Shivika ft GauOmRu TS: Ne Dis Jamais Je t'aime(LAST PART Pg 18 12/05)

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Aaradhaya1688

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Awesome and amazing

Just loved it

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Sam98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Illuminati07
I luv Oms words
n i love love this update.
This needs 2 b shown in d show
The intensity of ur work is amazin
Please update sooonish
Awesome update

YAAY😳, I know its a Shivika TS but I couldn't help giving OmRu a few more lines than they have in the show😆, Im so glad you enjoyed it, will update soon!!

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Sam98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: aaradhaya1688
Awesome and amazing
Just loved it

Thank you😳 the next part is up!

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ArhiIPKKND

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Oh wow...such an emotional end n i love to think that it is open ended as in theres a chance for them if they make an effort towards each other positively this time...i like d way u made shivaays sadness so palpable...would love an epilogue...

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Oh this was beautiful. Exactly how I envisaged it to happen. I love how you portrayed Anika staying strong and having an identity of her own...and yet finding the courage to love again in the future.

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zeherili

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

This was absolutely beautiful - from the incorporation of the song to the last lines of chapter 3

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Aaradhaya1688

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Awe amazing and heartwrenching update loved it

Pls pls write an epilogue for this one

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Sam98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: ArhiIPKKND
Oh wow...such an emotional end n i love to think that it is open ended as in theres a chance for them if they make an effort towards each other positively this time...i like d way u made shivaays sadness so palpable...would love an epilogue...

Aww I'm so glad you liked it!! Yes I was initially just going to end it at Anika singing the song, but I hate to see them part- so I let them momentarily remain together 😳

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Sam98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: YeHoKyaRahaHai
Oh this was beautiful. Exactly how I envisaged it to happen. I love how you portrayed Anika staying strong and having an identity of her own...and yet finding the courage to love again in the future.

Thank youuu 😳 really glad you enjoyed it and were not disappointed with the ending 😃 x

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Sam98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

AN:

HEY Everyone😳 I hope you are doing great!

So I am actually in a little dilemma- I have been penning the epilogue to this TS for the past two days (Those who hated the cliffhanger can rejoice😆) BUT I wanted to know whether you would like it to be posted as a 1 part epilogue; 2 part epilogue OR a sequel. The reason being I have already surpassed a 2000 word count and best believe I am still not finished *facepalm*, I think I went on a little Gaurika tangent 😆 + the heavy dialogues!

Do let me know what you think- I would very much appreciate any input!

Love,

-Sam

Edited by Sam98 - 8 years ago