\\ImPeRfeCtLy PeRfEct!// An ShivIka TS Part 2 updt on page 5, 24/12/16 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
that was hilarious 🤣

And the welcome Shivay got was too goood 😉

beautifully written... Loved it ❤️

sure do write more... will be waiting 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
Im loving it
It was wonderful
Plss plsss write another part
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
Superb update..
The whole family loving annika's desi food...
AniRu bond is just awsm...
They spend time wide each other and sahil... ❤️
Sahil is there leader... 😆😆
Shivaay being late and all of them being worried. ..annika ne bilkul thik kiya...Shivaay ka chandni ke saath welcome kiya...
Shivaay will never change...usse apna phone torna zaruri h...
And at last shivaay promised...I mean pinky promise that he will not break any phone...
Hope he will do so...
Shivika are just adorable...
Do write about Shivaay's revenge. ..


Love u,
Anya
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: MorningStar01

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When I started reading this update I found it so heartwarming, the bond between Anika&her in-laws 😳😳 especially reading about her bond with Rudra 😆 (hoping to see more bonding of these two onscreen). Also liked that Sahil was treated with equal love as the rest of the Oberoi children 👏
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Then I also felt scared like Anika&the Oberoi's did 'coz I didn't know whether you were going to give us a plot twist with something happening to Shivaay or what 😭
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Then I felt relieved (literally sighing out loud) when I read that he came back, and didn't answer because he once again let his anger get the best of him 🤔
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Annnddd then *boom* that chandni gets thrown 🤣 and I started LOL'ing like I'm crazy, everything after that was epic, I totally saw Anika running after Shivaay in my mind 🤣🤣 Even now, while typing this comment I can't stop laughing. I LOVED it 🤣 && Tej not saving Shivaay, omw 🤣🤣 🤣& Anika wanting him to carry extra phones 😆😆 (I think that's a good idea 😳)
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Then the end, which was so sweet, I'm smiling like a idiot now. They truly are Imperfectly Perfect. Sigh.



Please do write another part, would love to see what Shivaay does as revenge 😆
Thank uUu for the p.m. 🤗
(sorry if the font is faulty, my phone is doing weird stuff 😕)


-Shan'e


Shan'e... i am in love wid ur comments now... they really excite me. Like a kid is given a very big Dairy milk silk!!😆
Thanks a lott dear... i will never bring in angst like this... not atleast till now.
I really wanna see something onscreen between ShiVika...
Yes will surely dear... it will be a bitter revenge.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
Lovely one
They are so cute
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
Such an amazing story absolutely lived the ending...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
Read both the parts just now and totally loved as I enjoyed them equally.
ShivIka's teasing and the family's bonding with the Eldest Bahu was too good. I thought something might happen to Shivaay but glad you didn't even think to do that 😆.
I imagined Chandni flying towards Shivaay in a slow motion 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sharmi, you have done amazing job this time that now my cheeks are blushing. 😆 it was SO cute, totally loved it.

Ek cheez. Prinku and Soumya hugged each other tightly.
^Ye Kya tha?! 🤣 Ek doosre ko kyun hug Kia?
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
aww.. i loved this story a lot Sharmi.. You write really well.. Waiting for ur next story..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
What a brilliant update it was ,sharmi👏
Ur writing skills so amazing that I cud easily imagine each nd every scenes that u have written in ur story😳
Wow...so Shivika nd morning bed room romance😳 shivay got used to Anika's pampering I love this line so much❤️ what to say about their long passionate kiss☺️ Anika being Anika never misses a single chance to tease her love of her life😆 really Anika !!! She found the taste of kiss bitter😆 thinking ...how will shivay now taking his revenge 😈
I m so glad that aniomru together expose that reiki queen😆 Tia is out of SHIVIKA 's life what cud have better than this 😆 bas..show Mein bhi out ho jai as soon as possible*fingers crossed*
Omg..Shivika r so comfortable infront the whole oberoi family😆 the most hilarious thing ani spilt out their bed room secret sabke samne🤣 this is so typical anika😳 As usual Rudy jst loves to tease her bhaiya and bhabi😆 oopps...shivika nd usual helicopter nd chopper wala argument 🤣
Hmm..so Oberoi members jst love Anika's handmade desi food! Specially RumYa 😳 Ru so much in wid her food that he can even skip this diet for this one day...this is cute❤️ The bonding btwn AniRu jst awesome! RumYa shared their secret marriage truth only to anika😲 this is really unexpected but I love it😳
I love how all in OM giving so much importance to sahil!
Hmm.wid Anika I also got worried for shivay getting late nd not cmg back home I thought some tragic scene is gonna cme but...pheww..nothing happened like this😆 gosh...i laughed out so loud reading it Anika's chandni flying towards shivay 🤣 wah..anika very gd..only u can do this mahan swagaat🤣Wow..even tej supporting Anika to teach shivay lesson 😆 Arre...this is great idea by Anika to tell Shivay that he shud keep 3/4 phones 😆 I m so glad Shivay pinky promised Anika not to break his phone again😳 this is sweet promise nd I really hope shivay will keep his promise..though I doubt it still😆 The whole family jst knw Shivika made for each other nd that's true anyhow...shivika is jst imperfectly perfect...
Oops...i forgot to add how i loved this part where pinky tore apart the divorce papers😳show Mein pinky I jst can't stand wid her Tia jaap🥱
Anyway..sharmi...ur update always awesome nd I always find my happiness reading ur story😳
Thanks for writing always such amazing thing nd giving us so much happiness 🤗
If u gonna continue this story then All the best for it!
Keep up the gd work👍🏼

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