Ting! Ting! It's Love!! ShivIka SS. Part 5 updt on pg:17

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Shivaay...


She had been running away from me. Might be wondering who? It's none other than my wife..."My Legally wedded Wife". Sounds totally weird right?! I am feeling nothing less. She has been acting so weird from past few days. And I am losing control over it. I can't understand what's got into her. She runs away from a certain "Ghanti" she hears.
That too only when i near her. I too tried hearing it, but i don't hear anything... not even once. But I wanted to hear what she hears. But inside u didnt like that "Ghanti", cuz it was making her far from me. I wasn't liking the way she was behaving. So I decided to see whether she was doing the same with the others.

I started stalking her.
I know! This is way more weird. I have been stalking my Own Wife in My Own House. Wow!
Yupp seems like she is fine with the others. You know the "Typical Anika!" She laughs and talks around. Sometimes spying on svetlana and sometimes on Tia with her Two Great Detectives. "The Famous OmRu!"
She had been planning and plotting against those idiots who have made our life hell, to catch them red handed. But as soon as she sees me entering into the discussion she runs out saying some insane and futile excuses. Ridiculous!

It's been driving me crazy and I can't handle it anymore. I had to confront her. But she's been slipping out of hand for the past one week. Imagine... She has been ignoring the "Shivaay Singh Oberoi" Me! Nd i am running behind her like a puppy. So unlike me right?!

I haven't talked to her properly for one week. I hadn't touched her for six days.
Yeah! The other day she tripped over the carpet nd i intending to save her try my best to stable her but we end up rolling on the floor with me on top of her. Nd the moment was so delicious for me. I was like a starved lion, hungry for days. She beneath me our bodies flushed together. One of her hand around my waist clutching tightly and the other around my neck. We were so damn close engaging in an eskimo kiss. Meaning our noses were brushing each other's. Our lips inches away. Nd gazes locked. I could hear her heart thudding so loudly. Her breathing racing just like mine was at the moment. I leaned and slowly nuzzled her cheek nd down her neck. She shut her eyes hard and let out a soft moan. Nd i went wild. I was about to kiss her when she pushed me really hard nd ran as fast as her legs could carry her. I sighed and laid down on my back feeling bitterly on what i just missed.

I had been trying to talk to her to just be with her, but she just doesn't stay..she had to run. And now it's going out of hand. I can't bear the fact that she is running away from me...from her Husband.
I had been trying to figure out the reason behind her avoiding me.


Nope she is litreally ignoring me from the night we got back after all those terrible incidents took place. I saved her...she saved me nd we almost died at the thought of losing each other.

I still couldn't forget all those. I nearly lost her. Thought that she left me. The sight of seeing her lifeless in front of me was like a thousand daggers shoved in my body all at a time.
I realized that i breathed when she breathed. I clutched her close to my heart. Held her soo tight fearing that she may leave. She parted nd i didn't want to. Caressing every inch of her face.
I felt like i can now seriously close my eyes and I fell unconscious.

