\\ImPeRfeCtLy PeRfEct!// An ShivIka TS Part 2 updt on page 5, 24/12/16

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ArhiIPKKND

@ArhiIPKKND

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Oh wow this is so good love it very much...aptly titled as well...i am getting all kinds of positive vibes from this...they hv d potential to be so happy given a chance...so beautiful...n so cute n adorable...ur sense of humour is spot on dear...

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Sam98

@Sam98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

WOOHOOO SHARMI IS BACK🥳-And that to so quickly, mere Christmas present jaldi de diva! And what a fantastic gift it is 😆JAB BHI TUM BATTING KARTI HO TOH BALL STADIUM SE BAHAAR HI JATA HAI👏🤗Meaning you ALWAYS write well- I think words are simply not adequate nor are they emotive enough to convey my love for your stories! BUT I absolutely loved it! It was cute, funny and intense😳- Anika spilling the bedroom secrets OOF so typical of her 🤣and Shivaay is getting a little bold nowadays 😉 AUR helicopter/chopper argument will never end-end-unke bacho ko bhi yehi sunna parega 😆

Anika aur tumhare liye yeh song dedicate karti hoon:

Maana sabse tu haseen hai husn wali

Maana sabke tu dilon mein basne wali
Haan haan hain nasha
Adaa bhi nakhre wali, par..

Taarefon se nahi
Tu maan'ne wali

Because SHARMI you are a phataka🤪- a full blown phenomenon- and therefore compliments are just not enough for you😳 You write with great finesse and the story plots are always A1 YAAR👏 OH and OMRU are just too cute 😆 do add them into your stories, I am missing them from the episodes😭 CONTINUE SOON!

Much Love,

Sam🤗❤️

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jarir2010

@jarir2010

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

beautiful,always love their nok jhok.continue soon.👏

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thisissmansi

@thisissmansi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Oh my god...sooo cute...!!!

Btw belated happy birthday!! If I'm not wrong!

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sharmi

@lucky_princess

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Meiej2
OMG that was sooo cute!!!! It was all just sooo nice! Annika is so silly she just told everyone about what happened in their bedroom 🤣. I'm glad Pinky accepted her and I feel like that's what will happen in the show b/c of Tia's pregnacy lie her entire past will come out and Pinky might realize how good Annika is since she is saving Shivaay's life. That connection at end... I'm crying 😭. It's the best. I truly love this Shivika there was just a cuteness overload.

Mini🤗

Anika is always silly😆. Thanks a lott dear 😳

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sharmi

@lucky_princess

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: chandanagimsy
Michi michi hua padh ke.. Wow...kya tuning hey boss... Loved it...plzzz update soon...love dthe teasing of family...no bad happenings please...

Thanks dear😃

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sharmi

@lucky_princess

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Sam98
WOOHOOO SHARMI IS BACK🥳-And that to so quickly, mere Christmas present jaldi de diva! And what a fantastic gift it is 😆JAB BHI TUM BATTING KARTI HO TOH BALL STADIUM SE BAHAAR HI JATA HAI👏🤗Meaning you ALWAYS write well- I think words are simply not adequate nor are they emotive enough to convey my love for your stories! BUT I absolutely loved it! It was cute, funny and intense😳- Anika spilling the bedroom secrets OOF so typical of her 🤣and Shivaay is getting a little bold nowadays 😉 AUR helicopter/chopper argument will never end-end-unke bacho ko bhi yehi sunna parega 😆
Anika aur tumhare liye yeh song dedicate karti hoon:

Maana sabse tu haseen hai husn wali
Maana sabke tu dilon mein basne wali
Haan haan hain nasha
Adaa bhi nakhre wali, par..
Taarefon se nahi
Tu maan'ne wali
Because SHARMI you are a phataka🤪- a full blown phenomenon- and therefore compliments are just not enough for you😳 You write with great finesse and the story plots are always A1 YAAR👏 OH and OMRU are just too cute 😆 do add them into your stories, I am missing them from the episodes😭 CONTINUE SOON!
Much Love,
Sam🤗❤️

Well this was indirectly dedicated to two persons... u and Roselind. Cuz i just love u guyz...🤗

Samy...i cnat express the happiness u have given me this morning. What an amazing feedback for the start of my day... which started with a wide smile.😃

@bold... that is an amazing compliment! nd thanks a lot for it...

