MDT UNNAMED V2.0 SHIVIKA : (17,20) - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is amazing please do continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
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it was awsm...
read all the parts in one go...
shivika had two babies...aayu and anirudh...just love them...
and rudra...he is just adorable...i just love him...
wating for the confrontation of dadi and shivika along with the babies...
and yeah...!! shivika marriage...
do continue soon...
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PART 11

Daadi "Tum donon aagayen hon,merey par pothon key saath."

Anika just nodded.As daadi took them both into a hug.

Daadi "Khush rahon donon."

Anika is silent she is not able to speak and want him to take control she has been in control of her life all along and now she want him to be the one.

Shivaay passed Aani to daadi's arms.

Shivaay "Anirudh."

Anika followed the same and gave both her great grand sons's to her lap.

Shivaay "Aayu."

Daadi "Anika kyaa chahiyen tumhey.Kuch bhee mango ."elated she wanted to gift her grand daughter something.

Anika "Daadi mujhey kuch nahen chaahiyen."

Daadi "Anika mango tumney jho khushi mujhey dee hain mujhey kuch dena hee hoga."

Daadi "Tumhaare shaadi key liyen bhee tho dena hain Anika ."

Anika "Daadi aap jaanthey hain billuji merey saath aarahen hain."

Daadi "Han aur main usskey liyen bahuth khush hun."

Anika "Aap jaanthey hain jabh aapko inkee jaroori hain main unko udhar rokhungi nahen."

Daadi just smiled "Theek hain Anika jabh thak humey sach mey billu kee jaroori nahen hain tumhey nahen bulaayengey , main koichal honey nahen doongi."

Daadi just adored her and holding anika's head between her palms and kissed her on her forhead.

Shivaay just watched them amused ,he know he will come back to their house but life with Anika her alone is something he is waiting for.

Daadi "Sahil ghar mey akela hain."

Anika "Nahne daadi who madem ke betey key saath hain hostel mey donon bahuth achey dost hain."

Daadi "Yeh tumhaara decision nahenn hain na."

Anika "Usska hain,jahna main rehtee hun wahan abh bachey nahen hain tho who akeley vore ho rahan thaa aur madem ka beta usska ek hee dost thaa jabh who hostel jaarahan thaa issney bhee jidd suru kee."

Anika "Abh poorey maza kar rahan hain ,ghar aatha hain aur poora din bathon mey hee ,sabh bataana hain ussko ussney kyaa kyaa masti kee."

Daadi "Ghar mey akelee rehthee hon?" daadi asked realizing as Sahil is staying in hostel.

Anika "Yeh donon hain na merey company mey aur kabhee kabhee Suhasini madem bhee aathee hain."

Shivay too felt bad at it but now no more he will be with her and then whole family.

Jahnavi came same time "Anika tum ready hon tho nikaley."

Anika was confused "Kahan?"

Jahnavi "Shopping tumhaari shaadi hain yahee kapdon mey karogi kyaa?"

Anika "Noun bhee nahen bhajee abh koi shop open nahen hogee."

Jahnavi "Lucky for us ,Rudy ney do shop open karwaaya .Ek lakey waaley key liyen ek ladki waalon key liyen."

Anika was confused "Merey taraf sey koi nahen hain." Anika looked embarrassed.

Jahnavi "Tej aur main ladkee walon key taraf hain aur Rudy bhee aur Prinku."

Daadi "Main ladkey waaley key side mey hun." Smiling.

Anika was blushing she may not be having a grand marriage but she is having a family by her side.

Rudy came same time "Mom indonon ko bhee baatna hain naa."

Anika "Nahen." This time she is serious face.

Anika "Un donon ko kabhee alag nahen hona hain kabhee nahen."

Anika "Donon tum teenon key taraha hummesha saath rehna hain." She said deeply.She want her kids just like their uncles and father always together.

Rudy "Dee abhee tho suru hueen hain Om key bhee bachey aayengey aur " blushin "Merey bhee."

All are laughing at him.

Shivay just smacked him.

Shivaay "Tum mandir jaa rahan thaa na."

Rudra "Mom ko shop bhee ley jaana hain ."

Rudra "Soumya tum logon ka wait kar rahen hain."

Rudra "Daadi Prinku aur aap saath aajaana direct mandir mainey driver ko bathadiya hain."

Jahnavi "Anika humey chalna hain time jyaada nahen hain."

