I'm not much a fan of stories on IF, so I hv to thank yesterday's crap episode which somehow led me to your story!
First you are a wonderful writer, the way you weave your story is very good. I particularly love your grammar here😆
Now to the story, particularly your version of SSO! I'm so pissed off by him!
Saying you love someone doesn't give you a free ticket to such dark jealousy! See we all know that jealousy is an ugly thing, but even then there are limits which one should never overstep! SSO is treating annika like a toy here which he wants to possess, not as a human! He himself has till now not yet cleared the Tia fiasco, plus whatever annika knows about him is because these things happened in her presence! It's not like SSO shared his past with her! So him being angry that she didn't tell about her past makes no sense!
Second love without any type of trust is worthless! SSO doesn't trust her, it's all about his pain, his ego especially... Your words on ' how can she play with shivaay Singh oberoi, I will hurt her same or more!' it's only about him!
Look at annika despite being insulted at his office, despite being ignored, she still had more trust in her shivaay than what happened at the office! She still went to look for him, saw him flirting with another girl!
Sorry but this SSO doesn't deserve annika at all, n I'm wondering how you'll even redeem him now! Annika lost far too much because of him, n her house was the last thing!
In the end, SSO still doesn't really love her but want just to possess her! But does he deserve her, not at all!
Let's see if you are able to convince me as a reader if this SSO can even be redeemed! I'm afraid I do not see it possible after the last two updates you did. N I seriously hope you won't make annika call everything a stunt n forgive SSO as easily as shown in the show😆
I'll be waiting for the next update😃