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Posted: 8 years ago
Fantastic part Harshada😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome as always dearie...
Loved it !!! ❤️ ❤️
Thnx for the PM...Continue Soonish :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow it's so beautiful and romantic.
Shivaay is so caring.
I just love this
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy-pri

read the 11th part just now...amazinggg...ohhh!!!!!!I sooo live this caring & loving Shivaay...the way he cared for her was so overwhelming...suprbbb...update the next soon...& plz do send me a pm...



Thanks a lot Pri😳
Glad you enjoyed reading it .
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: MorningStar01

Res'ing until the morning.

I wanna be fully awake when I comment on this beautiful chapter && I also wanna read it once more ❤️
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BEST goodnight gift EVER 😳
L.I.B is my personal favourite ❤️
So this was just the perfect thing to end an amazing weekend
There are so many words to describe this update, but none of it would be good enough 🥱
Right from the first word up until the last one, I had a ridiculously big smile on my face 😆Still do 😳.
You know I'm a sucker for love, and this update just had love written all over it It was beautiful. ❤️


"I can walk a lifetime by holding you like this, in my arms" I want to be told that too
Shivaay has truly become a different Shivaay, he's now Anika's Shivaay. And this Shivaay is a better version. He's romantic, caring, loving and most of all, he now has a fear, he's allowing himself to be happy 👏


I'm glad that Kaka is there for Shivaay. And he seems to genuinely care about Shivaay too. His observations of Anika&Shivaay are just spot on 😆


Sigh. These subtle romantic things are what I love about your stories ❤️ I love how they're both always getting lost in staring at the other
"As tough as bringing stars on the earth" how do you manage to make us feel all warm&mushy one moment and then the next I'm laughing out 😲
&&& then you have our hearts clenching at his pain and fear 😭
I get why he's so shaken up. He's finally found the one person who's HIS. She's become his everything so losing her would leave him empty 😒
I'm just inlove with the depth of emotion you've given Shivaay here...from being someone who used to be so cold and distant, to someone who can bare his soul to her I guess it's because Love is Beautiful 😳
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I don't know how you do it, but your updates leaves surprise me, it always leave me feeling so many different emotions (I feel so bipolar when i'm done reading it 😭). I've said this many times before but I'll tell you again...You have an amazing way with words and emotions. I love it. ❤️


Please please update sooon 👏 (only if you're free that is, hehe 😆)
Thank uUu for the link. I lahh uUu 🤗

Love, HugzZz & Kisses
-Shan'e



Can I love you more than I already do??🤗🤗
Thanks a ton for this amazing feedback. You made my days.

Really?? I am glad if it was.
I know😳 Though I still fail to understand what it is in this one simplest of all works that you like this so much,
I take it as a complement.
Oh god. If I haven't had been here, I could have never understood that a story can make you smile like never before.
I do. I love 'love' you know [Strictly in imagination😆]

Ooo😆 You gotta make your partners read fiction then😉 But then again, I don't think its needed🤣

I sometimes get ridiculously romantic no?😲 But I am happy you like it.
Hahaha...I have a bad sense of humor but it sometimes come out.

I more relate to you on that. I never planned Shivaay's journey here. But the way you sum it up, it sounds beautiful.

Yes and everytime you say it, I am left wondering do I deserve this much appreciation?
But all I can do is to thank you a zillion times.

Loads of love, hugs and kisses
-Harshada






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Posted: 8 years ago
Read the whole book 1... Loved it... Such an emotional roller coaster... But anika made shivaay change with her love and care...


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Posted: 8 years ago
Dear Harshada
Read this in one go.. And it's awesome just like all ur previous works... I have read quite a lot of them.
Apologies for not appreciating your works through comments earlier.
Keep writing...
Safna
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Posted: 8 years ago
This has been so beautifully written
I have read many os and ts on shivika I liked them but somewhere I was always disappointed as basically all of them portrayed Shivaay as ruthless and cruel to Anika... You had portrayed Shivaay very accurately... Even talking about the serial there are many untold circumstances which had made Shivaay the great wall of Shivaay Singh Oberoi... You have shown one of the circumstances very beautifully...(it is different from the serial but somehow connected as Shivaay never got the love he deserved from his parents)
You are a brilliant writer...
And I hope to read a new ts or os where you unfold another layer of Shivaay with the same excellence ... :)
Please please please do write more and more :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice really a good ff.
I can understand Shivaay's pain which he got from his parents. I can really relate to it. Its so so good to read. Good that Shivaay has Annika by his side now.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Girl, I just read book one and your book two updates in one go!! I fell in love with story. I actually follow all your other works as well! Keep the updates coming!!

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