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.Dalisay.

@.Dalisay.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Such an amazing OS Mahi.. Provided much needed insight of Annika's story.. Her history and her shattered dreams broke my heart. 🥺

Loved it so much.. Write more. 🤗

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Shivikaishkara

@Shivikaishkara

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: tanu_15
Loved it ...
If possible continue it ...Make it a ss...

Thank you!!😳

I don't know about SS. But I'll give it a try if something strikes me.😳

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Shivikaishkara

@Shivikaishkara

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: .Dalisay.
Such an amazing OS Mahi.. Provided much needed insight of Annika's story.. Her history and her shattered dreams broke my heart. 🥺
Loved it so much.. Write more. 🤗

Thanks Rucha🤗

Yaar I've been wondering about Anika's past since the beginning but CVs have conveniently forgotten about it. So tried to make it myself.😳

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Madiha123

@Madiha123

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Ishhh!!!!! Sorry yaar mahi galati se mistake hogayi waise I won't mind agar Teju aur aap milkar is OS ka ek dhamakedaar end dedo ...will be waiting for you guys together debute with a dawraza tod end

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Shivikaishkara

@Shivikaishkara

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Madiha123
Ishhh!!!!! Sorry yaar mahi galati se mistake hogayi waise I won't mind agar Teju aur aap milkar is OS ka ek dhamakedaar end dedo ...will be waiting for you guys together debute with a dawraza tod end

No need to say sorry😳

We'll sure think about it.😳

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Beautiful...really hoping that Annika in the show will have courage to face her reality and make the tough decision that needs to be made.

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Krishi

@Black_Maniac

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

I'll be reading this soon Mahi 🤗

I promise this will be the first I unreserve after exams :D

*Unreserved*

This was one beautiful piece sis😳

👏 Something about the simplicity was ❤️

The way you gave a new dimension to Anika's life.

A different way of getting into her brain, her back-story.

Her dreams, all broken, time to time🤔

The way you wrote about her shattered wishes... How she wanted to erase this time of her life, how being a pseudo-member wasn't enough, how she needed a husband who would stand by her, how she was selfish this time, wanting more from someone in her life, how she decided to give up where she saw no hope... It was heartbreakingly amazing 💔

I am telling you, you should write more often. This was emotionally amazing 😳

P.S. I stood by my promise😆

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Shivikaishkara

@Shivikaishkara

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: --Nargis--
Beautiful...really hoping that Annika in the show will have courage to face her reality and make the tough decision that needs to be made.

Thank you😳

I've wanted Anika to take a step since a long time.

P.S. i love your signature❤️