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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

#201

Hey guys, I have updated the next part of this tale.

Have a read and share your feedbacks.

Like always, they mean a tremendous to me.

love

-Harshada

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sharmi

@lucky_princess

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#202

OMG!!!! Nothing could have been perfect more than this.

I had a image of wht will happen in the next update... but what u have done is out of the world!

Wonderful!

The pain had become soo much that it the tears have tried nd there was nothing left to flow other than emotions.. nd agony.

Beautifully expressed and amazingly written Harshu...[:D>] 👏

Then Anika's determination to calm him down... to give him all the love... to show him that love is not cruel... love is beautiful..the most beautiful and powerful feeling in the world.

To save him... as she couldnt save Mahi...

Then comes the consoling part... nd i am really impressed with that.👍🏼

The hug... spoke a thousand wrds...only her hug could calm him down. Give him the strength support and love that is needed for him.

He questioning her.."why??"

Nd the reply was the best in the whole update...

Those lines...were soo pure and beautiful... filled with innocence and concern.

Superb update... phir it was darwaza thod update!👏👏

Continue sooon.

🤗

Love Sharmi.❤️

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: wafa.M
Beautiful... ❤️

Thank you so much dear😳

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: lucky_princess
OMG!!!! Nothing could have been perfect more than this.
I had a image of wht will happen in the next update... but what u have done is out of the world!
Wonderful!
The pain had become soo much that it the tears have tried nd there was nothing left to flow other than emotions.. nd agony.
Beautifully expressed and amazingly written Harshu...[:D>] 👏

Then Anika's determination to calm him down... to give him all the love... to show him that love is not cruel... love is beautiful..the most beautiful and powerful feeling in the world.
To save him... as she couldnt save Mahi...

Then comes the consoling part... nd i am really impressed with that.👍🏼
The hug... spoke a thousand wrds...only her hug could calm him down. Give him the strength support and love that is needed for him.
He questioning her.."why??"
Nd the reply was the best in the whole update...
Those lines...were soo pure and beautiful... filled with innocence and concern.
Superb update... phir it was darwaza thod update!👏👏
Continue sooon.
🤗

Love Sharmi.❤️

Sharmi dearest🤗🤗

Thank you so very much 😳

I am super glad and super relieved to hear that you liked the update.

I'd love to know what had you imagined😳 So that I can get a glimpse of what readers were expecting😳

Hopefully pain will come to an end soon. I won't let it last long. He had suffered enough now happiness will have to knock his door.

Thanks a lot my dear. Glad you found it well written.

Anika's heart still sink remembering Mahi and that somewhere had left a scar on her heart. She couldn't do anything to save her that time but now she can, and she will.

She will bring back original Shivaay, making him believe that not all relations hurt. Love does exist and its beautiful.

Aww...thank you 😳 That hug was just a mere attempt from her side to embrace his pain within her and return back happiness to him.

I was quite unsure if you guys would like only four dialogue chapter or not but I am so glad that you did.

Thanks a ton for this wonderful feedback.

Will update soon..

Load of love

-Harshada

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Nidhi Pillai

@AnShi_LoVe

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#205

This part is beyond Awesome...👏👏

Shivaay's life is really really painful...i hate their parents..how can they do this to him...😡😡

And on top of that his so called relatives..how could they say it was all Shivaay's fault..how could they call him unlucky...like how????....Heartless people...

Wat's his fault in all this...seriously!!!!!! Going by his parents characters they would have ended up in divorce even if he was not born...

Though he had someone to call HIS Parents, he lived a life of an orphan..yearning for the love, care, someone to hold his back, someone to soothe his aching heart and tell him that HE is thier life...ironically there was NO ONE...indeed life played a cruel game with him...😭😭😭

For all his tears, loneliness and longing for someone..at last God gave him a full package of love in the name of Anika...yes Shivaay, Love is Beautiful😳...THAT will soothe ur aching heart..make u believe everything u once hated...❤️ ❤️

Wonderful chapter dear...❤️🤗

Awesome as always..😊

Loved this...Thnx for the PM...Continue Soonish :)

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KRUTI PASAD

@KrUtI97

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#206

this was awesome...loved this part...shivaay's pain can't be imagined..his parents are really stone hearted... his relatives are stupid..like seriously, what was shivaay's fault????annika confessed her love!!!!!! update soon...

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#207

awesome...i am super exited for next part...

i dnt expect her to confess soon...

but it was really beautiful

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Aparikshita

@Aparikshita

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#208

wow,arshu dear...
This update was so emotional...n u penned it perfectly...u made me emotional,dear...u perfectly described his sorrows...

Ur update was so real...this is the reality of society where we actually live...sometime i feel ashamed of it...kids need our love n care...donno how people can be so selfish...divorce...this word just sucks...n after having an angle...is a big no for me...donno why...but i feel relationship values r decreasing from our society day by day...n childs r suffering mentally...even doctors agreed that parents separation can cause harm to a child mentally n emtionally...
Shiv was blamed for such a thing that isn't even his mistake...how could his relatives blame him...but unfortunately this is the reality...i have seen such relatives in my real life also...who thinks like this...but unfortunately,i'm unable to change their mentality...

N mahi's story was also related to the reality...yes,this was also real,i myself seen such injustice to happen...this thing really makes me feel so low...in this cruel world our parents r the protector for us n when u lose them this world never let u live peacefully...this is the harsh reality...

Loved that u written such sensitive topics here...

N the last scene...shivika...the confession...perfect timing...she knew he needed someone...n she decided to give herself...i must say...perfect deal...

Loved it,dear...n lots of love for u...trust me,till now whenever i read ur stories my love was increasing day by day for u n ur stories...but now...after reading this n the previous update u earned my respect also...

Will be waiting for the next part...
So,Continue soon...
I accept those hugs n kisses...n now accept my hugs n kisses,dear...stay blessed...always...love u...

Edited by Aparikshita - 8 years ago