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Posted: 8 years ago
Mere Sang To Chal Zara
Kyon Dekhe Dara Dara

Chal Tujhko Aa Chupa Lu
Apni baaho mein
Chal Khwaab Kuch Saja Du
Teri In Nigahon Mein

Mein Jo Sang Hoon
Tere Rang Hoon
Rahon Se Teri Chun Loon Mein Khwaab
Har Lamha Yun Guzre Ke gehrata jaye pyaar...


Hadd hai yaar...koi insaan itna pain kaise bardast kar sakta hai he or she will commit suicide...I just wonder and you give me my ans in mahi's story...banda kya kare jab life only give you pain not a one moment of happiness...depression and anger yehi reh jata hai you want someone who understand you, who care for you jo aap ko ye feel karvaye you are special for him/her...who loves you more than anything...poor Shivaay he suffering a lot...But now anika is there for him...And this part was awesome bestiee last wala she is confess her feelings so direct...This girl is out of this world...I hope shivaay reciprocate his feelings...This one is so emotional please give me some light update nahi to muje tumhara hug chahiye...verna I can't handle it more..

Aao saup doon tumhe
Apne khwaab...
Apni hasaraten...
Apne arman...
tum de do muje,
Meri hatheli per...
Apna naam...
Ye shaam or
Mutthi bhar khula aasmaan...

Edited by Imashkara - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AnShi_LoVe

This part is beyond Awesome...👏👏


Shivaay's life is really really painful...i hate their parents..how can they do this to him...😡😡

And on top of that his so called relatives..how could they say it was all Shivaay's fault..how could they call him unlucky...like how????....Heartless people...

Wat's his fault in all this...seriously!!!!!! Going by his parents characters they would have ended up in divorce even if he was not born...

Though he had someone to call HIS Parents, he lived a life of an orphan..yearning for the love, care, someone to hold his back, someone to soothe his aching heart and tell him that HE is thier life...ironically there was NO ONE...indeed life played a cruel game with him...😭😭😭

For all his tears, loneliness and longing for someone..at last God gave him a full package of love in the name of Anika...yes Shivaay, Love is Beautiful😳...THAT will soothe ur aching heart..make u believe everything u once hated...❤️ ❤️

Wonderful chapter dear...❤️🤗

Awesome as always..😊
Loved this...Thnx for the PM...Continue Soonish :)




Thank you so very much Nidhi...

Glad you liked this part dear...

I don't know if you have came across or not but such relatives does exists and they are sickening.
They aren't even people but creatures.

Exactly. People don't understand how their words can affect someone and to what extent.

Indeed. He can better be called as a orphan because his parents were for the namesake only.

Life has been bitter for him so far.

Yup! Anika will fill every emptiness in his life. She will bring sunshine in his life.

This story will end with Anika making Shivaay believe that love is indeed beautiful.

Thanks a lot Nidhi dear. Will update soon.

Loads of love
-Harshada


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: KrUtI97

this was awesome...loved this part...shivaay's pain can't be imagined..his parents are really stone hearted... his relatives are stupid..like seriously, what was shivaay's fault????annika confessed her love!!!!!! update soon...




Thank you so much dear😳

Glad you liked this part😳

Will update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome...i am super exited for next part...

i dnt expect her to confess soon...
but it was really beautiful



Thanks a lot ayushi...
Glad you liked this part.
Well I know ...no one really expected her to confess so soon.
Glad you liked it
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Aparikshita

wow,arshu dear...
This update was so emotional...n u penned it perfectly...u made me emotional,dear...u perfectly described his sorrows...


Thank you so much Sanju🤗

So glad you enjoyed reading this update...
You are always too kind dearie.




Ur update was so real...this is the reality of society where we actually live...sometime i feel ashamed of it...kids need our love n care...donno how people can be so selfish...divorce...this word just sucks...n after having an angle...is a big no for me...donno why...but i feel relationship values r decreasing from our society day by day...n childs r suffering mentally...even doctors agreed that parents separation can cause harm to a child mentally n emtionally...
Shiv was blamed for such a thing that isn't even his mistake...how could his relatives blame him...but unfortunately this is the reality...i have seen such relatives in my real life also...who thinks like this...but unfortunately,i'm unable to change their mentality...


I am glad you think so. I personally haven't came across any such issue but I know around the would, THIS is happening which irks me up.
Kids are the only one who suffers the most during the fights of their parents...divorce.
His relatives were jerks.Leave them. Even I have We cant do anything Sanju. No matter what, their sick mentality isn't going to change.




N mahi's story was also related to the reality...yes,this was also real,i myself seen such injustice to happen...this thing really makes me feel so low...in this cruel world our parents r the protector for us n when u lose them this world never let u live peacefully...this is the harsh reality...

Loved that u written such sensitive topics here...


This is so heartbreaking to witness I m at loss of words now.
Thank you so much Sanju...




N the last scene...shivika...the confession...perfect timing...she knew he needed someone...n she decided to give herself...i must say...perfect deal...

Loved it,dear...n lots of love for u...trust me,till now whenever i read ur stories my love was increasing day by day for u n ur stories...but now...after reading this n the previous update u earned my respect also...

Will be waiting for the next part...
So,Continue soon...
I accept those hugs n kisses...n now accept my hugs n kisses,dear...stay blessed...always...love u...


Glad you liked Anika's confession...
Its not only because he needs someone but she truly has fallen for him...

Thanks a ton Sanju😳 You always make me feel so good...

@bold above, 🤗❤️ I don't even know what to say on that😳

Will update soon.

🤗

Loads of love
-Harshada





dearest sanju,

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Kusum_s

AMAZING PART AS ALWAYZ!!!!!!



Thanks a lot kusum dear
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: arohiarsh16

AWESOME PART...waiting fr next update...




Thank you so much dear

Will update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow just three words but she did her magic
hopefully she will make shivaay understand that love is indeed beautiful.
i am surviving only on these fanfics right now as i had stopped watching ishqbaaz after shivika marraige
i was the first one to watch promo was so happy whole day for this news but now only depressed after watching how gul butchered all her characters.
please do continue
at least in your fic i can recall the wonderful pair of shivaay anika.
bye sumi
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kusharberry

amazing update dear
i loved it very much
omg i felt really bad for this shivaay
really so anika is in love with him
but will he accept her love
plzzz do continue soon
and thanks for the pm dear




Thanks a ton Lina

Glad you liked the update dear

Will update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago


Thanks a lot

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