ShivIka SS: Avoidance Waltz PART 8 (22.5.17) pg 40*new* Index pg1

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Divyanshi Vineet Malaviya

@babydevil

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Posted: 8 years ago

#191

That was an awesome update! Read all of it in one go , little smiling, little devastated but still content!
It was really pretty update, though a little angst overall but still comes out as a happy story.
Really waiting for another part of this ;)
Warm love
Diva_vineet

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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Posted: 8 years ago

#192

Oh god it's seems that I'm stalking now🤣

But your quota of 5pgs are done now😆

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Risha

@--Risha--

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Posted: 8 years ago

#193

What goes around, comes around, Shivaay!

Lovely update. Can't wait for the next one

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veens_11

@veens_11

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Posted: 8 years ago

#194

Double yaaay!!! 5 page quota done...another update please please please!!

Louuuveeed this update. Anika tried again, which is so like her...she knows SSO well and wants to get to the root of the problem, but SSO is just being gadha Singh Oberoi! Waiting to see how he pataos her now. Will he rebuild her house ?

PS : would a jealous Shivaay actually be so angry that he would LET Anika choose Rohit? Wouldn't he just force Anika to be with him physically but giving her hell emotionally? Wouldn't he just destroy this rohit for even thinking of marrying Anika? SSO always does the unexpected ... same as your story!!

Did I mention I love the way you write and absolutely love the way this story is progressing...

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#195

awesome update...he is tasting his own medicine...

when she begged him to listen to her...he ignored her

now she is doing the same

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rarefan

@rarefan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#196

Read both the parts together and loved them to no extent. And hey, comments have reached 5 pages! 😆

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Krishi

@Black_Maniac

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#197

The last I read and commented was when this was only a TS. Now that my blind eyes finally saw something beyond Avoidance Waltz (that being SS) I finally opened it 😆

This took a sharp turn. From the sweet cute Anika running away from her feelings, this turned brutual.

Honestly, I haven't read something like this for so long. This was amazing.

The last 2 updates were the best. Honestly, in the update on page 21, I wanted a little more thrashing from Pinky'a side. Just to boil my blood and warm up to hate this Pinky.

The latest one, I was almost in tears when Anika's house was taken down. When I thought it was Shivaay, I was going to throw my phone 😆 then, Rudra stood up and oh the behavior❤️

But when you gave us a nice little surprise and made Pinky the culprit, I swear I could have vroken Pinky's neck 😈 And I am not a violent person. So basically, your writing evoked so much in me ❤️

Lovely update. 5 pages probably done within a day 😆

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anvikshadixit

@anvikshadixit

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#198

its now more than 5 pages now please update the next chapter pleaseee :) !!!!!!!!!

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Abhilasha Sharma

@abhilashasharma

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Posted: 8 years ago

#199

That was pure angst... too much to handle for all, both the characters and the readers. Drinking lots of water to cool myself down *sigh*

P.s: 5 pages target, and it is crossed. Ab Tera kya hoga, Anisa???!!!