Episode 16/03 Anyone else disappointed with Shivika track? - Page 2

Originally posted by: Anubhooti_P

Yesss

The scenes came as shock to me... KYA THA YEH

Though I'm obsessed with ShivIka😳 but skipping of levels in ShivIka relationship is what I didn't like

I also felt Nakkul's voice was dubbed(heavy wale dialogue ke tim e), scene acha tha but feel nahi aayi😆. Did anyone also felt the same or just me who thought that the voice was dubbed?

I never complain about the episodes but I feel that much effort is not put into writing scenes. The scene after public acceptance should have been poignant but all we got was an aww. It is like Shivika have fallen into a pattern suddenly, as if they have skipped a couple of steps and reached straight on top.

They were very awkward with each other till yesterday...today they act as if they have been married for ages... I found first Annika's aww out of context and forced ...

Todays episode had Shivaay telling Anika that she should live with his habits or something so what happened to his NKK hang up? What happened to him telling Om that he can never have Anika as the mother of his kids? What happened to not knowing her past? What happened to serious talks about feelings and emotions? Where is his "I love you damn it?"

I guess what is said in DBO should be left there and cannot be carried forward to IB...

I presume SSO hung up his NKK boots when he accepted her as his wife publicly. I do not think it will come up unless CVs decide to give a decent closure to that track.

If Shivika have accepted their love and are in a relationship or marriage as you call it, isn't Shivaay curious abt her past? why is that track still not up? At least a talk about Anika's past-isn't it about time?

Guess the CVs are trying to show that Shivaay has accepted Annika irrespective of her unknown past...Complete acceptance no questions asked - Mahan atma Shivaay...( see how much he changed from episode 1 and an amazing transformation it is, isnt it??)

Today, I thought that the dialogues fell flat and the hug seemed forced. I was hoping for a scene like the one that happened when Anika was hurt saving Tia and she spoke about being an orphan- that scene was so poignant or even the scene where Anika spoke of love but even though Shivaay spoke of her fear of darkness, he didn't ask where it came from. Even though he spoke about her bracelet being important to her, he didn't ask her why.

U thought the hug was forced ...I had this weird feeling that it is not our Shivaay but his doppelganger standing there ...he eyes were different..his facial expressions were over the top...

If he asks her about fears and bracelet what is left for future episodes ...CVs will have crack their brains for something impressive that can grab the eyeballs and also that can be marketable to TRP Aunties ...need to keep the TRP metre running.

Tia is ousted from the house. There were no convo abt Tia afterwards. Where is the aftermath of actions- even daksh for that matter? What is the equation between Anika and Pinky now? Has Pinky given up on her son and no longer cares that she isn't getting any sophisticated rich daughter in law?

CVs are making a good use of the good old phrase - let the bygones be bygones. Tia and her Pia are busy honeymooning..Daksh must be busy getting himself a makeover ...

Pinky Aunty will be Pinky Aunty - taunts and sarcasms are her forte and she will never give up on them

I never make a negative post but I feel that there is no proper continuity to scenes. There is a lot unresolved between Shivika and either they are going to the aww phase or discussing things about spending life together.

I feel like I have skipped a couple of pages in a novel and though I can make a sense of where the plot is going, there is a restlessness when it comes to the missing bits. I should have been going aww over these scenes and I'm like "Where did this even come from?"

Anyone else feels the same?

Welcome to the club... I guess there are many more of the likes of us here experiencing same sentiments.

To be very honest today's episode was a big let down irrespective of Shivika scenes...As I mentioned here earlier today, old charm and magic is missing...It was a big let down after a really good run of episodes ...

Originally posted by: LTLFan

I think NKK stopped mattering in case of anika after daksh ONS MU cleared. And i don't give importance to one dialog said in DBO. He accepted her in public then why do you think NKK still matters?

Originally posted by: Felicity1234

i think people should forget DBO, i personally dont watch DBO, so dont care what happens there.

but yes Nkak is here to stay and i'm myself confused, however it's human nature, he announced her as his biwi and really cares about her

and till now he didnt encounter any negative thing which made his sleepy Nkak awake. no1 insulted nor mocked him, his shares werent affected...

his nkak will return again.

for my part, he returned back everything Anika told him on Monday😳

editing was bad, Bua scene was too random.. however didnt feel shivika was fake or forced... they are still living in a bubble of theirs, let some problems come and burst it 😊 first

Originally posted by: ancy19

I never complain about the episodes but I feel that much effort is not put into writing scenes. The scene after public acceptance should have been poignant but all we got was an aww. It is like Shivika have fallen into a pattern suddenly, as if they have skipped a couple of steps and reached straight on top.

They were very awkward with each other till yesterday...today they act as if they have been married for ages... I found first Annika's aww out of context and forced ...

