Ting! Ting! It's Love!! ShivIka SS. Part 5 updt on pg:17 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Sahrmi...🤗

It was fab..!

Phela diya pyaar ne Raita..
Baji ghanti pyaar waali
Kar Diya Shivika ka Faida
Jaga di feelings Ishqbaaz Waali..!😆

I loved it..!😳

The best part was that you showed the same scene from both Anika and Shivaay's perspective..!

So good to see you back with a bang Dost..!

Bahut saari Jhaapis...🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: annikaa

Sharmi...🤗

It was fab..!

Phela diya pyaar ne Raita..
Baji ghanti pyaar waali
Kar Diya Shivika ka Faida
Jaga di feelings Ishqbaaz Waali..!😆

I loved it..!😳

The best part was that you showed the same scene from both Anika and Shivaay's perspective..!

So good to see you back with a bang Dost..!

Bahut saari Jhaapis...🤗


Tujhe bohoth saara jhappis bhej rahi hun..sab ko pakka ke hug kar Lena.. .🤗🤗
Thanks for that beautiful shayari😉.

Thank u soo much dear.❤️❤️


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome updates dear read both the parts in one go
Loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Finally ! Anika confessed. Lovely update, intense and passionate !
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Posted: 8 years ago
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OHHHWOWOWOWOWOWOWO
this was so impressive so good
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Great build up...dying to see his reaction to her confession...wondering what he will do...what he'll say!! plz update soon!😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Shivaay...


"I love u Shivaay... I love u... i love u.." she said tears streaming down her cheeks.

I just couldn't believe what i heard. I guess I am dreaming. I pinched myself releasing her from my hold. My skin pained. She leaned against my chest whispering those holy words...
"I love u Shivaay... I love u".

"I know... I know we, our marriage doesnt have a future. But I couldn't help it Shivaay. I dont know when, how... it just happened. You have made me feel the world's most beautiful feeling.
Love.
Never once in my life I thought I will fall for someone. That i will lose my heart to someone. That I will feel special. But look at my Destiny.. ..
I have fallen for the same person whom I despised for marrying me without my consent. Whom I begin to trust more than anyone else. To whom I showed my vulnerability. On whom I.. . The independant Anika.. who always had lead her life without a support..started depending upon.
Now i am irrevocably in love with him. With whom I am gonna get divorced in a few months."

She slid down and I did with her. She hugged me close making herself comfortable in my arms. Her hands around me nd face buried my neck.
She stayed quiet for some moments, letting her pain flow.

"Shivaay Singh Oberoi... He is the man i love. The first person in my life... my first love" she paused.
".. nd the last. In whose arms i am tangled now." Saying so she looked upto meet my eyes. Her nose was reddened due to crying.
She let her fingers roam over my face. She looked at me intently... registering every single detail of my face. She leaned in closer. More closer. Untill her lips met mine. I was taken aback at the sudden action.

She sucked my lower lip slowly and tenderly. I closed my eyes, surrendering myself to her nd pulled her closer until there was no space for air between us.
She moulded her lips into mine. Her hand wandered over my chest. I felt myself being pulled more closer. Now i started responding to her kiss with equal passion.

This was going deeper. I slid in my tongue tasting her sweetness. She let out a soft moan.
Her tongue did wonders in my mouth. I felt her warmth fill me.
My palms explored her soft curves. It was getting wild. It was filled with love and need. She pulled me even closer nd kissed me senseless.
We parted after sometime. She landed her forehead on mine. Her eyes closed. We were breathing hard.

I couldn't digest the fact that we just kissed each other now. The other day was just a long lingering peck on her lips... but this was something totally different. I have never kissed any of my girlfriend's like this till date. I never knew she was a good... nope she was a brilliant kisser.
All i could think about was her taste. She tasted strawberries with a tinge of spice. Afterall she was Anika.
I wanted to kiss her again... non-stop.

"...nd The first person whom I have ever kissed." She whispered crushing my thoughts.
She opened her eyes nd all I could see was love... a hell lot of love for the man of her life. For 'ME'.