Jahnavi "I guess Pinky bhee aarahen hogee abh ." Jahnavi said picking her favourite twin as Anika picked other up.

As they are leaving Shivay watched everything with ave ,yesterday this time he is no state to speak today he is so full to speak.

Daadi "Kyaa haun Billu tum aisey kyaa dekh rahen hon."

Shivaay "Daadi kall thak kuch adhoora lagtha thaa,mujhey kyon patha nahen thaa ,I always felt like half ,incomplete abh kyon its changed ."

Shivaay "I don't know but I guess mujhey patha thaa bachon key baarey mey all along."

Shivaay "Main bass do ghantey bitaaya hain undonon key saath but felt like known them from years,obviously its not true but ."

Daadi just watching him "Abhee suru huin hain billu tumhey aur kuch dekhna baakee hain."

Daadi "Tumhaarey zindagee badalney waali hain ."

Daadi "Tum abh thak ek ladka rahen hon abh admee banney mey sadey do ghantey bakee hain."

Daadi "Tumney abh thak sab kuch bada dekha hain abh tumhaari mulaakat hoge sab kuch chotey sey chotey responsibilities,chotey pariwar,khushiyan yeh chotey hain lekin tumhaarey dil key har koney mey pahunchengey."

Shivaay "Daadi pehley barr darr lag rahan hain,mainey maan tho liyan sabkey saamney ,but am I really ready yet."

Shivaay "Main yeh responsibility key liyye tayyar hon kyaa,I think Anika is right."

Daadi "Jitnaa bhee time leylo billu hum kissey cheez key liyyen poorey tayyar nahen hain ,hum aisey hain tho yeh zindagee nahen hain."

Daadi "Tumhey kuch rukhawat milenegy neechey giraayengey tumhey neechey dihaayengey but tum jabh uthogey naa tumhey samajh aayega sachayi yeh koi kissey ko nahen sikha paayega."

Daadi "Tumney himmat dikhaayi hain yeh important hain."

Daadi "Bhagawan Shri Ram bhee apney pith aka aghna ullanghan karkey mahal mey rehsakta thaa aur raja ban saktha thaa lekin ussey sirf ayodhya ki praja ka hee uddhaaran hotha jabh who vanavas gayen aur apney mushkilon kee saamna kiya who poorey dharthi ka nirdesya baney,poora dharthi ussko raja maana ."

Daadi "Main jaanthi hun iss donon mey koi lena dena nahen hain par tum khud jaanogey."

Shivaay "You are just magnifying it,I am going only for my personal issue ,Anika key liyen."

Daadi "Who toh kaafi hain na wajaha jho bhee hon lekin zindagee key sachaayi kabhee apney ghar mey nahen miltee ussey dhoondna padtha hain."

Shivaay "What ever.But Anika hain she will handle things."

Daadi "Who nahen karegi who bass tumhaara saath de sakti hain."

Daadi "Who bichaari bhi thak gayee hain apney zindagee ko samhaalthey samhalthey abh who mouka tumhey diya hain ,Usska bharosa math thodna ."

Daadi "Shivaay ,kuch bhee hojaye uska saath math chodna,tumhey kitna bhee gusaa aaye bass yeh yaad rakhna there is something more beautiful worth passing this period."

Shivaay "Daadi main hummesha key liyen nahen jaa rahan hun main waapas aaonga."

Daadi "Lekin samy sabko badal dethee hain ,jho shivaay singh Oberoi waapas aayaga who tum nahen hongey ,"

Shivaay he is not yet understanding what this journey means really,for him its just nothing.But he is yet to realize there are 1000 mm's in a meter and 10power nine nano meters too.

Pinky "Shivaay chaley."

Shivaay looked at his daadi who has that pride on her eyes its because of him she is proud of him.

Shivaay "Yes mom."

Pinky "Undonon ko who le gaye." She wanted one of them by her atleast once the marriage is over there won't be much time to spend with the babies.She is disappointed.

Pinky "Shivaay tumhaara kuch nahen ho sakta hain,tum donon ka baap hone k ko tho tumhaarey saath rak sakta."

Pinky "Saarey Oberoi's ka gents na ek jaisey hee hain bachon ka sabh maa ko hee karna hain."

Shivaay "Mom main kyaa kar sakta hun ,bade ma ney Aayu ko ley liyan thaa."