Oh My MAATA... i am blushing samyyy... 😆😳

Thank u firewrk... love u dear🤗

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Monidipa konar

@ehmmbhluvr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

i wud luv to see ds n d serial...omru teasing shivika..nd shivika lovingly fighting...gud wrk dear..😊

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Anya

@elysianights

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Such a lovely story...
Annika helping Shivaay and then their kiss... ❤️
Annika wil never change..she said this out loud in front of the whole family...I was just laughing at that time...
Their Nok jhok is just adorable and Shivaay and annika share such at beautiful bond in between them...
Do continue soon...

Love u,
Anya

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sharmi

@lucky_princess

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

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It was evening. The Oberois were sitting and having their tea in the living room. They were relishing the "adrak wali chai and garam garam pakodas" prepared by Ani bahu. This was always "Friday's special."
"Only heavens know how u prepare these delicious pakodas" said Soumya while munching the pakodas as she took a sip of the kadak chai.
"I am in wid u sumo. Well i dont eat these oily foods... but Fridays are a exception, for i cant miss to feast on Bhabhi's food." Said Rudra.
The Oberois loved Anika's desi food.
"Thank u Rudy Devar..nd Mrs.Rudra Oberoi." She said. Making everyone's eyes go wide. Rudra and soumya stared at each other. Nd looked together at Anika. Anika smirked and continued.
"Matlab...future Mrs.Oberoi." making all the Oberois heave a sigh of relief.
All saw how RuMya bonded with each other and loved each other immensely..but Rudra and Soumya never knew how deeply they had fallen for the other.

Rudra and Soumya were throwing daggers at a grinning Anika.
"That was for morning..my pyaara devar." She said as she bent to take the empty cup from Rudra's hands. Soumya too heard it as she was sitting beside him. Soumya initially was angry then chuckled when Anika winked at her baby, Rudra.

She had grown too close to Rudra. They shared a very special bond and everyone knew this. He had started depending upon his Bhabhi more than his Bhaiyaa. They spent time cooking and eating together. Omkara too would join them mostly.
Every Sunday, Om, Rudra, Soumya, Prinku, Sahil, Anika and Shivaay used to spend time out in the lawn. They all turned kids with Sahil. But according to them Sahil was the eldest in the group. Nd he was the gang leader.
Anika and Rudra spent many times near the poolside.
Rudra opened up the secret only to his Bhabhi. She was shocked later she laughed like hell on knowing how Romi was at back of them. Nd it seemed that she liked the idea of getting married while drunk. So other than RuMya Anika was the only person who knew this secret. Anika had made the famous Anika's "Pinky Promise" to Rudra that she will not reveal about their marriage. Rudra said that he would soon open this matter to his bros. For some reason Rudra trusted Anika fully..sometimes he trusted more than his own superman!
AniRudOm teamed up against Shivaay to trick him. Nd Sahil joined them ocassionaly. Nd then they laughed non stop together when he fell into their trap helplessly.
The same happened wid Anika... Soumya and Prinku joined Shivaay nd tricked Anika. They to ended up rolling on the floor laughing. The elders heart felt warm seeing them happy.

For now Anika was pacing up and down restlessly. The family was confused looking at her.
They looked at each other and questioned the other.
"What happened Anika bhabhi? Y r u looking so restless?"
"Shivaay is not picking up his phone. I have tried 20 times from past 15 minutes. He hasnt replied to my calls nor my msgs."
She said worriedly.
"Arrey dont worry Ani bahu... billu will be back." Assured Dadi. But for some reason Anika was feeling uncomfortable.

