RiKara SS - Pretty Little Liars - interlude pg 13 (11/5/17) - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: A-Musing-Me

Okay... i cant stop 🤣... Get lost raises its head n i cant stop 🤣... ignore me.. get lost does that to me.. hehe..

Okay another mysterious update... its making me restless now... restless in a good way... 😃... cant wait for the story to unfold... God bless for these quick posts... thanks so much for adjusting time in your daily schedule for us readers... thank you...

Chulbul is endearing already... sarcasm .. yahooo... giving it back to Omkara in his very language is just too much fun.. yoo... he doesnt even know what tornado has hit him.. maze hain ab toh...

This alternat universe adds a distinct charm to your story... whats this RiKara connection... dying to know... Angel & Demon.. how badly he needs her n she completes him... whats their tale all about... no wonder Omkara couldnt accept that it was chulbul who dragged him out of the lanes of misery the other night 😆...

Rudy enters n so does another mystery... anika gayi kaha.. Omkara ki toh boss har taraf se maut hai.. misunderstandings galore... cant wait to read how ChulKara unfolds n where does RiKara come in...

All in all.. this mystery thriller of a story is going amazingly well..
Thanks for third time in a row... 😆😆.. thats it for tonight i guess 😆.. Babye

Neha! I love you. that's it. There's nothing more to say!😳 Your comments always make my day, make me grin like a fool even when I'm feeling down for some offline reason, especially now that my exams are looming closer. It is for comments like these I feel like updating PLL😳 So thank you for that!
I'm not going to spill the beans by commenting on your guesses, however you'll know more with this update. Probably, it'll make things clearer.
Looking forward to hear from you again!
Lots of love,
Sakura
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: angelSRJ

My omru like this!!!! Okk, accepting as its getting really interesting.

This is soon gonna be an OBro fic, just hang in there okay?😊 And thanks a lot !!😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: pt311288

ok so flashback story is here 😲

is there some revenge drama coming up anytime soon ? i mean gauri came back after 13 yr in om's life so possibilities are there 😉

anika anyway related to gauri ?

let me keep guessing and u plot a intriguing story 😆 beyond my expectation just want to check my imagination limits 😃.


nic update next part waiting😊


Revenge drama is there, but it has nothing to do with G, as for the rest of your questions I'm not gonna spoil the fun by answering them. Keep guessing😉
Thank you so much dear!😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: ehmmbhluvr

such an interesting story line...read all the chapters in one go...luvd the suspense about their past..pls do pm me and update soon😊

Thank you! I will PM when I update next😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75

Hi,

I'm in a bit of a hurry, so let's get to the update quickly!

Chapter 5

To be trusted

The sound of breaking china echoed in the silence that followed. The maid jumped back, her eyes wide with fear. The woman paid her no attention, as she turned back to what she had been doing earlier - broodingly glaring out of the window. Of cause it was barred - just like every other damn opening in this - freaking - prison, but still the breeze and the light that managed to sneak in was refreshing and soothing to an extent.

"Ma'am," the young maid tried to reason, settling the still intact glass of juice on the farthest surface she could find.

"Don't you ma'am me!" she snarled. "Now go and tell your boss, he's not going to get everything his way! Leave now, before I do some real damage!"

"At least the juice -" the maid started again.

"LEAVE!" She shrieked, banging her fists.

The maid left reluctantly, knowing her quota of handling wrath was far from over. This probably was the easiest part - her boss - was demon himself.

Watching her go Annika collapsed in to the snuggly sofa, her face buried against the crook of her elbow. She had resolved to herself that she would not cry - period! But with every passing day, locked up away from the very reason she was alive, it was not an easy job. She wondered where it had all gone wrong. Surely, the world did not get upside down in a fraction of a second, surely there were signs of the storm which she had missed out on, surely she wasn't so wrong to consider Om a friend at the beginning?

It had been three days, trapped here, all she did was replay the events again and again, trying to zero out the moment when it all begun. Trying to find a way out, to fix things. It was true, she was obsessed with fixing things like her husband used to joke. But she couldn't think of anything even remotely suspicious happening before the major show down, right after Priyanka consumed a deadly dosage of sleeping pills.

"It was my sister's fault," she recalled Om's bitter tone. "It was my sister's fault that she came to you, She trusted you to solve her problems, to save her from that monster. Tell me Shivay, what were you doing, when that creep was making my sister's life a living hell?"

"Om," as always her husband tried to reason, his own eyes brimming over with tears of guilt and pain. She knew how broken he was and was surprised that Om couldn't. The regret was plain in his face. " I was trying to help her."

Om laughed bitterly.

"Yeah right, help her by getting her married to that? Don't tell me Shivay Singh Oberoi couldn't find out the man was a trickster, a cruel maniac, don't tell me all your detectives didn't realize he lived in a slum?"

"Oh my mata Om!" Pinky had cut in. "What are you trying to imply?"

"I'm not trying to imply Choti mom," he replied, eyes still fixed on Shivay. "I'm stating that Shivay Singh Oberoi knowingly, intentionally, deliberately, destroyed my sister's life, because he was more concerned about protecting the family name. Am I wrong Shivay? You did this because you thought Prinku was pregnant?" Shivay stretched out a hand to grip Om's shoulder and he jerked it away. "Don't you dare touch me," he stepped back. "It's over Mr. SSO, whatever bond we had, as I feared your obsession with naam, khoon, kandaan had burned it off. My sister almost died because of you, in my book that is unforgivable."