Pinky "Aani ko tho letha Anika sey ,abh bachey ko uthaaney kuch nahen pooch paa rahen hon."

Pinky "Shaadi key baad kuch chaahiyen tho kaisey poochogey ,nikamma."

Shivaay "Mom aap mujhpey gussa hain ya issliyen hain kee badi mom key pass donon hain."

Pinky "Tum na baath hee math karo.Mujhey bhee na Anika key side hee hona thaa ."

Shivaay looked embarraded with his mom scolding him non stop and for what reason he is yet to understand.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#84
ha ha
pinky na
poor shivaay
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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very beautiful update..👏
so finally marriage is proceeding and shivika gone for shopping..
shivaay 's fears are true but he will learn to handle it..
dadi giving him lessons that was so good..
anika's wish for siblings to always be together like shivomru was wow..
and ru saying about om n his kids😆
so adorable
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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lol...dramebazz pinky...such cute scene
do update fast
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome...yaar...
Rudy as usual the most adorable one by his antics...baby was blushing...ani wants her sons to be inseperable like their dad n uncles...awe...

Pls, i don't understand what u have thought but i want all 3 o bros to live in ani's house together n complete the vanvas...

N last part was so funny...haha...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aparikshita

awesome...yaar...
Rudy as usual the most adorable one by his antics...baby was blushing...ani wants her sons to be inseperable like their dad n uncles...awe...

Pls, i don't understand what u have thought but i want all 3 o bros to live in ani's house together n complete the vanvas...

N last part was so funny...haha...


I guess rudy already told that he is going to om I mean shivaay don't know yet.
they will be together
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PART 12

Rudra was completely spot on he arranged everything in time even surprising Anika to the extent and Pinky took Aani immediately after she saw the duo .Om was silent and capturing every moment in his heart for a difference even Rudra kept his camra shut giving all the responsibility of the pictures to Soumya.Everything happened grand to its scale every thing is arranged in moment's notice Anika's voice is completely gone she don't want to speak a word more fearing when she will break down crying ,She has been strong all along the year she was strong she didn't fear for a moment what will happen next all things in her thoughts were those two gems of hers now she has responsibility of not just those two but a big families happiness and future and now herself too.Shivaay is not thinking much for him its just all about now he know something good is waiting ahead of him. Daadi was the happiest if we not consider Aayu and Jahnavi pair who are speaking non stop to each other and but no onw understood what he is saying and he behaved like it is actually making total sense and in muddle crying for his mother.

Anika never told but Aayu is more of mamma's kid and attention seeker he is he want his mother in his sight always and want everyone to be with him reminding more of his uncle and he will be there with him though .

Tej and Shakti were mere spectators in the event.It all went well and even pooja was fine Pinky was too careful regarding everything related to her grandsons she finished everything from their kundli to all the poojas to be done by their name.

By evening 5 every activity was finished and all returned to hotels.Tej and Shakti decided to go back to Hyderabad to finish their unfinished business which they left in middle and came here.

Daadi ,Prinku ,Pinky and Jahnavi along with Rudra and Om are planning to leave to Mumbai leaving Anika and Shivaay alone for them selves as they would be heading to Pune (Anika's new home) after the event and even though Saloni madam was insisting her to head back home.

Shakti has managed to grab a appointment letter for Shivaay in smallest company he own in Pune to finish Shivaay's promise and he promised Anika that he won't interfere in what ever happen in that company and will be same as he was previously about it which is doesn't even care.

Rudra slily managed to get keys of Anika's flat from her during the marriage ceremonies and made a duplicate of it unknown to her.

In Airport a security of Oberoi's was waiting for Rudra there with his luggage.

Daadi "Rudra yeh kyaa ho rahan hain." Looking at all the luggage packed and ready almost 8 bags of both Om and Rudra.

Rudra "Hum bhee bhayya key saath jaa rahen hain."

Jahnavi "Tumney kissey ko bathaaya nahen ."

Rudra "Nahen,hum bhayya ko akeley kaisey chod saktey hain."

Rudra "Wahan usska khyaal koun rakhega usska taang kheechney ka itna acha mouka aur kabh milega ."

Jahnavi "Tum sirf apney bhayya kee taang kheechney jaa rahan hain."

Om "Nahen mom its just Shivaay is new to all this he will need all the help he can get and we better go with him,Anika humey nahen rokhegeee and what is need of being together everytime when we are not going to be with him right when recquired."

