Am I in Love?-RiKara SS Complete - Update Pg17(03/05)

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#111

Omkara expressing love gauris status was genuine every girl is like that seeing the hatred in the eyes of her husband is cruciating but getting the love is blissful...

Loving the updates really like the way you show the intimate scene there was a smile on my face reading the part ...

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Neha

@A-Musing-Me

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#112

Genie... 🤗... Trust me to blotch up with the basics.. *pouts*...

Hi.. this Neha... 😛... good you asked me else I would have merrily carried on oblivious to the fact that i havent even shared my name.. sorry...

We reach the end... what a journey this was... one where two soulmates realise each others value in their lives... i loved how Omkara didnt waste a moment after realising what his heart wants... n then it was Gauri's turn to face the truth... n her reaction was super well done.. could totally see it before my eyes... those broken words incoherent sentences... she just had the Love of her Life confessing to her... how over whelming it was for her.. aweee... n then her sliding down n Omkara finally taking her in his arms.. such a kodak moment this... felt so much lighter seeing these two come together for eternity n then a little more.. 😃... n those promises made it even more fulfilling...

Waiting for the after credits n the epilogue... Gonna keep coming back to this story always... N super glad that we got a chance to interact all thanks to RiKara n your writing craze...

Chalo off for now... bye...

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Genie

@writergenie17

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: Z.A.A
Enjoyed reading this part too. It was as cute as our RiKara! ❤️ I hope they do something like this in the show for OM's confession-CVs are you listening?! Anyway, loved the way you described Gauri's inner turmoil and her almost disbelief at finally realizing it is her-everythinng was perfectly portrayed. 👍🏼Can't wait to read the next chapter! Also, a little sad that it's ending but looking forward to reading more of your stories!!
P.S: Thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: Z.A.A
I just woke-up to this, what a start to my day!
I don't even think I need to say that I loved it, that's a given. It was so beautifully written. Absolutely loved Gauri's breakdown scene and the fact that Omkara gave her time to come to terms with reality and weeped with her in silence when all of it became too overwhelming for her-very nicely portrayed-such a power-packed piece of writing!

Thank-you for taking out the time to write for us and entertaining us through your stories, keep them coming in!😆

P.S: Excited for the epilogue, I hate endings, but somehow epilogues make endings better. Also, a big thumbs up for regular updates, I am a sucker when it comes to waiting, courtesy zero patience, lol. Loved that you updated all parts quickly and regularly. 👍🏼

Glad I was able to help you start your day with a RiKara touch! Thanks for such high praise and amazing compliments you guys keep throwing at me... I'm drowning in the resulting high of it!

It is for selfish reasons that I write... It gives my emotions an outlet that lets me keep my normal life a bit neater. I also get to interact and fangirl with amazing people like you over our shared obsession of RiKara and such... So it's a win-win situation for me here.

As for the epilogue, all i have at the moment is a sort of after-credits scene,like they show in the MCU, just long enough to keep you in the theater till the end of the credits but short enough to leave you a bit unsatisfied at having sat through 3 minutes of scrolling names to see 10 seconds of Thanos' ugly face.

Sorry for the runalong sentence... you can see I'm kinda passionate about the MCU and not in a good way. But yeah... it's a small scene with ShivIka for now but I am battling with the notion of doing an actual epilogue but it might not happen any time soon.

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Genie

@writergenie17

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: pt311288
👏⭐️
beautiful short story loved it
thaq genie for this sober love story.
😛 really loved it i was hoping may u can update an epilogue 😊

anyways wnderful story with a soothing end

Hi Prinku! Thanks for a lovely comment, as usual. I am thinking about the epilogue for now but you shall have a short after credits scene soon.

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Genie

@writergenie17

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
superb story...I really loved it...
their confession was surperb...
waiting for the epilogue

Thanks Ayushi! Still on the fence about the epilogue but I promised you guys an AC scene and you shall have it soon.

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Genie

@writergenie17

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: IlaTanwar
Omkara expressing love gauris status was genuine every girl is like that seeing the hatred in the eyes of her husband is cruciating but getting the love is blissful...

Loving the updates really like the way you show the intimate scene there was a smile on my face reading the part ...

Thanks for the lovely comment Ila... I love reading your comments every time I see them in my feed.

Hope you had a great b'day yesterday... and have a great year ahead!

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Genie

@writergenie17

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: A-Musing-Me
Genie... 🤗... Trust me to blotch up with the basics.. *pouts*...

Hi.. this Neha... 😛... good you asked me else I would have merrily carried on oblivious to the fact that i havent even shared my name.. sorry...

We reach the end... what a journey this was... one where two soulmates realise each others value in their lives... i loved how Omkara didnt waste a moment after realising what his heart wants... n then it was Gauri's turn to face the truth... n her reaction was super well done.. could totally see it before my eyes... those broken words incoherent sentences... she just had the Love of her Life confessing to her... how over whelming it was for her.. aweee... n then her sliding down n Omkara finally taking her in his arms.. such a kodak moment this... felt so much lighter seeing these two come together for eternity n then a little more.. 😃... n those promises made it even more fulfilling...

Waiting for the after credits n the epilogue... Gonna keep coming back to this story always... N super glad that we got a chance to interact all thanks to RiKara n your writing craze...

Chalo off for now... bye...