His hair whipped around as he turned his heel and walked off, Shivay chasing after him. Whatever that transferred between them afterwards had sealed the deal of hatred. Annika sighed pulling herself into a ball.

One mistake was all it took, to tumble age old walls of family.

"Annika?" She jerked and looked up, noticing anew how different he was. Om - no - Omkara it was - stood there, his arms folded against his chest and hair pulled back from his pale face. There was no twinkle in his eyes, or any warmth of his old personality. She turned her face away and stared at the opposite wall. "Why aren't you eating anything?"

"Why do you care Mr. Oberoi?" She asked icily. "Aren't I better off dead?"

"Damn," he ran a hand through his hair out of habit than anything else. "Can't you just cooperate for a while?"

"I will never aid a man who tries to hurt my husband, what is it that you're after by keeping me like this?"

"I'm afraid you won't believe even if I tell you," for a moment he sounded almost broken, her heart almost melted at that voice. "Please Annika - Bhabhi, don't make this difficult for both of us."

She turned to look at him, her eyes boring into his depthless orbs. She yearned to see that old Om somewhere inside him. That Om who was her thoughtful and caring friend.

"Do you know how much he loves you? Have you any idea how much you're hurting him?"

"Annika," he clenched his jaw, his eyes squeezed shut for a moment. "Please, keep him out of this."

"What have you done to yourself?" She mused aloud. "Why Om? What changed?"

"Everything," his tone was curt once more. "I don't fancy dwelling in the past, what I am, is what I am, end of story."

"I have nothing to do with this story then," she imitated his tone. "Show yourself out."

"Annika.." he sounded exhausted.

"Leave Mr. Oberoi before I forget that you and I used to be friends!" She ignored him and buried her face in her hands once more, her frame shaking with suppressed sobs. Omkara sighed, his hand almost reached out to stroke her hair, before he stopped himself. His hand balled into a fist so that it wouldn't give up to the temptation of consoling her, he went out, shutting the door with a snap.

There was a pause in which Annika tried to catch her breath, hold herself from completely breaking down and the door opened again.

"Didn't I make myself clear?" She croaked without raising her head.

"Think of your baby," someone said from the doorway. Annika looked up to find Chulbul there, a new plate of cucumber sandwiches in his hand. Annika gave him a curious look. Chulbul walked to her and knelt at her feet. "You don't want to punish him or her, do you?"

"Who are you?"

"I know you won't believe it, but I am a friend, someone you can trust." He offered her the plate. "Please Ma'am, for your baby?"

"No," her tone was firm. "You're another of his minions."

"I'm not - at the least - one of his minions." He pulled a face. "He's not very fond of me - is he of anyone really?" He placed the plate on the stool and clapped his hands together, pretending to think. "I think not. His hobby is hating people right?"

"Then what are you doing here? And why should I trust you?" Annika sounded doubtful. "Why would you help me?"

Gauri sighed stealing a glance at the door which was safely shut.

"I guess I should give you a reason huh?" Swiftly she took off her cap and pulled her hair free of the wig. Annika's eyes widened, as the dark waves cascaded her face. "Now you know my secret." She winked at her. "Please eat something Mrs. Oberoi."

She took one of the sandwiches reluctantly, and Gauri grinned.

"Get me out of here, or please tell Shivay where I am." Annika breathed, biting into the cold piece of bread. Gauri hesitantly gripped one of her hands and squeezed.

"I will, trust me."

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As always your feedback motivates me!

Thanks for reading!

Sorry for any disappointments!

Love,

Sakura


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Posted: 8 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: coolove

Angrykara is the best
Loving is this angsty and evil streak he has
Really want to know what happened
Can't wait to read more

He makes you think there's something dark inside him huh?😳
I'm so fascinated by this quality of O.
I'm glad to find you all interested!
Tell me how you feel about chapter 5😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: .SNOWWHITE.

this looks interesting.
shakthi is grey.
anika married to Om I think.
Om himself is grey.
Vanvas track going on.
Oms drug addiction.
All d things once I wanted to see in IB is here.
update soon.
waiting waiting waiting

Didn't we all? Well, I wanted these things at some point too, so I'm getting them, one way or the other!
Thank you for loving it so far!
Looking forward to hear what you feel about future chapters!😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Z.A.A

WOW! WOW! WOW! What an interesting turn of events, this story has me hooked. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it! You're an amazing writer!!! This is just too good. Can't wait to read more, hoping you'll update soon. :)

Absolutely loving this version of all the characters. A big thumbs up for your style of writing and attention to detail.

Thank you!😳
Your comment brightened my day today when I was being tortured by an extremely boring lecture😊
I'm glad you're enjoying my take and think so highly of my work. Hopefully you'll enjoy the rest of chapters too!
Love,
Sakura
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79
Woah Sakura... what was this update... what twists what turns... what a chapter all in all...you had me going all alert while following this one... Very well done...

You've really brewed this mystery well... while we get to know a few pointers ...the larger picture remains shrouded... adds to the thrills of the story.. that page turning quality.. in this case waiting for the next update with bated breath part 😆...

So then its about ACP... i loved this spin that you added to the reel deal.. Omkara going mad about Prinku n a chain of events after that... there's certainly more to it... n Anika stays with him.. i loved their conversation... Omkara's restraint n her bewilderment... such a tragedy for both... n then our very own Chulbul walking in... she sure is an angel 😆... a breath of fresh air really...

All in all a happy customer this.. signing off for now... gald that my comments are of any help to you.. 😃.. me does keep coming back to your RiKara a lot...

Bye for now
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow, I m loving it sakura. I m loving this om, I know there must b a huge secret.

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