Shivika ft GauOmRu TS: Ne Dis Jamais Je t'aime(LAST PART Pg 18 12/05) - Page 15

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Posted: 8 years ago

Sam!🤗
First of all You can throw anything on me--chameli,vase,tomatoes,eggs or even a chair on me if possible!😆 And I swear I will not get offended else I will be smiling and deep down praying that please god safe me,let the thing don't touch my body but if you will be a sharp shooter then I can't help it. I will say just One thing"God just please after the end of the Day I must be alive"[Well will be chanting this mantra like anything 🤣

Second of all, Sorry sorry sorry!Oh gosh I think I have to fill this whole post with this mery word but I can't do it now,But still I'm really Sorry for being a jerk for replying this late.

Third of all, let me clap my hands first 👏👏👏👏👏 Oh gosh! Sam this story was wonderful and really heart touching! You don't know how much Iwanted to hit myself for leaving this story for this long,but anyways,this was worth the wait!😃
I always like stories where each and every moment is minutely ditailed and this what you have done here.The emotions were well portrayed ⭐️ Everything was to the point,I never got to a point where I think that here it was a little less or little more,it was perfect!❤️

And the songs and one liners in between the chapters were cherry on the top!❤️ The one I loved the most was---

*pyaar maine toh nibhaya; tere rehte, tere saath bhi
sach kahoon toh, tujhse zyada
chaaha tujhko, tere baad bhi*

(I don't think is it a song lyrics? Does it?) But anyways this was fav.!

As you know I too hate sad ending!,you truely know so I really loved the epilogues! Oh gosh you were brilliant at the last one,the confession the emotions the details everything was LOVE! just LOVE! The way you showed shivaay realising that annika was his sun was the loviest scene,I mean everything was awsm but this part was beautiful! And the confession also.❤️

But I would have loved if you had continued this but the end was lovely.No offence on that!😆

Do come up with more.One of the best works I've ever read on this forum.😳

P.s.Yaar I'm really sorry for being late!

With Love,
-Anya ❤️

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Rishiak47

Superb, awesome, fantastic I don't have words to describe the emotions that u created in me after reading your story. Thank you for giving such a wonderful story to us.👏



I am so sorry for the delay in my reply but THANK YOU! Thank you so much for giving this story your time and love! The credit goes to all the lovely readers who inspire me! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Reunion of shivika...It was a beautiful update.

You are really a brilliant writer,who know how to portray emotions.
Their love,longing,pain...The sepration between them was a test for them.They were away from each other but they were feeling the love.The distance only made it stronger.
The plan of Gauri and Rajveer was a great success.
Shivaay sensed Anika ,the cosmic connection between them is still there.
The sepration made a tough path.But true love always win.




Really sweet comment!! 🤗 Yaar! I don't know what to say apart from thank youuu so so very much! You absolutely ROCK! 😳 I'm really glad you enjoyed the story!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nohsin10

Awesome and fantastic update

Just loved it
Well written



Thank youuu 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shamrocks

Its beautiful. Beyond amazing. I never imagined that anyone could write so beautifully. Words are not enough to describe the masterpiece you have presented.

You have captured the essence of what love truly is. You have put in words what I thought was impossible to write.
And the best part was when Shivaay realised that it was not he but Anika who was the sun. The sun who gives life to everything around.
Just awesome.



That's extremely kind of you to say! 😆 I just dabble with writing- but thank you nonetheless for such a beautiful comment that has made me smile a 240Volt smile!

Love
Sam 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina744

Superb, mind blowing, blockbuster...just love it a lot... Shivika reunion...
You have described their emotions so beautifully...
The plan was ekdam khidkitod... Boleto jhakkas... Finally Misunderstanding cleared
Tnx fr the pm...



😆 YES! You enjoyed it and that makes me immensely happy! Kya yaar blush karvadiya! 😆 😳 In all seriousness though Thank you for the lovely comment and taking time out to read this story!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tsafriends

UNRES😳

Sam yaar OK JUST TELL ME WHEN YOU ARE GOING TO PUBLISH YOU FIRST BOOK BECAUSE I WILL BUY IT IN EVERY STORE THIS IS MIND BLOWING i am speechless i read it multiple times before i commented and yaar reading this was a delight i was feeling every emotion possible this just beyond words when way you write is incredible the way you described what love is to them though anikas words shivaay words ahhh i was literally glued to my lap top reading it i haven't read something as beautiful as this MASTERPIECE OF YOURS I AM SPEECHLESS THIS IS PURE PERFECTION .❤️❤️❤️