It was 10.00 and Shivaay was not yet returned. Anika was looking towards the door waiting for her dear husband.
Now even dadi was getting worried.
"Pata nahi Billu kahan phass gaya. Ab tak phone bhi nahi kiya." Said Dadi. Hearing this Anika got more worried.
All were waiting for him and everyone tried calling him but there was no reply from him.

Anika stayed strong for the rest. She sent silent prayers to god to bring him back safely.

It was 12.00 and there was no sign of him.
OmRu planned to go in search of him when Anika too joined them.
Just as they turned they saw Shivaay coming in.
"Billu..." dadi ran and hugged her grandson.
"Kahan tu Shivaay??" Asked Pinky.
"And y didnt u answer ur calls?" Asked Om
Rudra ran and huugged his elder bro.
"Vo... gusse mein..."
He was rubbing the crook of his eyebrow.
"... phone thodiya. Right?!" Anika said standing far from him. Her eyes brimming wid tears.
Shivaay looked at her as she wiped off the unshed tears. He moved back seeing the anger on her face.

Her chandni came flying right at him. Shivaay ducked and he got saved. Everyone were a bit shocked at the act of Anika.

"U r sooo dead Shivaay today." Anika started running towards him when he too started running for his dear life.
He went to the other side of the sofa.
"Stop Shivaay. Warna.. bohoth bura hoga." They saw the fear covered with anger in Anika. They all were anotherof their fights...live!
Shivaay ran and hid behind his bade papa.
"Bade papa pls save me." He begged him.
"Sure my dear nephew." Bade papa winked at his Ani bahu. Nd he pulled Shivaay from behind nd pushed him towards Anika. Anika held his collar.
Both were panting like anything.

"Y on the devils name do u have the bad habit of breaking phones. The most important invention?!" She questioned him holding his collars.
"Do you even know what they all went through in the past few hours.. what i went through? Do u even have any idea u dumb ass?!"
"Anika..language."
"Language ... my foot!" She screamed at him.
"Look... if u cant help overcome this stupid addiction of breaking phones carry atleast 3 to 4 phones wid u.
"How can i carry 4 phones wid me Anika??! R u gone nuts?!" Asked Shivaay.
"Then Promise me u will never break ur phone again."
"Done promise..."
"No...Pinky promise..." she asked extending her pinky finger.
Shivaay crooked his Pinky finger wid hers. They stood there still panting slowly.
"No one has ever welcomed me so warmly... that too with an awesome throw of ur chandni!!" He commented at her.
They looked at each other and started laughing like anything. The family too laughed with them. OmRu adored them.
"Agar aapne phirse phone thodiya tho?? Asked Anika suddenly...
"And why do u doubt on my promise??"
"Bcuz.. aapka gusse ka koi bharosa nahi."
"Aisa kabhi nahi hoga... after all i have promised u... that too pinky wala promise." He said looking at her determined.
Anika threw her arms around his neck nd hugged him tightly. A few tears crawled down her cheeks. The happiness she found on feeling him safe in her arms knew no bounds.
Shivaay to returned the hug.
"Do u even know what all stupid things got into my mind. I just cant afford to loose u Bhagad Billa!
"Its okay Anika.. i will always be there wid u.
"I love u Shivaay.."
"Love u too Paanika!" He said as he smiled wid her. The Oberoi family knew... that they were made for each other.
They were a perfect couple wid all those flaws.
As OmRu always said... ShivIka r "Imperfectly perfect!!"😳

Well this is done... i was thinking about writing another shot where Shivaay takes his revenge on Anika... if u guyz lik it..pls tell me i will surely continue it...

If not then its k...

Leave ur feedbacks. Didnt proof read..pls ignore typos..

Love Sharmi...

Edited by lucky_princess - 8 years ago