She held my collars nd said...
"U have the bloody audacity to make me kiss u. To make me Blush like a love struck teenager. You make my heart race with such speed that it will burst the very minute. U make me want u. U make it difficult for me to stay away from you. Nd u make me think about nothing but u... but damn u!" She poked her finger on my chest.

"I tried my best to stay away from u. Thought that ignoring you will solve my problems. I felt that maybe I am just addicted to you... it's just infatuation..but hell no... I love u.. i love u like anything." She screamed.

"I am soo addicted to you that now I can't leave you. I am infatuated by your charms. I am in love with every single damn thing of yours Mr.Shivaay Singh Oberoi. Nd... Nd the problem is...love is not my cup of tea." She finished making my eyes go wide.

Fhat the wuck! She loves me soo much! She feels so much for me. And she is saying that its not her cuo of tea?! But once again my thoughts were crushed mercilessly.

"Its all because of you. Darn u Shivaay!" She cursed me.

"What?! What did I do?!" I asked totally confused.

"Really?! I fell in love with you for the immense care u showered upon me. I fell in love with u because u trusted me so much like no one has ever done. U stood by me..during thick and thin...even though they were less. U screamed in fear thinking i might be hurt. U couldn't stand my tears? Could you?"

I shook my head vigorously.
"I can never see u crying. I..."

"And today I am crying because I love u Dammit! And its all because of you. All bcuz cuz of you." Nd she started hitting me with her closed fists.

"Anika...Anika Stop it.. stop it.."

"No u idiot... all this raita is because of u!" She scaremed and I guess she will kill me today.

I held her wrists, preventing myself from getting hit by her.

"Leave me u dumbo. Just leave me. It's all because of you. My life is messed up..."

"Anika...wait...listen to me... Anika..."

"No Shivaay you listen, you are right.. Shivaay Singh Oberoi can do anything and everything... Nd u made me fall in love wid u...u ma..."

Nd her words were cut by a kiss. Her eyes went wide and she tried pushing me off. But the fire was already ignited in me. I was no mood of leaving jer without a proper kiss.
She gave in after she understood that fighting was futile. I kissed her with all I felt for her.


What did I feel for her exactly?! But whatever I feel for her is something really different. Something I have never felt for anyone before. She has captured me. I feel so drawn towards her. So attracted. But I feel this is more than that.
Why cant i see her in pain? Why can't I tolerate her tears? Why does is pain me...in the heart? Why? Nd...nd she confessed that.. that she loves me... she 'LOVES ME!!'
Nd she sealed all this with a kiss. A kiss she initiated. Thinking about the kiss made me kiss her more.


Anika...




Now i am sitting and kissing him shamelessly... forgetting that he is the reason that everything is upside down. But as his lips touched mine... I feel so good. It healed me. Made me forget everything... nd all I could think was him. Only him.
His kiss was so warm. My hands found his hair and held a handful of them. Now suddenly he pulled me closer for more access. I gave it all.
I felt the desires grow in me. The air surrounding us was getting hotter.

Wait!

I can't let him kiss me just for his stupid needs. Never. I should know whether he feels for me or not. Nd before I could push him, he left me. We were panting and. We stare. A long one.

"Tell me Shivaay, do you feel the same I feel for you? Or something atleast close to it? Will u accept Me? Will u let me be your better half... Will u let this 'mad' girl be a part of your life? Will u let me kiss u senseless. Willl u make me yours. Nd only yours forever?"

He looked at me... and asked "will u?"

I looked at him.

"I... I..."

Shitt!!

This is not i was supposed to say. I cannot love him. I cannot fall into love more deeper. No...no!! I should be asking him to stay away from me. To leave me alone.
I cant can't let him in my life. I cant fall weak once again. I can't afford to lose him. No... No... what am i saying!!
Hey bhagwaan! He kaisa raita pehladiya?!!

"I cannot..."






Sorry couldn't complete this... so will not be a TS... maybe a ss...
Bear with me.

Love Sharmi...




Edited by lucky_princess - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
ohhh......do continue ASAP
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Awww...that was so cute...esp annika taking d first step was a pleasant surprise n fun...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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OMG! You just ended on a cliffhanger.
I am eagerly waiting for Shivaay's reply.
Please post soon!
Thanks for PM

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