One Shot-The Paths We Take. COMPLETED-Author's Note Pg 11

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Sanjana

@akhilash

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Thanks for the second installment with a cliffhanger. Awaiting the next update at your convenience. 👏

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emerald39

@emerald39

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Ohhh I love this! Kinda painful to read about Shivaay's emotions...but dude deserves it. Still love him, but he deserves it.

Do PM me when you update! ^_^

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jarir2010

@jarir2010

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Thanks for the update.
Will ne waoting.for next,plz update soon if convenient.
Thanks again 👏 👏 👏

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@-happilyunknown

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Uff he shouted at Dadi? :o This man has absolutely no limits does he?

Loved the suffering that he went through*Sadistic, but eh he deserves it* Can't wait to know what is going to happen next ❤️ What is she going to say, after 6 months of him going MIA? will Shivaay actually bring her back home in bridal clothes?

And i know that you are mad at him for the way he attacked her and this is a way to vent out your feelings *Totally enjoying it though* I hope tha you will give this one a happy ending. My heart craves for one, despite his assholeiness🤣

Loved loved loved the 2 chaps <3

-G

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Deepa

@deepa.e

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

beautifully penned!!

Will be waiting to read more!

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Jishka

@Asad08

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Awesome update it was simply beautiful!!! Continue soon and plz follow pm the next parts

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

aww, this was a wonderful part❤️
i had happy tears at the end, at the realisation😃
i enjoyed his suffering. he totally deserved it and brought it upon himself. cant believe he howled at daadi too...
even though im super angry at him for calling her an orphan again and that too from the road😡 i liked when he acknowledged he has Lost
and im a sucker for happy endings. i hope this ends on a good note😆
thanks for 2 chapters today🤗
take care

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Samira

@mishti4maan

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

this is amazing!!! please tell me there's another part! :)

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#29

brilliant update..the emotions were just perfect..really good...👏

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Navin

@napstermonster

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+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Illuminati07
Why am I having a feeling that Anika is married? I hope she is.. I'm pissed as hell as well sooo
I love ur writing

Hi! I cant recall having seen you here before, but I absolutely remember you from other forums so I'm loving the articulate writers and commenters all showing up here! Thanks for commenting! And as for this story--I'm PISSSED off, and today's episode with the random colored-lighting shots of a pensive Shivaay didn't quench jack for me...aage aage dekho..😉

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