First off, very nice to formally meet you Neha... no need to apologize for stuff like this between friends. I too am very glad to have had such fun conversations with an amazing person such as yourself.

It was extra special to go through this journey with awesome people like you and the other regulars in my cheering squad. I am in love with the fact that you are able to visualize the story and enjoy every bit of it, just like I do when I write it! I am over the moon with the idea that you're gonna come back to it even after it is finished and boxed away...

I'm still on the fence about the epilogue, I don't want it to feel forced in any way so I'm struggling with a couple of different ideas for it as of now. The AC scene should be up tonight my time, which is probably tomoro morning IST.

Hope to continue our conversations over other stories...

p.s. Do you write? If not, you should think about it. Your language skills are impeccable and you express yourself very well.

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sara1990

@sara1990

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#118

I am sorry Ginie for the late reply. Thank you for the pm. You have express the love of the husband for his wife beautifully. I really love it. I really enjoyed the entire journey of Rikara express. We have witness two beautiful soul falling in love. Can't believe we have come to the end of this journey. Can't wait for the epilogue😛

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Genie

@writergenie17

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: sara1990
I am sorry Ginie for the late reply. Thank you for the pm. You have express the love of the husband for his wife beautifully. I really love it. I really enjoyed the entire journey of Rikara express. We have witness two beautiful soul falling in love. Can't believe we have come to the end of this journey. Can't wait for the epilogue😛

There's absolutely no need to say sorry for anything Sara... I'm glad we both got to be a part of this RiKara journey. Very happy that you enjoyed the story... will have a short after credits scene up in some time, still thinking about the epilogue.

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Genie

@writergenie17

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#120

Hi there everyone... I'm back with the promised after credits scene. I'mma warn you right now, it's short.

But before we get into that, I'm gonna get a wee bit emotional here, bear with me.

This is the first fanfic I've written in a long time, the first RiKara story ever and the first one I've published on IF. It has been an amazing experience to say the least and you guys are a huge part of what has made this experience so awesome for me.

I've made a bunch of cool friends among you, found some amazing people to have healthy discussions with and share in the awesomeness that is Omkara Singh Oberoi.

angelSRJ, SanyaEterna, ehmmbhluvr, rinku95, srsrs

You guys have all been amazing readers with your lovely comments and constant encouragement

AYUSHIVISHU, ...Annabella...

Both of you have been so amazing... your enthusiasm and comments have made me feel very special and motivated me to write more RiKara

sara1990

You've been among the first to comment on most chapters and that was even before I started PMing everyone... Thank you for being such a lovely person, enthusiastic RiKara fan and amazing reader!

pt311288

Prinku! You and I have had some awesome conversations through the medium of RiKara... I feel like I've made a friend and hope we can continue our talks beyond this story

IlaTanwar

Unofficial Guruji... saadar pranaam. I'm so thankful to you for being such an amazing person that you took the time to teach me the ins and outs of PMing on IF while you were out of station on work and using your mobile data

A-Musing-Me

Neha... You and I have bonded over RiKara and your amazing, insightful and funny comments. I'm thankful for having a friend like you on this forum... hopefully our friendship will extend beyond this fic and stay strong for many fics and discussions to come

DamseLInActioN

If I remember correctly, you once shot me with potatoes for ending on a cliffhanger and I made those taters into the most delicious fries that existed in the history of the universe. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for those potatoes. I love having an expressive, insightful and delightfully jovial friend like you. I haven't seen you around in some days, hope everything is going well with you.

Z.A.A

Even though we haven't had much chance to interact, the conversation we did get to have was very interesting... hopefully we could continue our discussions on other fics and forum topics too.

A big thanks also, to all the silent readers who read and liked the story. Almost 6000 views guys! I am losing my mind here...

Alright... I swear I'm done being an emotional crybaby and here's a sexy little ShivIka to help you forget that...

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A few yards away, Anika sighed in contentment as her Romantic Singh Oberoi snuggled her a bit tighter into his body and placed a soft kiss on her neck as she brushed her hair, both of them in the process of getting ready for bed

"Aapko lagta hai... kya Om aur Gauri is phaile hue raite ko samet payenge?... Mujhe chinta ho rahi hai un dono ki"

Glancing outside the window of their room, Shivaay happened to spot his younger brother walk down the stairs with his wife snuggled in his arms, their eyes trained on each other, both of them looking like they'd found heaven within the span of the last hour. Smiling to himself, Shivaay turned back to his lovely billi, happiness and contentment spreading through him knowing that his brother too had found the same love and fulfillment that made his every day worth living.

"Hmmm... mujhe nahin lagta un dono ko humari zaroorat padegi. They're capable of handling their own relationship Anika. Tumhe na ab ke liye bas ek hi relationship pe dhyaan dena hai..."

A naughty smirk was dancing on her lips but she asked in an innocent voice

"Kaunsa?"

"Billuji aur Pannika ke beech ka..." he growled in a low voice as he spun her around before pulling her against him, her hand caught in his, twisted behind her back and holding her flush to his body

"Aap mera naam ma-"

She couldn't finish what she'd intended to say because he'd swallowed her words, her breath and her thoughts when he sealed her lips with his.

... And as the saying goes, they lived happily ever after with lots of arguments, tadibaazi, smiles, laughter, loads of love and takkar ki ishqbaazi.

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And that's officially, The End... for now.

Edited by writergenie17 - 8 years ago

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