Lost Chances - A RiKara FF Chapter 17 on Pg 64 (05/04)

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javeria

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Awesome update

I am looking forward to read ishana and om meeting and then idea of she still want to enter in om life.

Update next chapter soon.

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: ehmmbhluvr
the way you portryaed gaurika relation is wonderful...it truly describes hw a marriage to unkown person should be dealt with...it so heartwarming to see such romanticism existing between om and gauri..beautiful story...i read all d chpters in one go..pls do update soon and pm me😊

Thank you for such a lovely comment! 🤗 I will definitely PM you in the future...

Omkara is essentially a very romantic person imo, his character has been altered a lot since the beginning of DBO... But I wanted to see how that could be altered back sometime in the future when all the chaos has been dealt with.

This is kinda my way of dealing with all the negativity that the show is throwing at us now. I've stopped watching the show since the last week cuz I don't want my muse and my Omkara to get influenced by it I also started writing something that I am not sure will end up HEA...😕

But keep a look out for the next update soon!

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: IlaTanwar
Awwieee.. their first kiss was amazing gauri had planted the kiss accidentally and omkara asking did she wanted move and her reaction yes no yes was cute... Then omkara taking the hint glad he doesn't have to be explained more. .. hehee.e...

Glad omkara discovered his wife's talent and appreciated ... Good move...

Gauri want to move ahead in a relationship and omkara being omkara held himself looks like gauri had to drop the hint or otherwise... It will be ishaana's idiotic step that will lead to this... Which will become a catalyst in their relationship... Waiting for next ... Update soon... Waited for long...

Thanks for the lovely comment Ila!

I'm glad you liked the update and OmRi's first kiss... In my headcanon, Omkara is a very supportive and encouraging husband so definitely he would give Gauri everything she needed to succeed in any way she wanted.

Also, Om is definitely a gentleman who'll never even think of taking advantage of Gauri's emotional involvement to get physical with her... She's gonna have to drop some pretty heavy hints to get things going I think. 😳

But I'm definitely not going to make them wait two more years till they meet Ishaana once again to have them think of becoming husband and wife in every sense...😆

Will update soon...

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: pt311288

wait worth-ed liked it a lot😃
lovey dover rikara are so cute😳

update next part soon

Oh Prinku... big compliment if you said it was worth the wait!

Glad you liked lovey-dovey RiKara so much... stay tuned for next update😃

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
awesome Loved it
it's superb the way you portrayed their relationship
the growth of their comfort it's fantastic
om is too caring...there is a naughty side also
their first kiss and confession was awesome
being in love is wonderful but the journey to fall in love will be more beautiful...

Thanks for the lovely comment Aparna...😳

I'm so glad you guys liked the RiKara I'm trying to write. It's a bit strain inducing these days to draw on my reserves of positivity to combat all the anger and hatred the show is giving us these days... I've actually stopped watching since the last week or so.

But yeah, this is my self-therapy by giving us all some rock-solid RiKara in love. 😃 Stay tuned for update!

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Annika_Ishqbaaz
the update was lovely n amazing,Geenie ji..

Thank you so much for commenting Annika-ji!

I'm very glad you liked the update! Stay tuned for more to come soon...

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: ...Anabella...
Res will unres asap have to read the whole story

Take your time Annabella... 😃

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: A-Musing-Me
Genieee... 🤗... If you are gonna give such a rocking backstory then i dont even wanna meet Ishana.. 😆.. Seriously yaa ...
RiKara are so real here... n indian tv are nevergonna give us such a couple n the distant future.. i have my netflix for that so no complaints really n you guys here on the forum .. thanks so much... i love theway they help each other discover their talents n skills... thats what couples do.. 😃.. n when one things lead to another thats like the icing on this red velvet cake that we have here .. n i love it ... n that newly-into-relationship feel n discovering each other period is adorable n bliss... i could go on n on with reading about it hehe... n i guess Gauri needs to hint her husband to move on yeh banda toh already too happy hai 😆..

Chalo thanks for this... bye.. :)

Neha... I just love reading your comments! Each and every one of them is a gem that I store carefully in my treasure chest of awesomeness... 😆

I'm so happy you liked my RiKara... and the newly-in-a-relationship feeling is the best isn't it? Gauri's gonna be dropping hints left and right pretty soon... 😳 with the help of someone else 😉

Netflix and red velvet cake?... I love where you live... where do you live btw? If you don't mind me asking...

Oh and stay tuned for an update!

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: sara1990
I love the way you portray Rikara's relationship. The journey is great. Let see what happen next? Are you going to write the birthday party scene as well after the flashblacks are over? Waiting eagerly for your next update

Thanks for the lovely comment Sara!

I'm happy you liked the latest update... The Birthday party is definitely gonna be there taking up a significant amount of screen time once we get back to the present. Updates coming soon!

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Awesome update
I am looking forward to read ishana and om meeting and then idea of she still want to enter in om life.
Update next chapter soon.

Thanks for such a lovely comment... Welcome to our little corner of RiKara heaven... 😊

We're gonna see Ishaana and Om meet and Ishaana get up to a lot more in the coming chapters, so stay tuned for updates!