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Madiha123

@Madiha123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Teju can you update second part already I just can't wait for next update Awesome start waiting for an update hope to get 1 soon ...like really soon

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Shivikaishkara

@Shivikaishkara

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Madiha123
Teju can you update second part already I just can't wait for next update Awesome start waiting for an update hope to get 1 soon ...like really soon

Hi. I'm Mahi actually. Teju is 'Zehnaseeb'. She told me the OS i had written was nice and i should post it on MF.😳

Thank you for the compliments!!😳

I don't know if there will be a second part. I wrote this as a stand alone shot to show Anika's emotions and life😳

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Shivikaishkara

@Shivikaishkara

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
this is awesome..

Thank you!!😳

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Shivikaishkara

@Shivikaishkara

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Muku007
Lovely... So nice

Thank you😳

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Madiha123
Teju can you update second part already I just can't wait for next update Awesome start waiting for an update hope to get 1 soon ...like really soon

Oh sheesh.. Mahi is d one who has written this OS.. may be U are mistaking hers as me.. I just encouraged her to post it... but U gave me such tempting offer... 😆 I will try to write Shivay's monologues after this.. n If U guys will like it.. with Mahi's permission.. we both will try to write beatiful end for this OS with shivIka union.. 😳 but can't promise U that.. as MAhi should be ready to write with me.. such a non-writer I am 😛.. she is now experienced with this OS.. senior writer.. 😉

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Shivikaishkara

@Shivikaishkara

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: --Zehnaseeb--

Oh sheesh.. Mahi is d one who has written this OS.. may be U are mistaking hers as me.. I just encouraged her to post it... but U gave me such tempting offer... 😆 I will try to write Shivay's monologues after this.. n If U guys will like it.. with Mahi's permission.. we both will try to write beatiful end for this OS with shivIka union.. 😳 but can't promise U that.. as MAhi should be ready to write with me.. such a non-writer I am 😛.. she is now experienced with this OS.. senior writer.. 😉

Yeah teju let's do it!. You write shivaay's monologue, i polish it into sentences and post it!!

Main senior writer? Abhi toh beginner😆

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Anu

@chottekikhushi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Maahi yaara,

This was so beautiful!! It was simple and yet filled with so much longing from Ani for a family that it broke my heart a little bit!! But I am glad she chose to walk away...living with Shivaay, knowing that she would be nothing more than a burden or responsibility is not Ani's style at all !! And I want to see the old spunky Khuddari girl back..do write more Mahi, this was lovely!!

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Shivikaishkara

@Shivikaishkara

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: chottekikhushi
Maahi yaara,
This was so beautiful!! It was simple and yet filled with so much longing from Ani for a family that it broke my heart a little bit!! But I am glad she chose to walk away...living with Shivaay, knowing that she would be nothing more than a burden or responsibility is not Ani's style at all !! And I want to see the old spunky Khuddari girl back..do write more Mahi, this was lovely!!

Anu🤗 thanks for the compliments. I am a fan of your OSs so coming from you, this was huge😳

I like to think Anika sticking with Oberoi family this long is due to her longing for family and love. Only thing that makes a little sense of her butchered khuddari

Edited by Shivikaishkara - 8 years ago