One Shot-The Paths We Take. COMPLETED-Author's Note Pg 11 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Brilliant ending. And not all stories need a happy ending to be beautiful...
Loved it!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Finally!!!!!! I thought you forgot you have an os to update. Noo no no sad ending .I cried looking at shivay condition but I guess you reap what you sow.His cutting remarks on her khoon n khandan was really cruel anika deserved to move on.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Well everyone's mostly spoken about how your ending was really different and empowering but I'll say my fave bit was prinkus personal acp❤️ahaha
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh my God, Fianc? You honestly can't be anymore cruel than this.

Poor poor Shivaay. Just when he wanted to take that leap . . . is that Daksh by the way? And how Tia was exposed?


You have to write another part. Their story can't end like this.



PS update your Index and add IB stories, please?
Edited by indiantvlove - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
a brilliant story that soothed the hearts of many people!
Thanks alot for this much needed sane 3 shorts!
Great going!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey so as usual I found this late! So me!
This is as real as it gets not just for our SSO but for the people out there who take their loved ones for granted. And as much as I want to justify everything going on TV bcoz hell yeah I love to watch these two great actors create magic out of the things the have been given, I want this to come true.
No matter how many wonderful adjectives I would use to describe your writing skills, I know they won't be enough.
This is beautiful & in all the ways possible.
Edited by poemssyndrome - 9 years ago

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