Daadi "Tumney yeh kabh decide kiyya ?"

Rudra "Jabh bhayya ney shaadi key barey mey decide kiyya."

Rudra "Sab kuch wahan hain abh I mean, Anika didi twins,bhayya humey jaroor jaana hoga."

Jahnavi was so proud of them at that moment,they are not making big sacrifice or anything but they decided to be with their brother rather than any bungalow or mansion."

Soumya "Tum andhar kaisey jaaogey Anika di tho abh Kolkata mey hain na."

Rudra showing her the keys .

Rudra "We made a duplicate.Aur mainey address bahuth pehley ley liya hain."

Jahnavi hugged both of them and kissed them on cheeks.

Jahnavi "Phone karthey rehna jho bhee hon."

Jahnavi "Studion kaa kyaa socha."

Om "I will utilize this time to learn something new .Studio for break."

Rudra "Main bhee kuch karoonga,I guess its time for me too."

Rudra "I want to be hero for the twins .I want everything of theirs to be mine." Deeply he really meant it.

Jahnavi "So what are you doing ?"

Rudra "Abh thak socha nahen I will use this time."

Jahnavi "Ok I will not interfere in your youngster business ,but kuch chaahiyen tho mujhey bataadena."

Daadi "Unpar bharosa karon ,unko hummarey jaroori nahen hain they can do it themselves."

As the seniors and Prinku left .

Soumya "Tho chaley."

Rudra "Tum bhee hummarey saath aarahen hon."

Soumya "Obviously ,ghar ko bhee ready karna hain na and main Anika di sey door kyon rahoongi."

Soumya "I am also taking break I can run the live from anywhere."

Rudra "Don't interfere in between me and twins,"

Soumya "Tum koun ho mujhey bataaney key liyen."

Rudra "Who merey bateejey hain."

Om "Tum donon chup hojaon tum donon aisey lad rahen hon kee tumhaari shaadi huin hain aur apney bachey baant rahen hon."

Om "Calm down you guys."

Om "Rudra lets go."

Rudra "Tumhaara luggage."

Soumya "Main Pune mangwaaongey"

As Rudra went to bring tickets .

Om "Soumya tum kyon aarahen hon?" Om asked cautiously.

Soumya "Tum log bhee aarahen hon na." main bass Anika di ko miss kar rahen thee.

Soumya burst to laughing suddenly without teling.

Om "Kyaa huan?"

Soumya "Hum sabh wahan jaarahen hain and I mean and hum mey sey koi employed nahen hain aur yes hum issey break ley rahen hain."

Soumya "Anika dee leave mey hain and only earning member is Shivaay bhayya who bhee freshly employed.Salary bhee 30k hain.Woh 60k ka phone gussey mey thoddethey they almost everytime."

Om also smiled regarding it.

Om "Shivaay will have to learn,seekhega."

Here Anika and Shivaay were sitting silently they have million things to speak but it is all new for them .

Anika just looking at Aayu .

Shivaay "Anika Aayu kuch nahen karega."

Anika looked at him confused.

Shivaay "Baathey hummari hain Aayu bath nahen karpaayega samjhega bhee nahen."

Anika "Sabh samjhta hain." Kissing his hand.

Shivaay "Mainey kall ki flight book karney kahan hain Rudra sey after the event."

Anika just nodded.

Anika "Mujhey kuch gadbad lag rahan hain."

Shivaay "Kyaa huan ?" holding her hands.

Anika just enjoying the feel forgetting what she is thinking.




After two days.(PUNE)

Anika was holding the twins while Shivaay brought the luggage .Rudra was waiting for them to come as Soumya stopped them for formalities.

Shivaay "Rudra tum log yahan kyaa kar rahen hon."

Rudra "Hum actually aapkey saath yahen rehney waaley hain."

showing his hand to Anika for Hi fi .But as Anika's hands were busy he gave it to kids.

Shivaay was too shocked and happy to have his brothers by his side.

Anika "Mujhey tho patha thaa ? Tum log jaathey waqt hee main samajh gaya thaa aisa kuch honey wala hain."

Anika "Issliyen mainey security ko phone karkey batadiya koi aaye tho andhar bhej dena."

Om "Anika tumhey kaisey patha thaa?"

Shivaay "Rudra emotional nahen thaa ,when he was leaving."


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...desperado rudra...😆 was amazing as always. continue soon👍🏼

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