I open my eyes as I felt a drop of water run down my cheek bone. Felt someone's breath so close on my face. A familiar smell. It was her. She helped me up nd i look at her tear stained face nd then look right into her eyes. I saw it. Saw the same fear, same pain when i thought I lost her.
She was trembling. She was just staring at me. Happy that i was alive...i was back. I felt proud of her as she didnt leave her hope and fought to bring me back. Back to her.
She just pounced on me nd hugged me tight resting her head on my chest nd i I felt her wet my shirt with her hot pouring tears. She did the same i did. I hugged her back and soothed her by rubbing my arm on her back. I assured her that i am right here. She just held on to me more tight. Not taking a name to leave me. I smiled. Simply smiled wider at her care and concern for me. Finally she pulled back after a long bone crushing hug, knowing that i was fine and I am not gonna go anywhere. Her eyes downcast as her cheeks a bit crimson of embarrassment as well as blush. Her nose red due to her nostop crying. I had never seen Anika cry so much for anyone else other than Sahil. So "was I very special to her?" I asked myself
She was about to wipe her tears, when i reached for it and wiped it out carefully. She looked up at me in the eyes. God knows how much time we were sitting there like that. She averted her gaze feeling shy and embarassed. I looked at her palms there were several cuts and wounds. I took her hands into mine and gently rubbed them with my thumb. She winced lightly. "Kuch Nahi." Nd she took them back wid a small smile. Then as she turned i saw scratch marks on her arms too. I looked behind her to find the tablets nd realization dawned upon me. I remembered the tree falling nd she had hurt herself to save me. Nd she didnt care a damn about it.
She asked whether I was okay for the tenth time. I just stare at her and pulled her into my arms. I was awestruck at the care she had for me. I understood how important i was to her just like she was to me. She hugged me back nd i just wrapped my arms tighter around her body. I was happy that i mattered so much to her. Nd she was being soo selfless. I couldn't stop the tears pooling in my eyes. I slowly pulled back still holding her close nd looked right down in her eyes. They held so many in them. A tough job to understand and identify all that was hidden..
"Thank you" was all I could whisper with a smile. She smiled and saw the tear crawl down its way on my cheek. Her hand reached and wiped it out.
"It's okay Shivaay... I am here...Always." it sounded more like a promise.
"I know" nd we stare into the deep orbs of each other.
"And never ever scare me like that." She warned her voice steady but deep.
"I can't afford to lose you." She said her words trembling as she crumple my shirt. I saw the little fear in her eyes once again, the fear of losing me.
I was more touched. I hugged her close made her head rest on my chest so she could hear my heartbeat.
"You hear that?"
"Hmm"
"As u know Shivaay Singh Oberoi ki jaan itni aasani se nahi jaayegi." Nd i felt her smile as she nuzzled closer to me. I caressed her hair tenderly as she let out a soft breath.
"I promise.. I will never leave you Anika." And she looked upto meet my eye.
"Promise?" She asked with a little unsurety in her voice.
"Promise." Nd my promise was sealed and protected as I placed my lips on hers. I kissed her softly as I assured her that there was nothing to worry nd i am always there with her.

We part and I happen to see a beautiful sight. No money in this world can buy what i witnessed. A flushed Anika who was glowing crimson. Her angelic orbs hidden under her lashes. Her lips apart with a smile at the end nd her chest heaving up and down as she breathed heavily. The sight made me want to kiss her once more. But i stopped as her lashes lifted upto meet my blue eyes.
All she did was burry her face into my neck.

And right now I am smiling reminsing those moments we spent alone. But soon my smile vanishes thinking about the fact of being ignored by her.
Then it hit my head. "Was it because of the kiss? Was she feeling embarrassed to face me due to what we shared?"

"But what did I exactly feel about the kiss?" I questioned myself.
I close my eyes running back into the beautiful memory nd once again I open my eyes with a smile. Nd as I turn to face the mirror i see that i am blushing!
"It was a promise and I did that to calm her, and soothe her."
I touch my lips, still feeling hers against mine.
It was beautiful, a moment to be treasured i thought.
I was bought out of my trance when i heard her enter the room nd she abruptly stopped finding me in. Looks like she didnt didn't expect me here. She turned to go away when.
"Stop". But she didnt pay head to my words. She stepped ahead.
"STOP RIGHT THERE. NOW!" I ordered through clenched teeth. She stopped nd slowly turned. She was looking a bit frightened.
I strode towards her and her legs pulled her backwards. But I caught her wrist nd pulled her sending her dashing right into my arms...



P.S
Writing after such a looong time. Hope u guyz like this piece. And there is more to this. Will try my best to continue sooon.

This is actually dedicated to Harneet.Kahloon. She had requested me to write on some other track. But since i was damn busy and my internet was not working i couldn't write. Sorry about that dear. Hope u like this.

