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Originally posted by: lucky_princess

Harshuu🤗...

U made me cry...cry bitterly 😭😭

Shivaay had such a horrrible and terrible past... maine nahi socha tha...

He smiled only occasionally... nd cried within his heart oftenly... how can someone be soo heartless...

They never saw his pain... that he needed them and not their money... He was robbed of their love and affection.

I could feel his pain... all thanks to your writing skills Harshu.

Sharmi dear🤗🤗

I am so sorry for making you cry my dear😭 But at the same moment I am thrilled that you could relate so much to the story emotionally😳

Indeed! He had a horrible past. I always have mentioned in my replies that the revelations will be heartbreaking.

His life had given him very few chances of smiling, and numerous ones to cry,

People do are heartless. They were so blind in themselves that they couldnt see how much their poor child was suffering.

That means a lot sharmi😳 I am so overwhelmed that I am really at loss of words what to say on that.

This update was... i dont have wrds to describe it! I am speechless...

Beautifully expressed emotions. It was heart breaking and poignant. Nothing could have been more painful than getting our trust broken each and everytime...especially when it is done by our loved ones...

You are so very kind with your words my dear🤗 I love you😳

Glad to know you found emotions to be well written. The incidents happened in his life has been breaking her inside out and thats no easy to bear. Only he knows how he is holding himself from tearing apart.

Prinku is no more...😭 she was murdered... that was even more hurting.

Its very hard to control emotions... i know how it feels when we lose someone close to our heart... someone who plays an important role in our life... someone who was always there for us...in our good and bad. And one day when u r need of their love and support...they r not by ur side...

Its damn difficult... this update of yours had freshened some dark memories...

Srry... thoda zyaada hogaya right!!

I don't even want to say anything about that Thats sheer cruelty😭

@bold above... No one can better than me understand what it is to bear agony of losing someone everyday on shoulders and faking a smile everyday you walk around people. Your life turns into a nightmare when someone who meant world to you, someone without whom you can't even imagine a single say, someone you wished to be lifetime with...we lose them. The pain...the pain of losing someone neither can be described nor can be expressed but the people who have to bear it and stay life with that pain are the most unlucky ones.

I apologize Sharmi for bringing dark memories of your life in front of you again. I really can understand. Nahi...jada nahi hua...

Fabulous... Painful... hurting... nd above all... AWESOME!!!!

Anika's emotions... her pain when she heared about the happenings in his past was well written.

A writer is best, whe he or she can make the reader what is actually happening... the reader can imagine all that... smile when the story turns happy... nd cries when it takes painful turns. Nd u have done it... u made me cry...

U r awesome Harshu👏... keep doing this wonderful job👍🏼👏

Continue sooon dear..

Love Sharmi..

Thank you so much dear Sharmi...

Your appreciation really means so much that I can't even express.

Thank you ...thank you so very much...I don't even consider myself a writer but your lovely words about me made me feel so good😳

You are awesome as well Sharmi sweetheart...Hopefully I will.

Will update soon.

Loads of love

-Harshada

Originally posted by: AnShi_LoVe

I cried along with Shivaay...the words u chose, the way u summed them up, everything was like beyond my imagination. 👏👏

I never even dreamed of this kind of Shivaay's past..😒

Yeah u r right at first even i thought that he got betrayed by a girl..coz of which he hates love..but this is heart wrenching..his whole life is PAIN..gifted by none other than his own Parents.

Nidhi my dear🤗🤗

I am so really sorry for making you cry my dear but at the same time thrilled that you all could relate so much emotionally to this story.

Thank you so much...Your comment made my whole month.

I know dear...I wanted to show something beyond a girl's betrayal. Thats too common.

His parents separation at the age of 10 caused him to hate relations...

Any child will be broken beyond repair to see his/her parents walk away from each other that too leaving him/her as an unwanted thing...

The physical wounds which u get while playing nd all...more than any medicine only mom's love and care will heal THAT quickly giving the child a hearty content..but here in Shivaay's life her mom never cared for him hmm...now i get why u mentioned in one of the prev chapter that he himself dresses his wounds,...and this made him believe that there is no love in this world...

Parents play most important role in their kid's lives. The impact of childhood incidents is so strong that one can't erase it no matter what.

If a kid doesn't get his parents love, then he remains nothing...absolutely nothing.

True...I'll soon post something focussing more on a mother's bond.

He is used to dressing his wounds on his own because he never had anyone who cared for him enough to do that.

I felt somewhat okay that God was not very cruel with his life...God did give him someone to love him unconditionally in the form of his sister Prinku...but i broke down with the fact that was also snatched from him by his wonderful Mother...i feel like strangling her to death😡😡...This made him to even erase the tiny belief he had on the word MAA...

When he started to feel for someone..overcoming all his pain...again he received only betrayal...which shattered the very base of everything to an extent that he started hating everything...

Priyanka was his soul. The only person in his life who loved him...who cared for him like no one else did.But...even she couldn't stay with him.,...all thanks to his so called mother.

Even I do...Tia was the last hammer on him which left him shattered into pieces, and left him to hate everything around him.

I cried and still crying 😭😭...this revelation is something Ani din expect..even i din expect...

Sorry Nidhi sweetheart😭😭

This Chap is just not confined to the box of Shivaay's past life...it's a social message...what a child actually wants from his/her parents and how parents should treat their children..for every child their parents are the one's who not only give him/her the much needed care but also a child grows looking at them..their behaviour, language, everything...create a strong impact in his/her life...luv u luv u to the power of infinity..i ll give u bone crushing Hug if u were infront of me now... for this wonderful Chapter...🤗🤗

Love u loads...❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Awesome as always...

Loved this...Thnx for the PM dear...Continue Soon :)

Thanks a ton dear. I am so happy you said that. Exactly...I exactly wanted to point out that...That how important parents are in any kid's life and how they should behave in front of them, how to love them and care for them.

I love you till moon and back my dear...zillion times❤️🤗😳

I am sending you loads of virtual hugs and kisses❤️🤗

Thank you so much Nidhi. You seriously made my days😳