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YAAR!!! I am so sorry my friend for not getting back to you earlier! I have been terribly busy! 😭 BUT THANK YOU SO SO SO SO MUCH 😆 🤗 I read this back then and it made my day and I am reading your comment once more and I must say it has made the rainy morning fill with a lil warmth and sunshine 😳 YOU ARE TOO SWEET! Okay I am not that good of a writer to be published but one of the best compliments a dabbling writer can get! I am so happy, like to the point of overjoyed that you have enjoyed this story and that you have stuck throughout! It means an awful lot to me, so thank you for your time and patience and all the love that you have sent my way 🤗 YOU ARE AMAZING!

Lots of love,
Sam 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: moon99

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THIS ENTIRE SERIES WAS EQUIVILENT TO PERFECT, MAGNIFIECENT, SPEELBOUNDING, OUT OF THIS WORLD, PAINFULLY BEAUTIFUL, GHAR-TOD (in Anika's Language), ETC... I MEAN THIS WAS MORE THAN WHAT I HAVE LISTED!!!!!

Seriously, you are a fantastic writer, Sammy ( Is it okay if I call you Sammy?) 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

I'm so happy you gave Shivika a happy ending, but kya ending thi!!!!!???!!!! 😲 😲 It was ek dum FADHU!!!! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ The emotions that traveled through your entire series, especially this post was just incredible!!!!!!! *flying kisses and tons of hugs for making this story the way it is* 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

The way you write is just beautiful! You really do play with words, and it's just so capturing and magical. When ever I read any of you work, I feel like I'm floating on clouds in just a land of magic.


I know I am just ranting on and on, but what to do? 😔 This story has brewed so many emotions in me and made me feel different intensities of pain that I couldn't even imagine... hence, my feelings are coming out in a mess like this! 😳

You know, I can basically continue writing praises of your work, but I'll hold them for your other pending FF 😉

Loads f Love,
- Sims 🤗

P.S Hopefully you don't end up like this --> 🤪 after reading my post 😳



SIMS MERI JAAN 😲 I have gone mad COMPLETELY MAD 😆 🤪 after reading your tremendous comment! Gosh how sweet you are 🤗 THANK YOU SO MUCH! For all this love and appreciation that I cannot for the life of me justify! I wish to apologise for not replying so much sooner! I really should have but I promise if I hadn't been as busy as I was, I truly would have! I just cannot seem to find the right words to thank you with! Everytime I read this comment it makes my heart so so happy- it makes stories worth writing, knowing people have taken precious time out to read it ❤️

You may surely call me Sammy 😆 And I hate disappointing but I don't want you waiting up for the FF as I am completely out of the zone of completing it 😭 If and when time permits I may pick it up once more but for the time being I have suspended all writing- I did start another OS on Shivika but I don't think I'll finish it, But it's awfully sweet when readers like you are so hopeful that I cannot for the life of me wish to say no 😳

Thank you again for being so very kind, and generous in your comment- it has made my day once more!!!

LOTS of love,
Sam 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
i loved it the story was fabulous i loved how you depicted anika spirit that has gone missing even in the show it has become a bit lacking the anika in the start was tough she didt give a damn what people thought about her she didnt care what happened to others she as just a free spirit
the way you depicted shivaay feeling and finally somewhere in a story i have seen how oberoi family actually understands her pain trys to make her happy instead of just caring for shivaay happiness i loved each andevery part of it superb
i cried and laughed with each part and om gauri ka milne was cherry on top

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: inzamam308

i loved it the story was fabulous i loved how you depicted anika spirit that has gone missing even in the show it has become a bit lacking the anika in the start was tough she didt give a damn what people thought about her she didnt care what happened to others she as just a free spirit

the way you depicted shivaay feeling and finally somewhere in a story i have seen how oberoi family actually understands her pain trys to make her happy instead of just caring for shivaay happiness i loved each andevery part of it superb
i cried and laughed with each part and om gauri ka milne was cherry on top



HEY! Thank you so much for your sweet comment 😳 I had initially wanted Anika to go off on her own path but I do enjoy a happy ending as much as the next person- which is why I made sure Anika and Shivaay were divorced before they got back together, to portray their love as transcendent and not forced! Completely agree Anika's essence has been butchered time and time again on the show 😆 That's all really nice of you to say and I'm super happy that you enjoyed the story [:D/]

Thank you once again!!

Love,
Sam

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