Shivika Ts_Pal Bhar_ Sequel to MPBTC [Completed] - Page 14

-Anya 😳

Ya you made me understand...you are the first writter who made me again come to a story with a different opinion because when ever we finish reading a strory we will come to a conclusion and it wnt change but in this story this is the second time it's happening to me...

first it was when the prequel of this ended...I was happy with the sad ending and I really thought shivaay deserved that but this story was in my mind like it's imprinted...I again thought about it and came to a conclusion that he deserves a second chance and I was really surprised when you started this and I was happy...again this story came to an end and I really felt so much anger towards Annika and I commented about it here and the most interesting thing is like the prequel this also is not leaving my mind..I was again thinking about this and came to a conclusion that Annika cannot be blamed here...she is afraid to be once again broken by him...its easy for the outsiders to comment about it...the one suffered will only know about its depth...you are a terrible writter...I really wish that you become a famous writer...many of them can write stories but only some of them will have the magic to make that story leave an imprint on someones heart...I am eager waiting for the next sequel

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

Ya you made me understand...you are the first writter who made me again come to a story with a different opinion because when ever we finish reading a strory we will come to a conclusion and it wnt change but in this story this is the second time it's happening to me...

first it was when the prequel of this ended...I was happy with the sad ending and I really thought shivaay deserved that but this story was in my mind like it's imprinted...I again thought about it and came to a conclusion that he deserves a second chance and I was really surprised when you started this and I was happy...again this story came to an end and I really felt so much anger towards Annika and I commented about it here and the most interesting thing is like the prequel this also is not leaving my mind..I was again thinking about this and came to a conclusion that Annika cannot be blamed here...she is afraid to be once again broken by him...its easy for the outsiders to comment about it...the one suffered will only know about its depth...you are a terrible writter...I really wish that you become a famous writer...many of them can write stories but only some of them will have the magic to make that story leave an imprint on someones heart...I am eager waiting for the next sequel

I will try to update it soonish! Hopefully.😃

-Anya 😳

Originally posted by: moon99

res ❤️ will be back soon to read this
unres

You know Anya, I 've become just like you... we both don't like angst filled stories yet you write them and I read them! 😆 hahahha I totally agree with you in this sims.

But I must say that this series is your best by far according to me because there are so many emotion that every time I read a chapter I feel different, almost gloomy maybe, but it makes me feel good... I don't even know what I'm saying a this point! 😆 hehehe..! I too feel the same when I wrote this , I thought that I'm shivaay and I'm feeling this pains but still I love to write it it was a whole new experience for me.😆

Seriously though, I was actually hoping for a happy ending, but this was anything but that! I should be angry 😡, but I'm actually just mind blown with the way you wrote part 5 and of course, heartbroken 🥺 ! shorry!*Holding both my ears with a puppy look* But I hav told you all in the note at the 1st page that htis Ts may don't have a good ending,and io it happened.Fo mre writting this parrt was really difficult and so is the reason i was late,I really wanted you lall to show the pain they were going through and I'm glad that i was able to mke you all understant it.😃

The moment I read the first line of the song, my lips started trembling, but I kept it together! But as it continued I was slowly dying inside, and for some reason, I felt as if I was Shivaay through out this entire series. Like that is how well you write that you made me feel for someone to the extent that I never thought I could feel! well this song is literally heart whrenching! Arijit voice is always soulful and whenever I listen to his songs I totally loose myself into it and a wave of sadness surrounds me. His voice had a magical effect on eberyone.❤️ i'm in love with his voice.

Then slowly my eyes stared to moisten, but I thought I could control it, but the moment I read, " Shivaay knew this was the end!...and live his life like hell again," I broke down litereally to the point that I couldn't tell the difference between my saliva and my salty tears. Not only that, but you made me cry to the point that my bottoms were wet from where my tears were continuously landing!!!!!!!
Thank god I was alone, or else had anyone seen me cry, it would have been really hard to explain why I was bawling my eyes out! 😆 Yaar because of me I making you all cry! Never in my wildest dream had I ever thought to see such senerio in front of me.Oh God! but thank god no one was there with you otherwise they would have literally thought that you had a breakup![just kidding] But here is a point as whenever i smile seeing the screen my mom used to tell me "Talking to your bioyfriend huh?What it is there written tat you are smiling like this"And i'm like "Okay you are right I'm talking to my boyfriend"And then what got a slap on my head 🤣🤣 and so it can be like if you cry than you ad a breakup. 😆

ANYA, YOU WERE JUST FABULOUS WITH THIS PART!!!!! One of my favourites series out there!!!!! 😃 😃 thank you for your kind words buddy😳

Both Shivaay and Anika are in so much pain that I can't even imagine it! I like the fact that Sameer is supporting Anika and keeping her strong, but for how long? One day or another, Anika is going to have to face herself and her fears. Yes and you will come to see this in the next sequel! it will be all about that😉
I really got the feels by the way Rudra congratulated Anika... that bhabhi was killer!