This new year had proved to be sucking wid this stupid internet. Urgh!! Can't even comment. Since I got a chance to upload i am doing it.
Sorry...sorry extremely sorry to all the writers out there...especially to my Sweetheart Roselind, Brilliant Asya and my cutest buddy Anni for not being able to comment on your wrks. Hope my apology is accepted.😳
The least i could do was like. Will together give an awesome comment.
Missing IF...😭
Love u guyz loads.
Sharmi.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Unres... So good to see u back..!
I m so gald i m first.. 😛

It was so beautiful..!
They kissed😳
I loved this Romeo type Shivaay and yet so composed like himself.
I loved the details u put in... He remembered the exact days he dint touch her for.. 😆

Ab Shivaay ke dimaag ki ghanti baji..
Ki Anika ke dil ki ghanti Baji..!!

Lovely shot 1..!
Waiting for next...


Koi gal nahi yaar...
Wait karlungi... 😆

Lots of jhaappis.. đŸ€—
Edited by annikaa - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow... this was awesome and lovely...
aww... so romantic...
continue sooonish,Sharmi..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Woww
M in shivika dreamland
Haayeee aage kya hoga
Kiss to already ho hi chuki hai
Eeekkksss updte soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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You beautifully portrayed shivaay's thoughts and feelings.
Beautiful story
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oh my what a way to stop her and pull her
OMFG THEY KISSED WOAH
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Originally posted by: lucky_princess

Shivaay...


Please continue Sharmi. After seeing Annika in so much pain, I really loved reading the insane Shivvay who misses her touch and talk

She had been running away from me. Might be wondering who? It's none other than my wife..."My Legally wedded Wife". Sounds totally weird right?! I am feeling nothing less. She has been acting so weird from past few days. And I am looking control over it. I can't understand what's got into her. She runs away from a certain "Ghanti" she hears.
That too only when i near her. I too tried hearing it, but i don't hear anything... not even once. But I wanted to hear what she hears. But inside u didnt like that "Ghanti", cuz it was making her far from me. I wasn't liking the way she was behaving. So I decided to see whether she was doing the same with the others.

I started stalking her.
I know! This is way more weird. I have been stalking my Own Wife in My Own House. Wow!
Yupp seems like she is fine with the others. You know the "Typical Anika!" She laughs and talks around. Sometimes spying on svetlana and sometimes on Tia with her Two Great Detectives. "The Famous OmRu!"
She had been planning and plotting against those idiots who have made our life hell, to catch them red handed. But as soon as she sees me entering into the discussion she runs out saying some insane and futile excuses. Ridiculous!

It's been driving me crazy and I can't handle it anymore. I had to confront her. But she's been slipping out of hand for the past one week. Imagine... She has been ignoring the "Shivaay Singh Oberoi" Me! Nd i am running behind her like a puppy. So unlike me right?!
Yes!! yes!! I so need him to go crazy and insane

I haven't talked to her properly for one week. I hadn't touched her for six days.
Ah! music to my ears. He is keeping track and counting

Yeah! The other day she tripped over the carpet nd i intending to save her try my best to stable her but we end up rolling on the floor with me on top of her. Nd the moment was so delicious for me. I was like a starved lion, hungry for days. She beneath me our bodies flushed together. One of her hand around my waist clutching tightly and the other around my neck. We were so damn close engaging in an eskimo kiss.
I hope this happens and she does push him off and run away just as he starts feeling the rush of emotions

Meaning our noses were brushing each other's. Our lips inches away. Nd gazes locked. I could hear her heart thudding so loudly. Her breathing racing just like mine was at the moment. I leaned and slowly nuzzled her cheek nd down her neck. She shut her eyes hard and let out a soft moan. Nd i went wild. I was about to kiss her when she pushed me really hard nd ran as fast as her legs could carry her. I sighed and laid down on my back feeling bitterly on what i just missed.

I had been trying to talk to her to just be with her, but she just doesn't stay..she had to run. And now it's going out of hand. I can't bear the fact that she is running away from me...from her Husband.
Man!!! I so want him to start at least thinking of himself subconsciously as her husband. At least in his inner thoughts
I had been trying to figure out the reason behind her avoiding me.



