ShivIka SS: Avoidance Waltz PART 8 (22.5.17) pg 40*new* Index pg1

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#171

wow pinky had finally managed to drive them apart

hating shivaay for not listening and clearing everything and pinky is beyond hate

i dont even had words for pinky now

please do continue

bye sumi

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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#172

That was brilliant. I was bawling my eyes. Gosh!!! You make your scenes so expressive through words that I felt the scenes playing out exactly in front of me n that was incredible. This doesn't happen often.There were few scenes I have read in IF only that had made me feel like this n this update of your's was one of those kind.hats off. Update soon n please as soon as possible.

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jarir2010

@jarir2010

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#173

awesome update dear.

its so emotional and heart wrenching,cant stop my rage towards pinky(though i know its just a fiction)but i genuinely want to shake her violently😡 .update soon dear plz.

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Shikha Singhania

@Nimik

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#174

Hey Anisa!

Read all the chappies in a go and loved it to the core!!🤗

Tragedy or not, iska pata nahi, but I am sure that you will have a wonderful redemption track for Shivaay!

The guy and his 50 PAISE so-called mummeh need to TALK!

Anyways, would be waiting IMPATIENTLY for your update and will look out for a pm from you😆

Update soon

-Shikha🤗

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ArhiIPKKND

@ArhiIPKKND

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#175

The last two parts were brilliant...d jealousy was well done...after all this is sso he doesnt do anything by halves...painful to read though...poor annika she did try to talk to him...

The last part ...wow...yup i get it pinky has gone real bad on d show n i can c u giving her d same tendencies here...omg their home...such a waste...shivaay has so much to make up for ...pinky probably thought he was wth her since he didnt stop her when she got security to throw her out...

Cant wait for d next update...

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rainbowveins

@rainbowveins

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#176

Omg this got me so damn emotional!Please update soon.And pm me if possible :)

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Rohini

@ithihaas

Trailblazer

Posted: 8 years ago

#177

Thank you for the update. It was just awesome as always.

I had a query though, it would be great if you can clarify. In the second part of the story, world knew that Tia is Shivaay's wife. In the latest update, you have mentioned that Pinky is helping his son choose a suitable bride. What happened to Tia in this story ?

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LilyJames0194

@LilyJames0194

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#178

Hi Anisa!!! I loved these updates! You are right, jealousy is ugly and one that honestly has the potential to ruin a beautiful relationship.. which is why I am of the opinion that jealousy has no place in true love. Of course, insecurities yes...but true jealousy. I find it more as evidence of an absence of trust, which is an absolutely essential pillar of love. Having said all that, I see your point here...and you have written it beautifully. At this stage in their relationship (just a week or so into their wedding, right?) and only just coming to terms with their spiralling feelings for one another yet not knowing enough about each other - all of this comes out heartbreakingly beautiful in your words.

These 5 page challenges are too awesome man! Can't wait to read more ❤️😆

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farinaks

@farinaks

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Posted: 8 years ago

#179

Awww i loved it
It was full of love ...anger... Pain of separation... Jealousy
Bt lst lines were awsome
Our Tadibaaz nd furious Annika is bck to ttake her revenge from her Bagad Billa

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Vetac

@Vetac

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#180

Wao love your update , totally amazingg .Whenever i read your any update i wish may it never ends and gain a curiosity to know everything today . And at the time it gets ends i feel like .
You are a wonderful writer.please do continue soon please eagerly waiting for your next one.'