Since you seem to be basing these off songs from HALF GIRLFRIEND, why don't you try for bearish? It's a lovely song. 😳 yes i'm taking all the songs from there but when I have listened to this one and it had three different lyrics so I thought o use them according to my story!I will show their status. first one main phir bhi tumko chahunga had given the feels that shivaay is left alone the lyrics literally matched to their condition. Now Pal bhar is what you can say that it showed that shivaay had lost all his hope and he was done with his life. and so I will do with the other one,the female version in the next sequel! And regarding baarish! It's a lovely song and if possible will try to add it too.😳

I AM EAGERLY WATING FOR THE NEXT SEQUEL TO THIS!! Will try to update it soonish!😃

Loads of Love,
- Sims 🤗

P.S Thanks for the P.M! 😛

Love you always and always,

-Anya ❤️

Originally posted by: KashiTessa

I am loving your Sameer though he is coming between Shivika, he is now acting as a big support system for Anika. Yes you are right,I juat wanted to show tha if shivaay had Rudra then why not annika had someone?So sameer is there.

Rudra. ..He is so mature and is trying to understand how both of them are feeling. In the show also I think rudra character had a great potential in it,he is just blooming!and now after these three years,he had actually become mature,thought the difference s at the early time he had his brothers so he acted childlike but now he had truely let all that go and behave like a mature guy.

Anika she know she won't be happy with Sameer nor be disappointed as he is a great friend.
Her heart is bleeding by seeing Shivaay like this but just as once she was afraid of darkness now she is afraid of another heartbreak. yes she is afraid and she will fight back this fear.Once and for all.😃

Shivaay is punishing himself badly and he just wants to leave this world where his Anika is now someone else's.
He knew still some where in his heart that she is also going through this hell. Both of them know that they are going through all this ,they are on the sameboth but this time they are fighting it individually.

From the time Anika has made an entry into Shivaay's life she has been with him through everything and this time too they are facing the same problem , the difference is that unlike old times they are not facing this side by side but both are fighting same battle from different frontiers.

And the last part don't do this... I know I have dissapointed you all because of this but I have told you all in the start that maybne this ts doesn't have a happy ending and so it happened.But I promise i will not let you all down in the next part.😳
After all I want Shivika at the end. Me too.❤️
Waiting for next one

Well you have truely given out the things I really wanted to show all of you,and for this A big hug from me to you🤗

Originally posted by: heenagupta

aap na bahut bahut gande ho... aap ne bola tha that its a happing ending... bt u made this sad one... again... Yeah I have that this STORY will have a happy ending an d it will but not in this TS but in the next one. Sorrry tujhe rulane ke liye😛
u know i cry too much that my tissue box got over bt in b/w i was pacifying myself that it will b happing ending till rudra say bhaiya i have hopes bt after that they r dead as shivaay... bt c what have u done... devil. Yes I think you must all have given me the title Anya Devil! 🤣🤣
i dnt kown when u r gng to start nxt thread... bt till then my mind would definetly b around by the story... n 2 satisfy myself i will made a happy ending in my brain... hahahhaha! DO make a happy ending yourself to amke you satisfied but I don't knw what will be my ending?I had the plot but when I started typing I went to a whole new path leavign the one behind😆
we really dnt hate sameer... he is nice man... bt shivaay n anika i have ntng 2 cmt abt them... what u have done... i m short of words abt hw u describe their emotions...
such a emotinal update... thankoo very much baby!❤️
plz update sequal soon

-Anya 😳

Originally posted by: itzMYattitude

u cannot be so cruel ending it here right?
so when we should expect the next part?
have read it last night but was not able to comment

this piece of work was amazing
loved every single bit of it

Will update it soon.😃

Yes it will get better in it!😃

-Anya 😳

Originally posted by: pri12

Anya I cried while reading this story...Loved it yaar...u r superb...plz continue soon

-Anya 😳