Nope she is litreally ignoring me from the night we got back after all those terrible incidents took place. I saved her...she saved me nd we almost died at the thought of losing each other.

I still couldn't forget all those. I nearly lost her. Thought that she left me. The sight of seeing her lifeless in front of me was like a thousand daggers shoved in my body all at a time.
I realized that i breathed when she breathed. I clutched her close to my heart. Held her soo tight fearing that she may leave. She parted nd i didn't want to. Caressing every inch of her face.
I felt like i can now seriously close my eyes and I fell unconscious.

I open my eyes as I felt a drop of water run down my cheek bone. Felt someone's breath so close on my face. A familiar smell. It was her. She helped me up nd i look at her tear stained face nd then look right into her eyes. I saw it. Saw the same fear, same pain when i thought I lost her.
She was trembling. She was just staring at me. Happy that i was alive...i was back. I felt proud of her as she didnt leave her hope and fought to bring me back. Back to her.
She just pounced on me nd hugged me tight resting her head on my chest nd i I felt her wet my shirt with her hot pouring tears. She did the same i did. I hugged her back and soothed her by rubbing my arm on her back. I assured her that i am right here. She just held on to me more tight. Not taking a name to leave me. I smiled. Simply smiled wider at her care and concern for me. Finally she pulled back after a long bone crushing hug, knowing that i was fine and I am not gonna go anywhere. Her eyes downcast as her cheeks a bit crimson of embarrassment as well as blush. Her nose red due to her nostop crying. I had never seen Anika cry so much for anyone else other than Sahil. So "was I very special to her?" I asked myself
She was about to wipe her tears, when i reached for it and wiped it out carefully. She looked up at me in the eyes. God knows how much time we were sitting there like that. She averted her gaze feeling shy and embarassed. I looked at her palms there were several cuts and wounds. I took her hands into mine and gently rubbed them with my thumb. She winced lightly. "Kuch Nahi." Nd she took them back wid a small smile. Then as she turned i saw scratch marks on her arms too. I looked behind her to find the tablets nd realization dawned upon me. I remembered the tree falling nd she had hurt herself to save me. Nd she didnt care a damn about it.
She asked whether I was okay for the tenth time. I just stare at her and pulled her into my arms. I was awestruck at the care she had for me. I understood how important i was to her just like she was to me. She hugged me back nd i just wrapped my arms tighter around her body. I was happy that i mattered so much to her. Nd she was being soo selfless. I could stop the tears pooling in my eyes. I slowly pulled back still holding her close nd looked right down in her eyes. They held so many in them. A tough job to understand and identify all that was hidden..
"Thank you" was all I could whisper with a smile. She smiled and saw the tear crawl down its way on my cheek. Her hand reached and wiped it out.
"It's okay Shivaay... I am here...Always." it sounded more like a promise.
"I know" nd we stare into the deep orbs of each other.
"And never ever scare me like that." She warned her voice steady but deep.
"I can't afford to lose you." She said her words trembling as she crumple my shirt. I saw the little fear in her eyes once again, the fear of losing me.
I was more touched. I hugged her close made her head rest on my chest so she could hear my heartbeat.
"You hear that?"
"Hmm"
"As u know Shivaay Singh Oberoi ki jaan itni aasani se nahi jaayegi." Nd i felt her smile as she nuzzled closer to me. I caressed her hair tenderly as she let out a soft breath.
"I promise.. I will never leave you Anika." And she looked upto meet my eye.
"Promise?" She asked with a little unsurety in her voice.
"Promise." Nd my promise was sealed and protected as I placed my lips on hers. I kissed her softly as I assured her that there was nothing to worry nd i am always there with her.

We part and I happen to see a beauseful sight. No money in this world can buy what i witnessed. A flushed Anika who was glowing crimson. Her angelic orbs hidden under her lashes. Her lips apart with a smile at the end nd her chest heaving up and down as she breathed heavily. The sight made me want to kiss her once more. But i stopped as her lashes lifted upto meet my blue eyes.
All she did was burry her face into my neck.
Uff! So soft and tender 😳

And right now I am smiling reminsing those moments we spent alone. But soon my smile vanishes thinking about the fact of being ignored by her.
Then it hit my head. "Was it because of the kiss? Was she feeling embarrassed to face me due to what we shared?"