Todays episode had Shivaay telling Anika that she should live with his habits or something so what happened to his NKK hang up? What happened to him telling Om that he can never have Anika as the mother of his kids? What happened to not knowing her past? What happened to serious talks about feelings and emotions? Where is his "I love you damn it?"

I guess what is said in DBO should be left there and cannot be carried forward to IB...

I presume SSO hung up his NKK boots when he accepted her as his wife publicly. I do not think it will come up unless CVs decide to give a decent closure to that track.

If Shivika have accepted their love and are in a relationship or marriage as you call it, isn't Shivaay curious abt her past? why is that track still not up? At least a talk about Anika's past-isn't it about time?

Guess the CVs are trying to show that Shivaay has accepted Annika irrespective of her unknown past...Complete acceptance no questions asked - Mahan atma Shivaay...( see how much he changed from episode 1 and an amazing transformation it is, isnt it??)

Today, I thought that the dialogues fell flat and the hug seemed forced. I was hoping for a scene like the one that happened when Anika was hurt saving Tia and she spoke about being an orphan- that scene was so poignant or even the scene where Anika spoke of love but even though Shivaay spoke of her fear of darkness, he didn't ask where it came from. Even though he spoke about her bracelet being important to her, he didn't ask her why.

U thought the hug was forced ...I had this weird feeling that it is not our Shivaay but his doppelganger standing there ...he eyes were different..his facial expressions were over the top...

If he asks her about fears and bracelet what is left for future episodes ...CVs will have crack their brains for something impressive that can grab the eyeballs and also that can be marketable to TRP Aunties ...need to keep the TRP metre running.

Tia is ousted from the house. There were no convo abt Tia afterwards. Where is the aftermath of actions- even daksh for that matter? What is the equation between Anika and Pinky now? Has Pinky given up on her son and no longer cares that she isn't getting any sophisticated rich daughter in law?

CVs are making a good use of the good old phrase - let the bygones be bygones. Tia and her Pia are busy honeymooning..Daksh must be busy getting himself a makeover ...

Pinky Aunty will be Pinky Aunty - taunts and sarcasms are her forte and she will never give up on them

I never make a negative post but I feel that there is no proper continuity to scenes. There is a lot unresolved between Shivika and either they are going to the aww phase or discussing things about spending life together.

I feel like I have skipped a couple of pages in a novel and though I can make a sense of where the plot is going, there is a restlessness when it comes to the missing bits. I should have been going aww over these scenes and I'm like "Where did this even come from?"

Anyone else feels the same?

Welcome to the club... I guess there are many more of the likes of us here experiencing same sentiments.

To be very honest today's episode was a big let down irrespective of Shivika scenes...As I mentioned here earlier today, old charm and magic is missing...It was a big let down after a really good run of episodes ...

Originally posted by: Illuminati07

Its not about one dialogue said in DBO and its not about what he did to save the day when it came to Daksh. There beliefs made him SSO and were far too deep rooted for him to let them go because of izzat and Daksh accusations and circumstances.

The only thing he should have let it go for was his love for Anika and that needed to be put in words and not awws.

Even if he is over the NKK thing and has genuinely accepted Anika, there needed to be some repercussions to that scene. After Tia exited, everyone carried on from where they left off. This women nearly destroyed you, where r d repercussions? Why didnt we have Pinky berating herself about how she trusted Tia or worrying that Shivaay will be stuck with Anika or Obros and Anika moment celebrating the success of their plan but no, it was Daksh re entry.

Pinky is still in denial mode...the problem with Pinky is t hat she needs to get a first hand experience of being taken for a ride..only then will she believe...She is like Shivaay or i should say Shivaay takes after his mother ...seeing is believing ...will not put strain of her grey matter to connect the dots...So that being the case Pinky Aunty continues to be in the state of denial ....Initial episode she was shown as smart and shrewd but later on her character was watered down to this pitiful state ...blame it on CVs...( CVs are my favourite scapegoat for everything that goes wrong in OM)

Now Shivaay announced that Anika is his wife, suddenly they are behaving like an old married couple. Their journey has been a rocky one. Isnt Shivaay interested in knowing if Anika has someone back home- any family at all? She never clearly specified that she is an orphan. Is their marriage consummated or they skipped that as well? Isnt "THE TALK" mor importat than the awws and hug me's.

( In Indian Telly world "consummation" is much eagerly awaited scene...and it take over two - three years to reach that point...IB is just 9 months in running ...you will have to wait for that ...may be end of this year your wishes may be fulfilled .Shivaay is in a perpetual crisis management at hishome front so much so he has no time for office work...against thisbackdrop getting a hug or two and few aww moments is a big thing...

But more importantly, the scenes dont end properly. Ending seems abrupt. There is no proper continuity and lately the screen play sucks as well.

no doubt on that ...I am glad someone shares the same feeling...t