Shivika Ts_Pal Bhar_ Sequel to MPBTC [Completed]

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pri12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#121

Anya I cried while reading this story...Loved it yaar...u r superb...plz continue soon

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farinaks

@farinaks

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Posted: 8 years ago

#122

It was full of grief nd pain sooo heart wrenching
Plz plz plz don't let anything happen to him
Tq fr pm
Update asap

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#123

oh god so sad anika just take leap pf faith dear

i know its easy to say difficult to do but please do it for yourself for your love you deserve it

please do continue

bye sumi

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1070625

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Posted: 8 years ago

#124

Loved it dear..

Come soon with sequel..

Waiting...

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Shaina744

@Shaina744

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Posted: 8 years ago

#125

Oh no!!! Painful ending...
Love it a lot Di... I even can feel their pain... How deeply they love each other...
Oh My Shivay... No no He can't leave me like this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
How badly m crying!!!!!
You are such a great writer... Love you a lot

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aisha1099

@aisha1099

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#126

Heartbreaking update Anya.

OK now I am not an emotional person who cries while reading stories but this one really made me tear up. I could feel their pain and sadness esp Shivaay's. Seriously I had to stop at certain lines to wipe away my tears.You are really a talented writer.

Waiting for the next thread..

Aisha.😊

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Monidipa konar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#127

it was a heart wrenching update..tears brimmed reading the line thank u fr making me fall in L...😭
but this proves u r an amazng writer...u reached my heart..thaks fr d pm..😊

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Mystery1234

@Mystery1234

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Amazing

Anu my dearest dearie🤗🤗

This is brilliantly written👏

I was crying all the while reading this 😭

I could feel the extreme pain which was being experienced by Shivika

A thought crossed my mind dear

Agar humara padhte hue itna bura haal ho jata hai toh tumhe kaisa feel hota hoga while writing it????😕

AWesome

Continue soon

Thanks for the pm

Love u till infinity❤️

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Anya

@elysianights

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Posted: 8 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: Nohsin10
It is amazingly beautiful update
Well written👏
I can feel the pain of Shivika
It's really heartbreaking😭😭
My Shivaay baby😭😭

thank you noshin❤️

Glad that you like it.😳

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Anya

@elysianights

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Posted: 8 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
awesome update anya...
Ya i really hated sameer for being this much nice initially and I already told you that I will never hate Annika wat ever happens but in this last episode i realised one thing that I never hated sameer really but in the last chapter i hate Annika to the core...I really never expected her to get engaged to sameer even after she saw shivaay in that state and moreover sameer said that there is still time...my heart really broked when he cried for her...I really felt that she is so cruel...she just wanted to hurt him and she pushed him to the edge...I am eagerly waiting for the next sequel...

thank you Aparna! 🤗

Well I never wanted annika to get engage with Sameer,But but but! the Fear had to be subdided first and than she can forgive or be with shivaay,if i would have shown that she just left this engagement midwaya nd went to shivaay than it would look odd! Fear is one such feeling which cannot be easily gone and it's cure is not really easy or tasty it always had to be bitter as well as slow and steady.

I know i have dissapointed you all but I nedd to do this , I need to show that annika first fight with her fear, and than she excepts everything. She is not bad but the situation had made her behave like this.

I hope I was able to make you understand 😃

Love you always,

-Anya ❤️

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