.

Waiting for next part...

Update soon😊

Edited by water9786 - 8 years ago

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EnasZ

@EnasZ

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

hi ... updated finally ... you and pain and a story ... a comination with pure purpose of making me cry😭😭😭

u know i don't mind a bad annika ... as shivaay is always shown bad (u said that you're making shivaay in pain as annika is always in ain in the show so now u should flip it😈)

coming to Rudra. ... i am actually glad that he felt remorse ... and understood how much wrong he was ... leaving ur brother when he needs support the most doesn't really scream love to me😡😡

i need to ask u this ... do u hate shivaay ?😆😆 the guy is always in so much pain in ur story ...

& for some weird sadisitic reason i like the fact that his heart condition is getting worse😈 my sadistic idea from previous comment still stands😈

if one thing this story made me do (other than crying my eyes out of course) , it made terrified of making a mistake and being left a lone without a second chance or support from people who mean the world to me & trust me I am not a deep person ...getting this thought into my head proves how much talented u are👏👏👏

this is a 3 shot right??? continue soon ... just too curious to know now what?? *brings another tissue and re reads from the start*

lots & lots of love to u

Enas

Edited by EnasZ - 8 years ago