"But what did I exactly feel about the kiss?" I questioned myself.
I close my eyes running back into the beautiful memory nd once again I open my eyes with a smile. Nd as I turn to face the mirror i see that i am blushing!
"It was a promise and I did that to calm her, and soothe her."
I touch my lips, still feeling hers against mine.
It was beautiful, a moment to be treasured i thought.
I was bought out of my trance when i heard her enter the room nd she abruptly stopped finding me in. Looks like she didnt didn't expect me here. She turned to go away when.
"Stop". But she didnt pay head to my words. She stepped ahead.
"STOP RIGHT THERE. NOW!" I ordered through clenched teeth. She stopped nd slowly turned. She was looking a bit frightened.
I strode towards her and her legs pulled her backwards. But I caught her wrist nd pulled her sending her dashing right into my arms...
I want it to affect him and I want her to run away. I know I would be scared and worried if I were Annika for sure becuz this man always has his NKK shields up.



P.S
Writing after such a looong time. Hope u guyz like this piece. And there is more to this. Will try my best to continue sooon.

This is actually dedicated to Harneet.Kahloon. She had requested me to write on some other track. But since i was damn busy and my internet was not working i couldn't write. Sorry about that dear. Hope u like this.

This new year had proved to be sucking wid this stupid internet. Urgh!! Can't even comment. Since I got a chance to upload i am doing it. ... completely get the frustration

Sorry...sorry extremely sorry to all the writers out there...especially to my Sweetheart Roselind, Brilliant Asya and my cutest buddy Anni for not being able to comment on your wrks. Hope my apology is accepted.😳
Hey! It's cool if you do not comment on my story but please continue yours.
I have been so depressed since I watched the episode today and then I read your story and , wham!!! I feel better already.
Thank you

The least i could do was like. Will together give an awesome comment.
Missing IF...😭
Love u guyz loads.
Sharmi.


Edited by asya34 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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first of all ..thanks a ton for accepting my request ... I don't care if it is about some other track ...the main thing that matters is that it is written by you ... you are my favourite writer ...and this os is so so lovely n splendid as usual ...highly applaudable work .. and i am waiting eagerly for the next part
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SHARMIII IF KI JAAN đŸ€— I was just thinking about you today (how random and hard to believe?I KNOW!! :P)- that I haven't seen any new TS's from your part- I missed them A LOT 😭 SO GLAD that you are back and with a BIG BANG that is too!!! You're such a cutieee when you write 😳 I happened to stumble on this TS, and I didn't even realise it was your work until I got to the end and thought-"hmm, this sounds a lot like how Sharmi writes" 😆 I am so sorry I haven't had the chance to comment on your other two pieces of writing yet!! I have honestly just gotten back into IF again- Exams and writers block playing the part So I shall catch up with them super soon and leave you tons of appreciation on them as well! 😃 Okay enough of my jibber jabber ;), let me get to this particular story... OMG cuteness quota LEVEL 100!!- Shivaay itching to get a few words from Anika is always my favourite! Anika realising her love first is never what I wanted, BUT if it garners such writing, then I'm ready to bear it all in jest!! 👏 The 'ghanti' not being liked by Shivaay because it causes Anika to be away from him đŸ€Ł GOSH laughing fitsss!! And the end was the best! Shivaay not being able to take it anymore đŸ€Ș LOVED ITTT!! Do continue sooonn! Like real soon đŸ€— - BTW in the excitement of your return to writing- I have begun writing an OS (it's becoming more of a TS by the state of my word count 😆 *facepalm*) -Anyhooo, Sharmi, KEEP ROCKING!! And writing phenomenal pieces like this :D

Love
Sam x
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So cute...n different since frm shivaays pov...

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