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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: twerping

Tahiti!!!❤️

So I read the whole thing (apart from the first chapter) straight through...
and what an absolutely FANTASTIC story you've weaved. I was sitting on edge throughout! Do continue this!!! Am so relieved on reading that this story hasn't ended with this chapter.
Looking forward to the beginning of the next season.

This whole story was so cinematic.. we could easily make this into a series. at least a web series.




Thank you SO much Twerps!!!
I appreciate your encouragement!!!
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Really means so so much! 😊
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You are one awesome writer yourself! In fact you all are!
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow!! its superb, im at relief tht its not ending. i have to say u have such creative thinking n ur each n every lines helps to understand the charcter's emotions. loved it. do continue soon..😊😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: starbright9

wow!! its superb, im at relief tht its not ending. i have to say u have such creative thinking n ur each n every lines helps to understand the charcter's emotions. loved it. do continue soon..😊😊



Thank you SO much for this beautiful comment!! You're an amazing writer yourself! 😊 ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow really beautifully written 👏. Looking forward to more...
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Originally posted by: AvantikaP

Wow really beautifully written👏. Looking forward to more...



Thank you so much for the comment!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Tahiti-1



Thank you SO much for this beautiful comment!! You're an amazing writer yourself! 😊 ❤️

aww..thank u for the compliment. it means a lot to me..😊😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

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aww..thank u for the compliment. it means a lot to me..😊😊




Aww! You're welcome! 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Chapter 9: Of Mocha and Warm Fudge Brownies


She stared outside through her window, her fingers digging into the cold glass, her forehead resting on it. It was gloomy outside and also quite cold. Nothing has been the same for her since that day, when she was attacked and kidnapped. It left a scar on her heart. Thankfully, Ranveer was with her, pulling her through. She felt a presence beside her and so she turned around, to find the person she adores right beside her. "Can't sleep?" he asked, and extended a hand, cupping her cheek. She nodded her head, eyes downcast. "Still anxious?" he asked, and pulled her close slowly. She rested her head on his chest, and he encircled his arms around her, and his chin resting on her head. "Do you want to drink some coffee? Mocha perhaps? Whipped cream and chocolate sauce on top?" Ranveer asked. It always lifted her mood. Warm chocolate brownie with a side of vanilla ice cream and mocha with whipped cream. She nodded her head and pulled away, a soft smile drawing on her lips. It was around 3 am, and he didn't want to leave, for Ayaan was home. Albeit, Rudra is always around, quite literally, for example, he is staying over at Ranveer and Priyanka's for 2 nights now, Ranveer still thought that they should stay indoor today.

The kitchen was located downstairs while the bedrooms were located on the upper story of the house. So, hopefully it wouldn't wake anyone up.

So, he took her hands in his and went inside the kitchen, drawing out all the items they need to make a brownie. Priyanka suddenly seemed to be smiling again. She had always loved baking, and when it involved Ranveer or Ayaan, she loved it even more.

The duo started to make the batter, Priyanka adding the chocolate chips, while Ranveer was mixing it altogether. He finally put it inside the oven, while Priyanka proceeded to take out ground coffee that Ranveer had prepared the previous morning. Albeit it's not the freshest, but it still does wonders. Priyanka prepared the coffee, while Ranveer took the chocolate sauce out of the fridge, something they always kept at hand for Ayaan loved chocolate milk.

Finally, the coffee and brownie was done and duo sat down to eat near their bedroom window which had a divan right beside it. Priyanka took a small bite of the brownie and her eyes closed in bliss. Ranveer smiled, his heart swelling in happiness, for it had been a while since Priyanka had looked at ease. She looked at him and smiled, taking a small piece of the warm fudgy brownie with a little bit of the vanilla ice cream on her spoon which she proceeded to feed him. He took a bite of it and smiled at her, which she returned with a even bigger smile. "Better?" He asked and she replied "much," nodding her head. She scooted close to him, one of his arms around her and his cheek on her head. She sighed and he knew that she was at ease. "You know if you don't drink the mocha, I would" he said, mischievousness masking his tone. She looked up at him, and playfully narrowed her eyes, a smile grazing her lips.

He took a sip of the mocha and closed his eyes. The bitter coffee and the rich bitter sweet creamy chocolate balanced each other out. It tasted smooth, for it was in perfect harmony with the sweet whipped cream and the rich chocolate sauce. It was flawless. He opened his eyes and found his wife staring at him eagerly, waiting for a response. He smiled at her and said "it's perfect." She smiled at him once again, her eyes filling with happiness. Ranveer was relieved to see her progress. He knew that it would take a while for her haunting memories to fade away, even just a little bit.

The coffee and brownie was done and none of them had bothered to clean the dishes. They actually managed to relax, without having a lace of worry in their minds. She had curled up against him, her arms encircled around him, while he had his arm around her, his protectiveness coming out even in slumber. She had fallen asleep fast this time - for the first time in a long time, while he was half awake, saying a silent prayer to the Creator of the Heavens and beyond, for blessing his life with a family, for keeping his family intact, for giving him a second chance at life, and for giving him true happiness.


Chapter 10 - Aftermath

Edited by Tahiti-1 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
That was deliciously described! Can't wait for their new adventure to start! So glad you're back writing.
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Posted: 8 years ago
YAY..!!
finally..!! after a long time..
such a wonderful update. prinku is so lucky to have such a caring hubby. waiting for next update, update soon

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