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@Cookieg

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Poor Shivaay..in so much pain

Lovely update

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Aparikshita

@Aparikshita

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#52

awesome update...

Very well written...perfectly done...well,dear,donno how u always give perfection to ur every story...that's why, i always try to find perfect words to give a perfect reply to u...& now i'm feeling like failure as i couldn't find even a single perfect word...poor me...

Forget about my failure...let's talk about the update...
So,the passion is growing inside shivay towards ani...that's why he was so generous towards her...i mean rude...
He gave lift to her...hmm,caring shiv...& that song...perfect selection..."tera mujhse hain pehle ka nata koi"...
Omg...ani's antics forced shiv to laugh...awe...she gave perfect advice to him...shiv u try to listen to her...she is a good advisor...
Hmm,so we got a glimpse of his pain...oh no,he is so broken...but no need to worry ani will heal his broken heart...loved it...

Continue the next one soon...

Edited by Aparikshita - 8 years ago

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sharmi

@lucky_princess

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Superb update...

That smile wala comment was the best...

Nd Anika feeling bad for shivaay. .she could read his eyes...somewhat sense his pain...

Nd Shivaay thinks Anika is different... nd he is not ready to fall for her..

He is used to bandage his own wounds.. poor guy..

Continue sooon..

Love Sharmi

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Akshnavlove

@ShivIka..Ketaki

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#54

loved part 2

loved shivika bonding lekin shivaay ka past

hope so anika usse jaldi pastke gumse nikale

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floral

@floral

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#55

2nd part is simply awesome

loved it

so shivaay already developed a soft corner for anika but he denying infact trying to bury it iam sure he will back to anika young man mood with anika .iam feeling bad for him someone has betrayed him that is why he is like this now i hope anika fills his life with pure love and get him out of this assumption all are like her

plzzz do continue soon😊