Shivika ft GauOmRu TS: Ne Dis Jamais Je t'aime(LAST PART Pg 18 12/05)

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Mystery1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Shivay's last words to Anika were beautiful...

Amazing epilogue...

Continue soon😊

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aarushi04

@aarushi04

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Awesome update!!
Anika is coming to India...for a wedding!!!
ShivOmRu r also going to the same wedding...
finally Shivika gonna meet after 1 year...
Can't wait for epilogue 2...
Continue soon
Thnx for pm

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javeria

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Interesting story

Can't wait to read the epilogue completely.

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Sitey

@ramaasita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Just stumbled upon this piece of work, and I must say I'm blown away. This is utter and literal perfection! You have portrayed ShivIka in a way I can only dare imagine them, and it is incredible beyond comprehension. I'm so glad to see this Shivaay that willingly let Anika fly at the cost of his pain, giving complete meaning to If you love someone let them go. The relationship of Anika with his family that you portrayed is also something I've been waiting forever to see on screen.

The epilogue, it pains me to see Shivaay as this dark, broken man and yet, it intrigues me like anything. Desperately waiting for their reunion.

The literature, the songs, the emotions, everything has me begging for more yet I'm more than content with the ending you have given. Waiting on the epilogue part 2. Amazing work, you. :)

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Sanya

@tsafriends

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Sam i was impressed with you waging war pice and this one also blew my mind the story is so emotional for both of them love how you portrayed what they mean to each other and what does to them being apart amazing job yaar.

my favourite part of the update is

"It will be My Paanika, till I fall off the face of the earth; and if we are to never meet, remember, when I breathe my last- it shall be with your name on my lips. It's you: Always and forever"

OMG the words that you use to show what he feels just perfection.

And i have never wanted so hard for a epilogue to go on and not to end ever waiting eagerly for your next update.

Edited by tsafriends - 8 years ago

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WhiteNoise

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Edited on pg 8.

Edited by Animagus_Sirius - 8 years ago

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Sam98

@Sam98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah
Heart touching...
The sepration of 12 months...In these time they both are going through the same pain...
Anika and shivaay is trying to concentrate on their bussiness...They are two robots without soul...
They miss each other badly...But they pretend they are okay...but they are still there...the memories are their...when try to forget it will be hard...it will be impossible...
They are miles apart.but their soul is tied by a invisible thread...
The family is supporting both.They know their pain...
Always and forever Shivaay, till I fall off the face of the earth- This words ...it is her mind
Anika madly loves him...
It will be My Paanika, till I fall off the face of the earth; and if we are to never meet, remember, when I breathe my last- it shall be with your name on my lips. It's you: Always and forever"shivaay's condition is also same...
The words beautifully portrayed their feelings for each other...
Eagerly waiting for the second part...

Thank you so much for the detailed commentary 😳 yes you really did get the gist of what I was attempting to portray😃, I'm really glad that you enjoyed it and liked the dialogues. The second part should be up in the coming week!! Thank you once again really appreciate your input!!!

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Sam❤️

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Sam98

@Sam98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Animagus_Sirius
I'm reserving for now

Unress
Finally caught up with earlier parts!!
Woah!! I never knew u were into writing...
That was really amazing piece of work
Though I m not much invested in ShivIka ,I liked how you portrayed Anika's emotions and Oberoi clan waiting for the return of Old Ani...and the slight shift in Shivaay's priority list woW
Last part was damn emotional Yarr..12 moths of separation.
This broken Shivayy,had my heart.Every bond was portrayed perfectly ..
Beautifully written!!
Update soon

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Anshi

HAYYEEE!! You didn't know😆 why do you think I over-analyse and ramble on with everything you write- aadat se majboor hu yaar!! I didn't expect you to read it tbh😲 I know you're a RuMya fan, (don't worry un dono par bhi kuch likhna baaki hai😉) BUT THANK YOU!! Honestly so sweet for reading this, and I'm over the moon that you enjoyed it, despite the pairing- although next update- I do have a bit of Gaurika if you like them 😳 Thank you so so so much Bro🤗

Love,

Sam❤️