Episode 16/03 Anyone else disappointed with Shivika track?

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I never complain about the episodes but I feel that much effort is not put into writing scenes. The scene after public acceptance should have been poignant but all we got was an aww. It is like Shivika have fallen into a pattern suddenly, as if they have skipped a couple of steps and reached straight on top.

Todays episode had Shivaay telling Anika that she should live with his habits or something so what happened to his NKK hang up? What happened to him telling Om that he can never have Anika as the mother of his kids? What happened to not knowing her past? What happened to serious talks about feelings and emotions? Where is his "I love you damn it?"

If Shivika have accepted their love and are in a relationship or marriage as you call it, isn't Shivaay curious abt her past? why is that track still not up? At least a talk about Anika's past-isn't it about time?

Today, I thought that the dialogues fell flat and the hug seemed forced. I was hoping for a scene like the one that happened when Anika was hurt saving Tia and she spoke about being an orphan- that scene was so poignant or even the scene where Anika spoke of love but even though Shivaay spoke of her fear of darkness, he didn't ask where it came from. Even though he spoke about her bracelet being important to her, he didn't ask her why.

Tia is ousted from the house. There were no convo abt Tia afterwards. Where is the aftermath of actions- even daksh for that matter? What is the equation between Anika and Pinky now? Has Pinky given up on her son and no longer cares that she isn't getting any sophisticated rich daughter in law?

I never make a negative post but I feel that there is no proper continuity to scenes. There is a lot unresolved between Shivika and either they are going to the aww phase or discussing things about spending life together.

I feel like I have skipped a couple of pages in a novel and though I can make a sense of where the plot is going, there is a restlessness when it comes to the missing bits. I should have been going aww over these scenes and I'm like "Where did this even come from?"

Anyone else feels the same?

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Ilin thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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me me me agree to everything you say about todays episode

No continuity in shivika scenes past few days all of sudden todays SSO dialogue fell flat and hug had no chemestry looked really forced both actors were flat addition to dubbed voice made the impact worse

Highly dissapointed
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Everyone feels the same...suddenly they jumped into this level...now they are behaving like real perfect husband and wife...like there is no awkwardness...
Its like they are ready to take there relationship to next level...it seems so unreal...he said to om that they has no future...now he is saying you should be ready to live with this tadibaaz...really wats going on...there is no continuity at all

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Posted: 8 years ago
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And there is no proper ending of shivika scenes... They are rushing with the scenes.. no proper edting 🤔 the way they are portraying the scenes is not good.. surbhi n nakul are wonderful actors but the editing part 😵 i thnk director himself dnt knw which part is to edit and which part not to🤓
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Posted: 8 years ago
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shivika scenes look forced now!!! everything actually, bas trps kay naam par kuch bhi!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yesss
The scenes came as shock to me... KYA THA YEH
Though I'm obsessed with ShivIka😳 but skipping of levels in ShivIka relationship is what I didn't like

I also felt Nakkul's voice was dubbed(heavy wale dialogue ke tim e), scene acha tha but feel nahi aayi 😆. Did anyone also felt the same or just me who thought that the voice was dubbed?
Edited by Anubhooti_P - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yeah it's weirdly different, i think that hug was also a part of dream, it doesn't look like shivay, even his voice is different, may be it's a dreamof anika , today's shivika scean being a dream can be explanation for this weird scene, if not it all seems forced but i will be happy if it's not dream😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yes. It feels like I am watching the future IB, where all past mysteries are solved, all fake beliefs are broken. Where everything is, suddenly, fine.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I think NKK stopped mattering in case of anika after daksh ONS MU cleared. And i don't give importance to one dialog said in DBO. He accepted her in public then why do you think NKK still matters?

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello,

yes, there was so much problem in editing, especially brightness!

Regarding Shivika:
1st of All, Ishqbaaaz & Dbo both are diff! I also said at that time that it's just his position & in simple words " just random scene"!

Shivika is very diff couple & you know about it, now they are just taking a baby step in their relations! Whatever you have asked, will surely come!😳

PS- Everyone has diff view, nice post, you have points!😛😊

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