How do I believe: Anika (A Poem)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Your touch was the drop of rain I never expected,
(worse)
I did not think I ever hoped for
muddy, flammable, orange
drops of hot ice
that consumed my fingers
as they touched you.
Wounded, undeterred,
I await the only decision
that would release me
from you,
and your deceitfully colourful cage
of grey eyes.
While you lie untroubled
by dreams of me,
merely happy with sacrifices,
unexpected but not unimportant,
efficient but not affectionate enough;
while you become an experiment for the universe
you do not believe in,
I work for a free breath in the one that exists
(Love is an illusion,
hope, a disguise,
assuming your trust,
was my life's biggest lie).

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Arey wah ya it's so good I really loved it ...ur talented I liked that hot ice ...bit superb .
I was missing ur post analysis likh dal
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bsangama

Arey wah ya it's so good I really loved it ...ur talented I liked that hot ice ...bit superb .
I was missing ur post analysis likh dal


Aww thank you!
Waise maine link kiya: i updated OS, i made a post too! 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: geet.a


Aww thank you!
Waise maine link kiya: i updated OS, i made a post too! 😃



Cool 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Was waiting 4 ur post 😉
res 4 nw
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: geet.a


Your touch was the drop of rain I never expected,
(worse)
I did not think I ever hoped for
muddy, flammable, orange
drops of hot ice
that consumed my fingers
as they touched you.
Wounded, undeterred,
I await the only decision
that would release me
from you,
and your deceitfully colourful cage
of grey eyes.
While you lie untroubled
by dreams of me,
merely happy with sacrifices,
unexpected but not unimportant,
efficient but not affectionate enough;
while you become an experiment for the universe
you do not believe in,
I work for a free breath in the one that exists
(Love is an illusion,
hope, a disguise,
assuming your trust,
was my life's biggest lie).


#bold this brought the feels... 😲. So much true to Anikas thinking...

Geet &Talent 😉 enough said! Am I right or am I right ? 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Geet,
that's a nice piece of poetry.. did you write it yourself? 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: mushiroxx

Hey Geet,

that's a nice piece of poetry.. did you write it yourself? 😃

thanks!
I AM a poet to be published soon :)
😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: pritzz


#bold this brought the feels... 😲. So much true to Anikas thinking...

Geet &Talent 😉 enough said! Am I right or am I right ? 😉


aakhir hidden bat samajh hi li tune🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing poetry yaara 👏
aaj toh tu forum mein cha Rahi hain Yaara and I am loving it 😳

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