ShivIka SS: Avoidance Waltz PART 8 (22.5.17) pg 40*new* Index pg1

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Crazy4myarshi

@Crazy4myarshi

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#181

Amazing update!Waiting to see how shivaay redeems himself but I personally feel that Anika should not forgive him so easily.Continue soon 😊

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Dik

@Dik..

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#182

Wow... amazing update dear...!!!

It's turning soo interesting..

Update next soon..

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#183

Awesome update👏

Now Shivaay is in same situation .Anika misunderstood him for the crime he didn't done.

Today he is alone .His brothers also misunderstood him.

Once he was happy to destroy her house using his power and money.Today he can't think about her in pain.Her tears will break him.

He was stubborn in his decision.If he hear her words the story was different.sometimes our one fault will destroy all the happiness in our life.It was unintentionally,but he doubted her without asking her about Rohit.He repeated his mistake.He can't assume things without asking her.It was his mistake to misunderstood her and he didn't hear her words.

Now Anika is doing the same mistake by unhearing his words.

Pinky is playing her dirty tricks which will only hurt his son.

The omru is helping Anika and they take a stand for her.Loving this two .

The divorce is a big decision.

Eagerly waiting for next update

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anvikshadixit

@anvikshadixit

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#184

Its just amazing it left me speechless and sooo emotional... eagerly waiting to see what happens next... amazing story , greatly written... you are actually able to visualize everything happening infront of your own eyes

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veens_11

@veens_11

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#185

Yaaay!!!!! Update... * Runs off to read*

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Larae

@Larae

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#186

OMG just read the last 2 updates and the angst is killing me! Shivaay you moron give her a chance to explain! poor anika..and pinky is just vile, I hope SSO gives her a thorough dressing down

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Docshradha

@Docshradha

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#187

Where the hell is the super like button ???? Your fiction has everything that i wish to see in the episodes ! Loved ,loved , loved , your story ! Can't wait for the next update . You are truely a gifted writer 😳 .

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Pine22

@Pine22

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#188

Oh boy! I was biting my nails throughout this, literally asking god to give Shivaay some akal. Aisey koi kartha hai bala?

Secondly, Anika's pain is beautifully expressed. She has tried to make it work. Tried to talk & I think for her being who she is, that is a huge deal.

If this was published as a book it would be a bestseller for sure. Love this so much. Update soon. ❤️

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aisha1099

@aisha1099

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#189

Awesome updates.. Read both the updates together and totally loved it.

Eagerly waiting for the next part👏

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Pritha Roy

@pritzz

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#190

Arrgg... this is the 4th time I am typing... IF is not letting me comment ...it seems I am spamming 🤔 I don't understand!

Anyways . Coming to the Update Bonanzaaa that u r doing to make up for the delay in this Gorgeous Story ... Let me tell U...u will be blessed 😆

Although I had agreed with Shivaays Annoyance and Anger towards Annika for Hiding (deliberately or NO) about her life from him was justified... Annika had stormed into his life and did autopsy of his full family tree history and changed his life upside down and Shivaay knows nothing about her and she chooses not to say too... Unfair.

But I am giving her the benefit of doubt that Maybe there is some story behind this rohit and marriage that was As important as the chocolate Rapper I.e. 0 😆

Also The Fact the fact that Annika tried N number of times to Get this mess cleared and herself even though insulted went again back to him to sort it out... She tried. Good. Plus point.

But Shivaay chose to be the S S O again. Not fair here too.. every one deserves a chance to explain or prove themselves.

Hez impulsive.. dear SSO not every impulsive decision gives u Diamonds like The one with your marriage 😆 that was just plain luck.

I love how beautiful the flow of your story is.. U r explaining the Side effects of misunderstanding and Action ft. Anger.

All this in between two people gives the fruit to the third person (here Pinky) and It becomes difficult to save a relationship when the wheel of your relationship gets into the 3rd persons hand.

Full package of Anger + Jealousy + power + Impatience is a deadly combination.. it's like a terrorist to relationships.

As always Amazing Update. 👏

I like the way u balance Shivaay and Annika to be the Takkar ki Jodi.

P.s I hope this time it's posted.