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Originally posted by: Imashkara

Jeene k liye socha hi nahi dard sambhalne honge,

Muskuraye to muskurane k karz utarane honge,

Muskurao kabhi to lagta hai jaise hotho pe karz rakha hai...

Tujse naraaz nahi zindgi hairan hu main...hairan hu main

Tere maasoom sawalo se pareshan hu main...pareshan hu main...

😭😭😭

Tumhare paas tissue paper hai kya, paper chodo box hi de do...because I'm badly wanted...no wonder why shivaay so rude and bitter...now I understood why he behaving like this..poor fellow or karta bhi kya, his parents they are good for nothing, useless huhhh...jab shivaay ko sabse zyada unki zarurat thi kaha the wo...his only happiness his sister priyanka she is also not with him...how cruel his mother she killed priyanka...hey bhagvan aisa kon karta hai...life main na ignorance and betrayal is wrost things ever or shivaay ko to dono hi mili...ek uske parents se or ek uski so called girlfriend se...Anika feel his pain, she is broken inside but no girl you have to handle shivaay with love jiss se wo bhagata raha hai...I'm waiting for this and I know tum uska saath kabhi nahi chodogi...

Chaand bhi jhankta hai khidkio se,,

Meri tanhaiyo ki charcha ab aasmano main hai...

Originally posted by: Aparikshita

harshu dear,
What!! U r nervous...but why?how can u be nervous?
As u given perfection to this update...not only to this one but also to whatever u written till now...everything was just beyond perfection for me...so,u needn't be nervous...


Hey my dear Sanju🤗🤗 So glad to have you here. Was waiting for you.

Yup! I wasn't sure if I lived upto your expectations or dear.

Aahh! Thats sugar sweet of you😳 You are just too kind and warm about my stories my dear.

Your confidence on me gives me such motivation that I can't even express.



This was brilliantly written,dear...
U described his inner pains so well that i'm speechless,right now...yes,u r right dear...from the very start of this ss...shiv's pain was so intense...n his emotions were really extreme...n only one girl can't be that sole reason behind his unbearable pains...dear,u managed to justify his acts very successfully...Shiv really tolerated a lot...his parents...uff,i really couldn't bear this...every child wants his/her parents near him/her...as they know their parents will save them from all the devils of this ruthless world...but here his parents r the real devils themselves...i feel pity shiv...this part is so real...can't be compatible...so being divorced...not even thinking about their child...i just hate all this...


Thank you so very much Sanju😳 Glad you liked the update dear.

I am so thrilled at this moment that you could relate this much to the story. When I was penning down,, I really haven't thought that this would be so touching to everyone.

Yup! Thats what I was saying. The kind of reactions I have portrayed of him are too extreme to be just because of a girl's betrayal.

You made me relieved by saying that. Thanks a ton ❤️

He not only tolerated a lot but is tolerating a lot. His past still haunts him so much that he is still stuck there. Count me in, divorce is the worst word for me.




He even lost his sister...bhindi...so,this was the mystery behind his over flowing emotions...but that witch killed his happiness...

N that tia...how can she stoop so low...that was too much...n the dresses...loved the fact that...he didn't throw them as deep inside his heart knew someday someone will be there to value them...n heart never tells lie...that someone finally came to value them...n will value them for the rest of her life...


Yeah! This was the mystery behind the Bhindi...priyanka...his sister who meant world to him and was killed resulting him to be lonely in this vast universe.

Tia😡 Selfish and mean girl No adjectives for her

I actually hadn't included that part...that came when I was editing. Glad you liked it.

So well said👏




So,Now,ani knows everything about shiv...this was awesome...waiting for the next one...

Really,dear...u given ur best in this update...love u,dear...n yeah,age doesn't matter for me also...
Only one thing matters to me...n that is...u r a cute sweet lovable sister to me whom i found here...love u...muahhh...

Continue the next one soon...

She now knows all the chapters of his life book. Will update soon.

Thank you so much dear. Even though I don't think this was a good written update but you made my day with this comment.

Aww☺️🤗 I love you more and more...Sanju. You are a sweetheart.

Updating in a while,...

Love you loads

Sending you loads of virtual hugs and kisses🤗❤️

-Harshada

Originally posted by: lucky_princess

Looks like we ve faced something similiar in our lives!
No wonder u express pain in ur wrk perfectly...
Anyways lets forget all these nd enjoy ur stoey and ishqbaaz! 😉.
Its overwhelming to know that my words means a lott to u.😊
Love u too dear...🤗

Originally posted by: MorningStar01

HARSHADA 😭 Ohh mahn, you just got on a roller coaster ride of emotions here I'm sure my classmates and lecturer is convinced that I'm crazy 🤣 because instead of paying attention to the lesson I have been aww'ing, haha'ing and sniffling behind my laptop while reading the last 3 parts

Dear Shan'e🤗🤗

Ohh don't cry my dear😲😭...

Can I take it as a complement?😳 Which I of course know it is🤗

Oops😆 That happens a lot with me😆 Often in my college, I am reading something which results in suspecious looks of my college mates towards me🤣 and they are like ..'.what exactly is in your phone?'😆

Finally the reason for Shivaay behaviour is revealed 😳 but omw, how can his parents do that to him!!! && his mother, you'd think after her first marriage flopped, she'd understand that marriage isn't for her buhhht no she had to try it out 2 more times and now the 4th time 😲 they don't deserve to be called parents. His mother killed his sister 😲Annnd ofcoz that shitty Tia had to go act like a miner 😡 Urrggghhh

Finally...the part of revelation is here😆 ...But they did

@bold above, That's something new I came to read😆

They of course don't deserve any relation...

Shivaay deserves all the love&affection that Anika is going to give him. From the way Anika already feels his pain, and gives his pain priority over hers, I can tell that she is going to be the soothing balm to his pain And that she will be his all-in-one, his mamma, his papa, his best friend, sibling and everything he didn't know he craved for ❤️ && he knew Anika was going to come into his life so he kept those dresses 😳 sigh.

He is such an innocent kid at heart who is craving for love, care, affection and attention of someone but he doesn't like to show it as the fear clouded by his mind to get hurt again has overpowered everything else.

She will be an angel in his life who will take away all his pain and return the long lost love in his life.

Now that his past is out of the way, I can't wait to see how Anika brings him out the darkness.

Thank uUu for the p.m's, awaiting the next one

-Shan'e

I can see everyone is excited for further updates😳

Thank you so much...

Will update soon...

Love

-Harshada